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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice and intresting cs ...
Seems its very intresting
Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Awesome cs waiting for the chap
update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i love it
u rock plz upadte soon
why dadisassab a sercret charater
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asyalover

What about manyata character

well see on first pg
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one...😉 CS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dangerous creature

Chapter one

In this planet we have many dangerous creature some were animals n some were not existing in this world but most dangerous creature was our mind who control our body ...

In 2005 (F.I.I.T.E) a most famous medical collage in Dehradun I was sitting on the bench n luk at all students who was luking at me n passing my side.. well I m not luk like attractive person.. I m a normal girl who have big round spectacles.. in my hand I have a book "BE CARE FULL WHAT YOU WISH FOR ?" I must try to read this book but I can't because some people glares try to disturb my concentration ... but I was pretend that i m reading this book with full concentration

AMITA!! AMITA!! That voice again disturb my concentration I take a long deep breath n luk at up with irritating expression

AMITA DID YOU KNOW WHO WAS COMING IN OUR COLLAGE ?

NO !! I said straight n again try to concentrate on my book

ANYA GOEKA ...

For a moment I m just freeze ANYA GOEKA this word give me goosebumps in my whole body my ears just stop listening n one voice come across in my ears

PLEASE PERDON ME PLEASE !! sobbing continue

JUST ONE THINK REMEMBER MS. NEVER MESS WITH ANYA GOEKA!! she complete her sentence with smirk

AMITA?? AMITA?? ARE U LISTENING ? I came in reality n luk at up

YAA!! I said with confuse expression

WHERE R U LOST ? I TAKE YOUR NAME FOR TWICE BUT YOU ...

YA I WAS ... ACTUALLY I TALK YOU LATER ...!! I stand up n start collecting my all things

BUT AMITA WHAT HAPPENED ? ARE YOU OK ?

NO ACTUALLY ... I M NOT FEELING GOOD ... MAY BE I M ILL I take my all stuff n get out of there before she asked me what's wrong with me

I enter in locker room n go straight to my locker open it n take my bag ... in my mind I already decided that I never luk at her face again but now it's too late she was already enter in our collage

Ms. Anya Goeka welcome to our collage she put out her sunglasses n take it on her head n gave him a smirk

THANK YOU MR. VERDHAN !! she take her seat n straightly luk at him I HOPE U DON'T MIND WHEN I CALL U MR. VERDHAN she said pure straight n low voice

He luk at her with so much respect way NO ... I NEVER MIND he said nervously

SO MR. VERDHAN I...

Don't call me that Ms. Goeka he said again nervously

She rise her eyebrows SO WHAT SHOULD I CALL YOU ? she asked him

He luk at her n said with straight tone YOU SHOULD CALL ME DEAN !!

Anya smirk "DEAN" !!! she down her glares n said SO DEAN!! YOU KNOW WHY I M HERE ?

YA !!! UR DAD TOLD ME THAT YOU WANT TO STUDIE HERE ... I M REALLY GLAD MS. GOEKA he luk at her with impressive luk

SO DEAN I WANT TO CONTINUE ... TODAY IF YOU DON'T MIND ? she luk at him with doubt full luk

YA YA SURE !! WHY SHOULD I ? he said straight to her with cheer up smile .

She stood up n go straight to her way but stop in middle turn her face DON'T TELL HIM !!

He luk at up don't worry ms. Goeka I never told him ...

She nod at him n get out of the dean's office ..

...

HEY WAT'S UP DUDE?

GETTING BORE !! he said with irritating luk

DUDE U KNOW WHAT I HAVE BIGGEST NEWZ !! he said with excitingly

CONGRATULATIONS !! he take his hand n hand shake with him WHICH RADIO STATION GIVE THIS NEWS TO YOU ? he said with same exciting expression SHUT UP!!! YUDI ... I M SESRIOUS he said with irritating expression ... REALLY !! he said with shocking expression NOW THIS IS THE BREAKING NEWZ he said with smirk .. you don't want to listen na ? ok fine ... he turn his face with irritating expression he luk at him n said OK FINE TELL ME WHAT YOU HAVE ? he turn his face n said with excitingly YOU KNOW WHAT WHO IS COMING IN OUR COLLAGE ? he luk at him n said almost irritating luk NO !!! he luk at him n said ANYA GOEKA with excitingly

He luk at up n said with shocking luk "ANYA GOEKA" sister of "SHAURYA GOEKA" ...

Yes bhai !!!

He take his hand on his shoulder THANX MAN !! NOW ITS MY TURN SHARYA N YOU JUST WAIT N WATCH ... with evil smirk...

I was going in my way without luking anyone glares but... my bad luck I bump into a hard chest n crash on the ground ... my spectacle almost broken I lukd up n tried to recognize the person who was standing in front of me but I would not able to see that person properly that person took my spectacles from the ground n gave me gently ... I take it n place those spectacles on my nose I luk up n found out such a treacherous person in my whole life his eyez gave me various expressions ...

SHAURYA ? where are you man ? let's go DUDE we are already late

He continuously luking at me n my heart beat almost beating like jetpack

LET'S GO !!!

When he get out from there ... I take a relief sign

...

MISHIKA !!!! MISHIKA !!! MISHIKA !!! ITS GOAL MAN mishi I know you can do it !!

There just 20 minutes left ... did MISHIKA ARORA can take this goal ?

AFCOUSE SHE TAKE IT ... DO IT MISHI ...

How much you take a bet? That voice come across in his ears he luk at up n smirk

20 LAKSHS ... !!

Did she know about that ?

Anya did you really think she knows ?

Well !! I m not sure Ranveer

N IT'S A GOAL !!!

YES !!! he shout excitingly

Congratulations ranveer !! she luk at him with smirk

So what are you doing here ? n why shaurya didn't tell me about you ? wait a sec don't tell me shaurya did not know that you are here !! he said with shocking expression

BINGO !!! she nod for once

But why the hell are you here ?

I M...

HEY GUYZ !!! did you see how can I take this goal ? with excitingly

of cause how could we miss it ? she said with smile

ANYA !!

Both share a sweet hug ..

BY THE WAY MS. GOEKA HOWZ YOU ?

Perfectly fine !!

...

So MS.GOEKA I must say you not look like your brother ...

INTRESTING VERY VERY INTRESTING

NOW GAME WOULD BE BEGAIN MS.GOEKA with evil smirk

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Edited by -Kritika- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
just love it
this story will get intersting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
hey kritika
the update was very confusing
i mean amita knows anya
uday knows shaurya nad anaya
and i think he is planing something for anya
shaurya has done something to uday i guess
lets see
thanks for udate
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
an amazing update really loved it cant wait for the next part now do update soon and thanks for the pm

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