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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetmishthi

Hey...hi really a nice update waiting for manveer romance👏



Thanq for your reply.. 😊
ManVeer romance is not far.. 😉
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Wow super!!
very Interesting & perfect
really touching
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Wow super!! Thank You..
very Interesting & perfect Really..

really touching Indeed
thanx for pm U r welcome 😊



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simi di, i started reading it, just read the 1st chapter, very well written.👏👏👏 plz add me 2 ur pm list😃😛😊
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simi di, i started reading it, just read the 1st chapter, very well written.👏👏👏 Thank You sis 😊 plz add me 2 ur pm list😃😛😊 I sure will 😊

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CHAPTER 6



Next Day
At Devgarh Palace
Maharaj Prithvi and his family has come (Shalini is Maharaj Prithvi's wife and Jagat is his son)
Inside :
DS : welcome all my dears

MP : Ghani Khama Ma sahib

DS : Khama Ghani
Jagat touches her feet
DS : Khush rahiye beta. So tell me did you all remember us in USA

Anmol comes : No we didn't

DS : Anmol!!!

Anmol : Just kidding DS. How can I ever forget my sweeet DS? hmm

DS : Yes I know you can't. come sit

Anmol wishes everyone and takes a seat
DS : How are you Shalini beta

Shalini : I am very well ma sahib. How are you?

DS : I am also ok

Jagat : Only ok dadi sahab! You are always great.

DS : I am fine beta

Anmol : Jagat is right DS. you are always great but now.. what happened

DS : It's nothing like that beta

MP : the kids are right ma sahib you are not well

DS : maharaj aap bhi! Hum theek hain

Shalini : ab hum paraaye ho gaye kya ma sahib jo aap humse kuch share ni kar sakte

DS : Shalini why did you ever think like that

Jagat : Then tell us na Dadi saab

DS sighs and says : It's about manyata... It has been 15 yrs since manyata has been lost or I'd rather say kidnapped and she has not been found yet

MP : Why do you stress yourself ma sahib. we'll find her soon

Jagat : Yeah we'll dadi sahab

DS : Jagat my child if I were an ordinary Grandmother I would never lose hope of finding manyata but being the Rajmata I have to look that everything is perfect

Shalini : Everything IS perfect Ma sahib

DS : no Shalini it isn't.

MP : what is bothering you ma sahib

DS : I am getting older and I want an heir to the throne. One who in need would be ready to sacrifice, one who would always consider his estate more important than his personal comforts. I always wanted manyata to be the heir as I always saw her as a replica of myself, no difference at all. But now I don't have time to keep waiting for manyata. I think that now its time for me to declare Anmol as the Yuvraj of Devgarh estate.

Anmol : no, DS.. not me. it was never mine to begin with

DS : Anmol don't you ever think like that. Devgarh is your estate. You are the rightful heir to the throne.

MP : Ma sahib please rethink over your decision. I know it has been very long time since manyata's kidnapping but still we should wait.. at least one more year.. Just one more year after that we'll accept whatever you say.I have this intution that manyata will be found very soon

DS : Jagat beta can you wait your entire life for manyata's return

Jagat : Dad is asking for only one more year dadi sahib uske baad aapka jo bhi faisla hoga wo humein manjoor hoga

DS : I think you are right! I have already considered this with Brij and Komal and they too said that we should wait.

Anmol : Chill DS everything is settled now.

DS smiles and : Jagat and Anmol why don't you both go shopping today. You came back just now why don't you go and enjoy

Anmol : hey that's a good idea What say jagat bro

Jagat : Yeah we'll go in the evening ok

Anmol : cool!




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At Jaigarh university
Priya, manya and Unnati are talking
Unnati : Hey girls I have a surprise for you two

Priya : What is it

Unnati : Any guesses

Manya : Umm it's your birthday?

Unnati : no

Priya : a party at your place

Unnati : no

Manya : what is it plsss tell

Unnati : ok so here goes... my dada...

Priya : It's his birthday party.. I got it!!!

Unnati : No silly at least listen first.. My dada and his friends are going on a hike and he asked me if I wanted to join. They go every year and I used to ask them to take me too but I was very young that time but now I am a grown up girl and got this opportunity so what say do you both wanna join me??

Priya : Hike!..it sounds so adventurous. I wanna go too

Unnati : Done!! What about you manya

Manya : ummm aa

Priya : she will go too

Manya : when ever did I say that

Priya : Just now in your mind...

Unnati : Great! yipee its going to be so much fun

Uday comes with his friends
Uday : Choti

Unnati : Dada we all are going with you this time

Shaurya : where are you going to with uday

Priya : on the hike!

Vijay : when was that decided

Uday : Just umm Yesterday

Vijay : why

Unnati : Don't you want us to join you guys

Manya : Its ok we won't go

Uday : what! My dear choti will go (points at manya ) and you too

manya : what if I don't wanna go

Priya : oye you will go ok

Manya : ok whatever

Vijay : so girls you are joining us on hike so likewise why don't you join us shopping for the trip this evening.

Priya : yeah sure why not

Manya : Unnati umm when are we going

Unnati : umm Tomorrow right dada

Uday : right and for the weekend.

Unnati : so shopping... done?

All : done...




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Evening at Shopping mall
Priya : Attack guys!!!

Vijay : Aakramannn!

Uday : Stop it! Boys lets go. Girls you go to your section and get what you want. choti give me a call when you are done

Unnati : ok lets go
They start moving towards their respective sections.


