Manveer OS- Always a YES

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hola amigos!!!😉😉😉
surprised to see me??
god knows im updating my stories like after so many months.
well this OS is a gift from me to two of my sweet hearts
1st is
AYESHA as she gave me the sweetest news of she being pregnant
and 2nd is
NAVINA a token of thanks from my side for sending more than like 250 PMs for me.
well now enough of my bag bag please enjoy the OS


----MANVEER OS----

----ALWAYS A YES----

It was their 12th farewell. Oh man! She was so happy. Her happiness knew no bounds. She had waited for 2 long years. Can you imagine 2 long years for a single thing?? So finally he did propose her though she thought he never would but still. He was her love her first crush since the day she entered her college. Well yeah he was a guy on whom even the teachers used to drool over. He had dated almost every ho girl in that college but never thought he would propose her.

THE FAREWELL NIGHT,

Guy: hey manyata can I have a word with you outside alone plz?

Manyata: sure why not!

Both went out and the moment they entered the garden the guy was on his knees.

Guy: manyata singh, I know im very stupid to ask you this now on the last day of our college but still I love you will you be my girlfriend?

Manyata: a...are you sure me??

Guy: well as long as I know theres only one manyata in my life. Now will you please answer you know my legs are paining horribly.

Manyata makes him stand: oh im so so sorry.

Guy: so..?

Manyata nervously: so...um...wat?

Guy: is it a yes or no??

Manyata in a low voice:um... yes

Wouhhuuu the guy shouted

Guy: yes yes ive done it guys now you may come out from behind the trees.

His group came out from the bushes laughing and hooting...

His friend said: so uday you won the bet haan? Uday did prove that even the most dumb gal of our college can fall for you!!

Uday smirked. Sheena came out and held uday. "Sheena "oh man manyata hated this attitude queen so so much!! Manyata's world came crumbling down.

Manyata: uday wats all this?? You said you wanted to talk to me alone right?? You said you loved me then wats all this??

Sheena: oh really manyata?? Did you seriously think that a dumb fat girl like you would be his girl friend. Dream on babz this is surely not possible until he has a hot babe like me right uday baby?

Uday: ofcourse sweetheart. Look sorry manyata just don't take all this srsly. You know im not interested in you rather never was. It was just a bet to win.

Manyata was hell angry now: how could you stoop so low udayveer? You play with a gals feelings for a stupid idiotic bet. You are such a jerk.

Uday angry too: oh plz just look at face miss ugly duckling. Have you seen yourself in a mirror.

Just get lost okay!! And yeah wait.

He throws a chain at her feet.

Uday: keep this with you it will remind you that a handsome hunk like me had ever proposed you.

She saw them leaving one by one all enjoying the scene. She picks up the chain wipes her tears and with a new determination . " uday you played with my feelings today. You'll surely regret it uday. You would. I would change completely but not for you it would be for myself"

5 YEARS LATER...

All the newspaper were flashing the same topics all news channels had the same topic.

It was non other than THE RISING SUPERSTAR MANYATA SINGH.

MANYATA SINGH NOT ONLY AN OSCAR WINNER BUT ALSO A GREAT PERSONALITY.

INDIA'S RISING GLORY MANYATA SINGH

These were the only lines flashed everywhere..

She ws there. The fat ugly dumb duckling as the superstar of the country. Today she had everything fame money beauty fan following everything. But was she happy? HELL NO. the beautiful soul of her had died the day on that farewell. She ws so shattered by that one small prank that she was scared to love anyone. She hadn't met him since that day nor did she wish to but as said

" WHEELS OF FORTUNE CAN NEVER BE CONTROLLED. IT TAKES US IN RIGHT PLACE ON RIGHT TIME"

Oh damn! This traffic jam! Thought manyata.

Manyata: driver plz go and see wats the matter..

Driver: yes mam.

He comes back after seeing he matter.

D: mam therez been an accident on the road there. A person is lying there. I guess he was hit by the truck.

Manyata: what???

She gets down of the car and goes only to see people surrounding him no one ready to help.

Manyata shouted: wat kind of people are you all? Cant you help the poor soul instead of being the silent spectators?

Manyata with the help of her bodyguards took the man to hospital. He was injured badly. His face was torn out. The doctors immediately took him in the operation theatre as manyata sat there surrounded by gaurds. Evn in the hospital ppl were going crazy for getting a glimpse of her.

After a tedious work of 3 hours the docs finaly came out.

Manyata: doc hows he?

Doc: mam he is f9 out of danger but has many injuries. Like hez face has been half burnt and torn out. We can fix his face with surgeries but that would need time.

Manyata: have you got anything so that we could identify him??

Doc: well yeah we have got his wallet. Here take a look.

Manyata opened the wallet only to get the gravest shock of her life. It was uday! Her uday!tears welled up in her eyes. She touched the chain that hanged around her neck.

Doc: mam you know him?

Manyata: ye.. yes doctor I know him. I wou...would inform his family.

Uday: thank you mam, well you can meet him once he regains consciousness.

Manyata immediately informed his family members.

It had been 2 days since uday was unconscious and yet his family did not arrive.

A girl entered the hospital,

She came towards manyata.

Girl smiled: hi this is priya kapoor. Im udays fiance. Mam im a great fan of you.

