Manveer os:I Know The Truth!!!! - Page 2

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Andy😃 ,hi navi!!! I'm so delayed in commenting ... I should be first , but I'm NOT 😭, I'm so sorry! no problem!! atleast you read it first na!!!
I loved my present , even though it was 60 days delayed 😉 .i sent it to you on april 12 darling!!!!😳 forgot ????.. I know what you're thinking - you are thinking that I am yet to give YOUR PRESENT which is 142 days LATE .i got it and am sooo happpy!!!!😳
Well ... it's coming , I'll post it tomorrow for u. Only hope u like it 😔 ... I have great doubts regarding it 😕.i read it and i have no doubts, so no worries😳
Anyways , coming to this OS - it was brilliant! I don't know why u don't write Os's ..i dont write because i suck at it. you're clearly very good at it. And nobody would say this was your first attempt.well, it is INDEED my first attempt
I think Kavya mentioned that when she read the title , she felt it to be a murder-mystery ... well, that's the same feeling I had when I read the PM that day, almost 2 months ago 😆.he he he, i wanted to fool everyone, and i guess i did😃
But it wasn't anything like THAT , instead it was so sweet and romantic and utterly beautiful!really? aw!!! thanks navi😳 Manyata had so much expectation from her husband ... but he let her down badly 😔.he forgot, darling Forget the roses , and the cake ... and the ring ; SHE DID NOT EVEN GET A WISH FROM HIM!!!! Bad Uday ... very disappointing!he he he, i wanted to get uday in everyone's bad books
Thank God for Ramesh (BTW Andy - why is Uday's PA , usually a MALE when u write😕? i dont want uday to get distracted😳 with beautiful ladies hence al his PA are men). Ramesh did an outstanding job - all within half an hour! VERY IMPRESSIVE - he should get a large bonus for that 😆.he will and uday would not think twice😳
Awww, the best part was that Manyata knew that Uday forgot her birthday ... it was sad , yet sweet at the same time!she knows her husband well, so she was touched how he tried to mask his forgetfullness😳
(I doubt I would've forgiven Uday as easily as Manyata did him 😉).i would forgive him, thats why manyta forgave him😳
Fabulous Os Andy!thnaks so much navi!!!
Do write loads more!!!!!!!!!!i hope i get time😳
Thank u for a splendid gift!welcome navi!!!!!
Love you love you sooo much😳

Originally posted by: -K.Kapoor-

I'm so sorry Andy ,

me like button is not working😡. its ok kavya😃

But I loved da OS.thanks so much 😃

At first when I read the title- I thought it was a murder-mystery 😆. maybe because i like writing such stories😳 But it wasn't, thank God for that 😉. I love reading OS's and dis is now 1 of me favourites!aw!!! thanks so much kavya

Superb, I cant belirve it was your first attempt - u must write more. U write very simply and it makes it more beautiful.thanks so much!!! i just tried , i am glad that you liked it

Why haven't I been pmed?i did not know you would read my word, sorry for that😳

Originally posted by: --Zinay--

Extremely lovely OS!!!

Very cute & romantic.

👏

Originally posted by: andy.a

thanks sooo much for such a beautiful comment!!! just loved it
i am so happy that you liked my gift!!!
you inspired me to write it I loved my gift ... can't wait for my next birthday😉.