(JOURNEY OF A WIFE -Bk 6) I'LL LOVE U TILL THE END!!! Imp NOTE- pg 91

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andy.a

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Navi, would jai come out of coma?

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NAVINA

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Originally posted by: huma12
awsssmmm update nivi manyata make uday embarass Make A Baby hehehehehe Well, she didn't know his phone will broadcast it to the world 😆

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good update..thank you for the PM..😊 Welcome😃!

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love it

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NAVINA

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: _Annesha_

Hey Navina jiji, Hi Anni😃
At first I got shocked
By the way Jaggat reacted
It showed that Jai died
But thank you so much
for not killing her Awww - (don't thank me yet😈 - can still do it u know😉)

I hope some day she will
regain consciousness Let's hope so.
and poor Jaaz was discarded by her father
Here I cannot exactly blame Jaggat
He almost lost a person he loved the most
He did need time to understand the situation That's absolutely correct.

And thanks to our handsome prince to Make
him realize it Yep - who better than Yuvraaj UdayVeer😳.

Awn 3 ladies fighting for Uday
I wish I was in the scene
I would have pushed all of them
and claim my right on my Prince Charming Udita would've pushed u aside, and said BAD ANNI😉😆 (Actually I also wish to get a slice of him😉☺️)

Thanks for the pm' You're welcome!
Can't wait for the next update Ahh - but u have to wait 6 more days😆.
huggs
Happy Friendship Day Thank u and the same to u 🤗

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DaddyzPwincess

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Amazing update
Loved it to the core
Aww ,udita is so cute , I hope Jai gets well soon
Poor uday , the last part was embarrassing
Thx for an amazing update , ur a very creative writer !

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andy.a

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Navi, just wondering if there is any sort of conspiracy behind anuskha's sudden appearance after 6 years?

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NAVINA

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz

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ParusDivs

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Chapter 14

Preparation begins for Udita's B'day, !!! .... She is turning 2 !(If am not wrong)..!!! ...Awww...😆 Manyata want to toilet train her, ... But Uday is still ok with her wearing nappy 😆... " he touched her bottom to make sure there'd be no more "accidents"; this time on him!" Lol 😆😆 he is so scared of her Muthru Visarjan 😲 (in Vijay bhai's language 🤣) ... Anyways the tiny tot is slowly turning as a Jungli billi ... so cute the way Uday telling her that it's her B'day coming !! 😳 ... ..and both her father and Massi planning for a B'day party, . ... Poor Manyata is going to persuade him to pause his party and give the chance to Jay .. shoo shweet Udita baby, The great multi millionaire's daughter only wants three lollipops for her b'day , ... (Ask me once Uday, .. will give u a list 🤣 ) ... he keep on asking but Udita has no idea about the special day ... Manyata's seduction is in full swing ... He can't even concentrate on his work properly due to the over dose of her love .. whereas manyata went to an extent to seduce him even in public places ... What else she can do to accomplish her mission ... all possible way she 's trying.. 😆 Uday was indeed dumbstruck .. poor soul, How much can he control his emotions? 🤣...

Finally they are off to washroom, and Uday took all the precautions including a soundproof system 😳 ..They can't afford facing Udita 's questioning once again .. well prepared👏 😆..But finally Manyata became fool🤣. Uday is Uday after all, he knew everything far before, 😛 and still enjoyed her seductive ways and act as so innocent and got good use of his wifey.. ... Udita want a lelo hossey.. 😆 cute 😳 but now frm wr Uday bring one?

Singh is family is at Jai garh 😊 and Uday is at his ancestral home ... back to his good old days ... the real rajwaada is back 😛 Horse riding and his Faviourite Sultaan, so nostalgic !!!... good to see the threesome together in Jaigargh

But what a sad ending. 😔 in the course of saving Udita, Sultaan and Uday got injured 😭😭 and what made more painful that Uday cursing himself for the accident, 😕 Sultaan is begging for a mercy killing by the hands of his master and Uday lost one of his favorite companion 😭Very much unexpected 😕 !!!! Their happy moments ended as a miserable one !!!

Edited by ParusDivs - 10 years ago

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ParusDivs

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Chapter 15

Can't see Uday in pain .. He is shattered mentally and physically.. his injury and sultaan's death!!! 😭, will it really turned as a bad luck for him? ... Thank god his surgery went successful, ..can't see my strong hero in a physically weak state...

Wawww😳, Uday surprised manyata with his gift, once again her premonition got wrong, she thought , it will be a 'Typical Uday' type gift .. but this time not 😆😆... His khaandani Bangles ..Lovely❤️.. Manyata opened her gift at the right time, and she won in bringing Uday's smile back.. (That's why u made her this long to open the gift box 😉)

Poor Brij 😉, Plaese give him promotion from unkal to nansaheb 🥺.. He s right she is spending most of her time with either her parents or her father's family... and giriraj will remain her favorite grandfather ever .. now Uday should think about calling Brij from uncle to Nanansaheb, Atleast for Udita ..just to taught her ... 😆😆

Udita's B'day party is in full swing .. Finally she got her Future fiance (But sasur ji Uday ji is not convinced yet 🤣) ... Shalendra ji u can made a future pair only at Ur own risk 🤪 .. Don't know why Uday dislike poor Ajeeth ..he has payed well for following and helping the tiny tot .. Almost hanged death by Uday's hand. 😆😆. for the first time Uday made a big mistake, and refused to apologies,😈 I like it 👏👏.. Don't bow Ur head before anyone,😡 .. But he may rethink about Udita and Ajeeth's rishta ... Oh man,!! he is so possessive about his daughter. I wish I am Udita, so I can stuck to Uday all the time 😆😆.. Again he is in his raging mode only for Udita .. So caring and protective .. again and again he proves himself as a super possessive father .. just loved it..

didn't expect such a horrible twist in Jai's track. . finally she risk her life due to those high heels 😲, shocking and pathetic, how much she waited for her daughter.. (Little Jazz born on Udita's B'day!!! Same Birth date.😊. )But what had happened..😲 Couldn't even got a chance to took her in her arms and gave motherly love. . Loved Uday's concern for the baby and Jai,, a very responsible brother in law.. .. 👏👏... Udita got a new 'toy' to play with

Thanks for a long update at the end of the thread 🥳🤗 ... We enjoyed laughed, and cried.
.. The update was a good mixture of variety of emotions
... Hat's off to u .. !!!!!
Thanks for the PM's 🤗

Edited by ParusDivs - 10 years ago

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NAVINA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: ..IshqShava..
Wow man!! how could anyone write so perfectly!!👏 Nooo - don't say that Vibha ... my head is already so large; how will I fit through a doorway 🤣?
seriously, you should consider publishing it as a Novel...😃 Writing is just my hobby, if I were to turn it into an occupation ... i'd lose my passion for it😳. (but thank u for thinking it worthy😃)

now coming back to my comment about the update, the first part was so touching😭 Poor Jagat so J is not dead but in coma...hope you are planning to revive her sometime in upcoming chapters😉 Actually ...I wasn't going to revive her, but the public is making me rethink my stance😉. and thank god (thank u) for Uday's man to man talk with Jagat, that poor baby got her dad back... Had to bring him back into the picture, the poor baby was already 1 parent down.

and the women in Uday's life...😆 they got an equal share of the Choco pie❤️ but one wanted more than her share😛😆 Uday's girls will never be satisfied😆.

feeling so excited to read the next chapter...Thanks for PM🤗 Welcome😊.
(btw Happy sisters day🤗 ... and a VERY belated wish to u too 🤗)