rewriting fear makes love update CHApter 1 updated on pg 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guyz.. i m here with my old concept well every body knows about this concept fear makes love the story of gangster... and the princess... i have many stories IN THIS FORUMS so i want to know shall i continue this story or not ?
and if i continue this story so i do lots of changes.. so please tell me

prologue

dear dairy ...

haye dairy how are you ? well i think you absolutly fine because you are non living thing but you know what its really difficult to being living thing.. you know why ? because living thing have a feeling emotions sometime these feelings are nagative and sometimes these feelings are positive like my moods swings but the most difficult emotion is love you never described this emotion...when you are in love with someone you doesn't feel or know about that but when the person gone from your life suddenly you realise i have some feelings for that person you start missing that stranger...deep thoughts right ? but this all things happen to me well i don't know what happened to me ? there is something wrong but what i don't know... it has been 2o days my life was changed i mean everything is changed i am changed !!! wait a sec am i changed ? not properly i guess but something is very strange to me did i missed him... not possible !!

what the hell i m yuvrani of devghar ... n i m fell in love with a monster who doesn't have any feelings? who doesn't have heart? who never respect others...not even his family n ya how can i forget who will try to KIDNAPPED me ... how can I LOVE WITH GANGSTER ?

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Vivirti_Suvian2 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I'm liking this character whose gangster keep going love this kiind of character alot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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u wrote this ff...I read up to when manveer got married...Are u reposting them...or changing the storyline...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

u wrote this ff...I read up to when manveer got married...Are u reposting them...or changing the storyline...

actually i m doing both i do reposting this story n do some changes as well ...but in one condition when i get good response from readers
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsum stry with awsum cocept,i'm madly,deeply,addictively in love with ur writing style & all ur FF so i couldn't select the 3 till nw which u asked😆.And i also want u 2 continue it,gangstar & princess awsum concept 👍🏼 👏.[I jst cnt stop myself frm cmmenting whn i see ur FF nt thinking whether u'll like it or nt😆];P
Cnt wait 2 know wht happens nxt
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Posted: 9 years ago
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heyyy kritz its fab... as u know I'm not using india forums... but I had msged u on Facebook... 😊

that ur every story is beautifully written plus I liked so muchhh yr stories... be cox it never bores all.
lol u use language that makes me laugh a lot... 😊 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow !!!! Mind Blowing...
Uday is a Gangster...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Prologue...
Loved it...
Continue Soon...
Thanks for the PM... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing and wonderfull prologue👏 ap ko continue zror krni chahye 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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