With the girls
As they are going a guy passed by them and dropped his wallet. Manya saw it and
Manya : Wait Girls.. That guy dropped his wallet. Wait till I return this

Priya : I say we both are going to that section. why don't you go, return it and meet us there

manya : okay
She goes.

Manya to the guy : wait.. excuse me.. hello
(it's Anmol )
Anmol : why do I think someone's calling me
He turns around and saw manya running towards them.

Anmol : Jagat bro wait

Jagat : what

Manya comes : actually you dropped your wallet there.
Anmol : oh my gosh, thank you ummm ur name?

Manya : Manya

Anmol : Manya, thank you very much. By the way, hi I am Anmol

Manya : Hi Anmol. I'd be leaving now
She looks everywhere but doesn't find priya and Unnati

Anmol : What this soon?! Let me at least say thanks properly manya. How can I help you?

Manya : umm I think I am lost in this place

Anmol : ok then let me help you. come with us

They go. Uday is watching them from a distance.
Uday : Not so soon Anmol.. not so soon. Jagat (he smirks) Your Dear fiance will come back, sure she will but not so soon. You have to wait my friends.

With Jagat, Anmol and Manya
Manya spots them : there they are! Thank you...

Anmol : you are always welcome. umm could you give me your number?

Manya : what

Jagat : no nothing... never mind

Anmol : Yeah I was just kidding!

Manya : oh okay, bye then

Anmol : Bye...

She leaves. Jagat slaps Anmol on his shoulder
Jagat : Kisi ladki ko to chod diya karo

Anmol : Chodo yaar humein to koi ladki ghaas hi nhi daalti

Jagat : Chalo ab jo karne aaye hain wo to karlein

Anmol : Yeah let's go
They too leave


With Uday and his friends (while shopping)
Vijay : Uday tell me one thing, Why did you ask the girls to join us

Uday : Choti wanted to so

Shaurya : Naa it's not just about Unnati. there is something cooking in your head isn't it?

Uday smirks

Vijay : Something evil evil evil. I tell you

Shaurya : what is it?

Uday : I am done guys. You carry on while I go nd see the girls

He leaves.



With the girls
Manya : priya help me naa I don't know what to buy.. I've never been on a hike before

Priya : Umm Take something comfortable to wear.. like t-shirts and shorts or anything you want

Manya : Can't I buy suits

Uday comes : No you can't. You are going on a hike and not a pooja

Priya : Uday can you just help her out.. Unnati is calling me so I'll be back in a few

Uday : I'll help choti

Priya : no she's calling me.. you know girly things (she winks)

Uday : ooh kay. Then I'll help Manya

Priya : Great!
She goes leaving the two alone.
Uday : so Manya, what Is your size?

Manya : What size

Uday : God help me! Wait I'll give you some t-shirts, try them and select your size. ok?

Manya : ok

Uday selects some and gives them to her.
Uday : Here you go... Try and tell or wait try these too. (he gives her some shorts)

Manya : Thesee n.not these

Uday : Why not

Manya : I.I

Uday : Just try them.. if you don't like them, don't buy ok

Manya : ok. umm where's the trial room.

Uday : come.
He leads her to the trial room.
Uday : there you go
Manya goes inside. Uday says to himself, "Aage aage aur bhut changes aane waale hain manyaTA.". He smirks.
Uday waits for manya outside the trial room. 5 minutes, 10 minutes, 20 minutes... "What the heck!" he said irritated, "How long is she gonna take?" He knocks on the door, "Manya are you asleep or awake! Open the door fast.. its getting late.." he said.
"I am coming in a minute"

"You have taken 20 whole minutes and still want 1more, Come out now or I'll break the door"

"Why are you getting angry? I said na I am coming"

"Fine.. come fast"
He turns around and manya opens the door.
"Hey", she said.

"What took you so lo..." he stops looking at manya. The T-shirt she wore was highlighting her curves very beautifully and her shorts exposed her beautiful and maintained legs. She was today looking every inch of the princess she was. "You look good", he said.

"Thank you", she blushed.

Priya comes there along with Unnati. "Manya is that you? Yes, you are... You are looking very beautiful. I must say Uday Your choice is very nice", said Priya while continuously staring at manya.

"I'll just change and come" said manya. Her cheeks were burning by now due to the looks everyone was giving her.

"Make sure you buy those..." added Unnati.

"Choti have you got your things", asked uday.

"Yes dada.. I've got everything", she replied

"Very well then lets get going"

"ok dada"
Manya comes out of the room and says, "That's it for me guys"

"Ok then lets go", said Uday

They pay the bills and start for their respective homes when Manya asks Unnati, "Unnati when will we be leaving tomorrow? "

"Umm tomorrow 8:00 am, okay"

"Okay"

They all leave, excited about the next day but knows what tomorrow has to offer. What this hike has in store for them...



CHAPTER ENDS


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nyc,😉But is Manya still wearing glasse😕s??
Anyways, I can just imagine how Manyata looked and the update was amazing👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ManVeerObsessed

Nyc,😉 Thanks 😊 😊 But is Manya still wearing glasse😕s?? Yes, she does. She was changing so had removed them for the time being 😉



Anyways,I can just imaginehow Manyata looked Angelic 😉 and the update was amazing👍🏼 Thanks again 😊

Edited by simi.k. - 10 years ago

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