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andy.a

@andy.a

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Maddy

@THEfanOFheartz

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

No no ,don't run away!😆

It was fab!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!❤️

I bet Navi loved it? 😉

Aw!! Uday forgot her birthday butt that surprise was so cute!❤️

I loved it!👏 😳

You should write more OS's soon!😉

Do pm when u do write a new OS!😃

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz
No no ,don't run away!😆 i had run halfway, alredy😆
It was fab!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!❤️ really??
I bet Navi loved it? 😉 yes, she told me that she liked it😳
Aw!! Uday forgot her birthday butt that surprise was so cute!❤️
I loved it!👏 😳 aw!! thanks, actually i got this idea on the eve of navi's bday😃
You should write more OS's soon!😉 i dont know, but will try to write
Do pm when u do write a new OS!😃 sure i would😳

thanks so much for the lovely comment😃, it made my day😃

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Maddy

@THEfanOFheartz

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: andy.a
thanks so much for the lovely comment😃, it made my day😃 Aw Yw! Its my pleasure anyway u deserve a good comment it was fab!👍🏼

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

Extremely lovely OS!!!

Very cute & romantic.

👏

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Kavya

@Kavi.Kapoor

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

I'm so sorry Andy ,

me like button is not working😡.

But I loved da OS.

At first when I read the title- I thought it was a murder-mystery 😆. But it wasn't, thank God for that 😉. I love reading OS's and dis is now 1 of me favourites!

Superb, I cant belirve it was your first attempt - u must write more. U write very simply and it makes it more beautiful.

Why haven't I been pmed?

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Hi Andy😃 , I'm so delayed in commenting ... I should be first , but I'm NOT 😭, I'm so sorry! I loved my present , even though it was 60 days delayed 😉 ... I know what you're thinking - you are thinking that I am yet to give YOUR PRESENT which is 142 days LATE . Well ... it's coming , I'll post it tomorrow for u. Only hope u like it 😔 ... I have great doubts regarding it 😕. Anyways , coming to this OS - it was brilliant! I don't know why u don't write Os's ... you're clearly very good at it. And nobody would say this was your first attempt. I think Kavya mentioned that when she read the title , she felt it to be a murder-mystery ... well, that's the same feeling I had when I read the PM that day, almost 2 months ago 😆. But it wasn't anything like THAT , instead it was so sweet and romantic and utterly beautiful! Manyata had so much expectation from her husband ... but he let her down badly 😔. Forget the roses , and the cake ... and the ring ; SHE DID NOT EVEN GET A WISH FROM HIM!!!! Bad Uday ... very disappointing! Thank God for Ramesh (BTW Andy - why is Uday's PA , usually a MALE when u write😕?). Ramesh did an outstanding job - all within half an hour! VERY IMPRESSIVE - he should get a large bonus for that 😆. Awww, the best part was that Manyata knew that Uday forgot her birthday ... it was sad , yet sweet at the same time! (I doubt I would've forgiven Uday as easily as Manyata did him 😉). Fabulous Os Andy! Do write loads more!!!!!!!!!! Thank u for a splendid gift! Love you

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rockingal09

@rockingal09

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

Oww lovely OS andy
Uday forgot her b'day bt still he tried to surprise his princess nd pretended dat he didnt forget bt d problem is Manyata knws him very well 😆
keep writng like dis.. 👍🏼 whatevr u write jst post it bcz v all luv ur writng.. 😉 tc

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Nishaya

@Nash..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Fantastic OS..

Firstly, even I got disappointed how Uday forgot about Manyata's birthday. That could really upset any woman if their husband were that forgetful but Thanks to Ramesh..things went really ROMANTIC at the end.

Though through Ramesh yet at least Uday by the end of the day proved his love. Superb.

And finally Manyata knowing the truth.,made it all the more AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFUL. Kudos to you. BEAUTIFUL WORK!

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Priyanka

@capriya

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

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Hai Andy , this is nice os. Thanks for the PM.

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