rewriting fear makes love update CHApter 1 updated on pg 6

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kritika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
nice..

thank you 😊

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kritika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Vivirti_Suvian2
I'm liking this character whose gangster keep going love this kiind of character alot

thank you so much i m glad you like it ... 😊

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kritika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: wittydragon
Awsum stry with awsum cocept,i'm madly,deeply,addictively in love with ur writing style & all ur FF so i couldn't select the 3 till nw which u asked😆.And i also want u 2 continue it,gangstar & princess awsum concept 👍🏼 👏.[I jst cnt stop myself frm cmmenting whn i see ur FF nt thinking whether u'll like it or nt😆];P
Cnt wait 2 know wht happens nxt

well because of you or my readers who want me to continue this FF i m doing this because of them .. i can see that you are really addictive with my all stories and i m really glad ... thank you so much for sweet lovely comment you gave ... and your comment indeed motivating me ... so i should continue 😳

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kritika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Twinkle_alisha
heyyy kritz its fab... as u know I'm not using india forums... but I had msged u on Facebook... 😊

that ur every story is beautifully written plus I liked so muchhh yr stories... be cox it never bores all.
lol u use language that makes me laugh a lot... 😊 😃

firstly thank you so much for the comment i know in these days you are not using india forums but as a regular reader you read my all stories and comment as well and if you are busy you messaged me on fb and do appreciate my work thank you so much for motivating me and like my stories as well 😳😳😳

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kritika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: cuteariya
interesting concept
continue plz

thank you 😳

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kritika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: 7APK
Wow !!!! Mind Blowing...
Uday is a Gangster...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Prologue...
Loved it...
Continue Soon...
Thanks for the PM... 😳

thank you

yes he is a gangster

dhaniyawaad

i m glad you like my prologue

thank you 😳

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Aaish8
Amazing and wonderfull prologue👏 ap ko continue zror krni chahye 😊

thank you i m glad aapko pasand aaya i surly do continue 😳😳

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kritika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

haye everyone here i m updating a character sketch and in this CS there is lot of changes please read and share your views ... and do like button and i m also updating the second CS TODAY so please have patience ... Thank you

CHARACTER SKETCH

UDAY VEER SINGH : HE IS GOD for the poor he always do right things but his work is illegal he transported illegal thinks that's why he had very strong connections to political parties and many politicians so he never get arrested or if he did he easily get bailed because of connections he had...In India ... every single person do respect him poor people did because of his kindness and rich people did because of his thrilling stories and they scared of him and there is one more reason that every cop in his pocket so no one can dare to mess with him... he is rude with them who make him this way... he never chosen this path but his destiny choose this way for him he never get love to anyone nor his family ... he doesn't believe in love !!! for him love is just waste of time in his family there is one person whom he loved n do respect and that is his small sista ... !!! (well everything is changed soon 😆😆)

PRINCESS MANYTA KUMARI: she is cute bubbly and a dreamy girl who leaves in fantasy ... like one day his prince charming come on horse and pick her up and she ran away with him ... and they both happily live after The End 😆😆 well she is a princess so has alright to live in fantasy she believe's one day her dream will be come true she loved by her family ... her family always treat her like a small kid because she is the smallest person in the family she never argue with elders she never hurt anybody in her life she is bit dumb sometimes but in next moment she understand what it means as she is a true princess everyone loves her personality.. she is so full of life she loves her dad n there relationship like a bff type so she told everything to his father and her father gave her advice... she had a brother whom she love the most his brother alwys treat like a small baby her mom truly loved her ... !!!.. she is very nostalgic type but her life will be changed ... soon !!!

arman : He is a big brother of manyta he truly loved her ... her wish is his command like any brother he teased her... he fight with her but when she need him he always stand beside her ... he is bit possessive ... at the same time understanding !!!

unnati : she is udayveer small sister she has a cute personality but she doesn't talk to anyone except his brother and raghu...she loved her brother !!! she is main victim in her family she knows everything about everyone but she kept silent ... because she doesn't have energy to fight with her own family her family doesn't want her to continue her studies but some how she protest ... and she won but in one condition mata ji gave her a time when she complete her 3rd year she get married with a person who will choose by mata ji she have some feeling for raghu but she never told anyone because she knows her destiny never make them together

jay: best frnd of manyta... !!! for her she is more than best frnd sisters love

jagat: he is the one who is responsible for this love story ... because of him the love story begins ... !!!

Edited by -Kritika- - 9 years ago

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

here i m updating second CS please read and enjoy

THE 2ND CHARACTER SKETCH

raghu (raghav) : He is the right hand for uday raghu is the small brother for him he always respect and follows uday's command whether he is right or not he knows everything about uday his personal & professional life both . for uday he the only trust worthy person no one can replace him... raghu lost his parents in childhood. Raghu's dad was watch man in jannat where uday lived in rajasthan uday and raghu knows each other since from childhood he know uday's past . he have feeling for unnati but never tell her because of uday ...

kayavati :she is bond leader eldest family member in jannat she do what she want she is master mind she is the one who make uday's personality down she make his life hell she always taunt uday and make him regret for his deeds in her family everyone call her mata ji ... everyone respect her she is bit political n she take every decision for her family ... uday call her ( vo aurat ) (that women) he never said her name or any relation ... with her nor he care about her

grijraj : uday's dad bit polite never talk to anyone... because of some reason he lost his voice ... and he always live in his room ... he alwys look outside from window and thinking about something ...

maya : uday's chachi (aunt) 1 year elder from uday she always being seductive with uday she try to bit cozy with him ... but she never succeed ...

arjun: maya's husband and uday's chahu (uncle) he hates uday more than anything ... he loves to spend time with other women but now his mission is he do one night stand with manyta (IF YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN)

kritz 😳😳

Edited by -Kritika- - 9 years ago

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cuteariya

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

poor uday what a disgusting families he got
I feel really bad for both uday & unnati 😭
eww that maya trying to seduce uday how disgusting women she is chichi hokar bhi 😡
like wife like husband kamina want to have 1 night stand with manyata 😡
hope uday will get unnati to marry raghu
continue plz

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