Well that was definitely not what manyata had expected. Like usually ppl got scared when their close ones are in danger and here she was smiling and praising her and wat pricked the most was that she was uday's FIANCEE!!

Anger aroused in her while priya continued.

Priya: OMG I never thought I'll meet you. Im so lucky i..

Manyata cuts of in anger: oh plz will you just shut up? What kind of fiance are you?uday is lying there all wounded and here you are praising me? Where is his family?

The anger in her voice made priya shiver.

Priya: well.. umm.. yeah I was ... getti..getiing to that point..

This enraged manyata more: getting to that point?? Where the hell is his family??

Manyata almost screamed now.

Priya: they.. they are in Chicago with their elderson

Manyata: so call them here.

Priya: ye..yea I did but ud..uday being their stepson they were least bothere about him.

Just then the doc came out.

Doc: mam the patient is conscious you can meet him now.

Without waitng for a reply priya went in the room only to scream and faint right there.

The nurses brought her outside. While the doctors informed uday about his condition. That was such a heart breaking scene. Uday gave no reaction on this. Manyata was watching from outside, the only thing she noticed was the sadness and pain in udayz eyes. His family didn't care for him. His fiance ran away seeing him. Though Being the most famous hunk he was lonely. He never had a person who he could say his own family. Manyata felt bad for him.

10-15 days passed. Uday was recovering slowly. Manyata used to be there always but never went in front of him. She was passing by his room when she heard uday and priya talking.

Priya: im sorry uday but I cant do this.

Uday: but why priya? Why are you leaving me? You said you loved me right!

Priya: uday our marriage was just a contract between our parent. So I had to put this i-am-so-in-love act you know that right?

Uday: yes but.

Priya: no buts and ifs Uday. Our relationship ends right here. I cant live with a half burnt face like you. Im sorry.

She removed the ring and placed it in udays hand leaving the room. Uday just sat there immobile staring at the ring. He came out of his trance when a soft hand took the ring from his palm. His eyes shot up only to be shocked.

Uday: man..manyata..

He tries to get up. But manyata pushes him back telling him to lie down. He lowers his eyes.

The first he noticed was the chain that hanged around her neck. He lifted his hand to touch it but drawed it back after seeing the burnt marks. He turned his face away.

Manyata: uday please don't hide your face.

Uday: I think you shoul leave manyata. Im sure you wont be interested in seeing the half burnt man infront of you. And after what I did to you I don't think you want to see my face.

Manyata: you are right Uday I never wanted to see you but that doesn't mean I could ever get over you.

He's eys shot up only to be locked in her beautiful ones.

Uday's eye's welled up: im im sorrry man.. manyata. I shouldn't have..

Manyata keepts her finger on his lip

Manyata: shhh... past is past Uday. We have our present and future to live together.

Uday: but we cannot be together manyata.

Manyata: but why?

Uday: you wont be happy with me. You are a rising star. You can get any guy you want.

Manyata smiled: you know uday the day you proposed me even I thought the same that why did a handsome hunk like you propose me. Though I got its answers later but still that moment changed my life uday. If you wouldn't have done that. I still would have been the same fat ugly ducking.

I loved you a lot uday you cant even imagine.

Uday: but you cant love this face manyata.

Manyata: you know uday its said LOVE THE SOUL AND NOT THE FACE. REAL BEAUTY IS THE SOUL.

I loved you still love you and will always love you no matter what.

They both hugged each other.

Days passed by and udayveer had recovered completely.

The both sath on the garden bench.

Suddenly uday sits on downon ground on his knees.

Uday: manyata I know im very stupid to ask you again after 5 years. But this time seriously I love you will you be my wife?

Manyata imitating the last proposal said: are you sure me?

Uday: well as long as I know you are the only manyata in my life! Now will you please answer you know my legs are paining horribly.

Manyata makes him stand: oh im so so sorry.

Uday: so..?

Manyata nervously: so...um...wat?

Uday: is it a yes or no??

Manyata: well mr. Uday wats the proof that there s only one manyata?

Uday: hey that's cheating. Your next line should be a yes.

He pouts only to be hugged by manyata.

Manyata: aww you look so cute when you pout.

Well mr. uday it's a yes. A BIG YES.

IT WAS IT IS AND WILL ALWAYS BE A YES.

Uday slips the ring in her finger and places his lips on hers.

Uday: I love you manyata.

Manyata: I love you to uday.

THE END

~MAHI~

SO HOW BAD WAS IT??😆😆😆😆

ACHA THA KYA??

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ramya.reddy thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os
loved it
badme lamba comment dungi
abhi thoda busy hu
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was really heart warming OS...
loved how you showed the feeling of love. very nice and simple. beautifuly written!!!

thanxx for the pm!
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hayeee cute 😳 excited...

thanks


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Hey di, how you? 😊
Soo happy to see you again 😃
The os is marvellous ⭐️
Totally amazing 👏
You know there's a saying, What goes around comes around
This OS reminded me about it
Thanks for the pm 😊
Loved it ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oops the like button not working😡😔
Amazing update👏
A really nice and touching story😃
Do write more and more often😊
Edit: Thanks for the PM😃
Edited by Avina-Ashvik - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsome os.beautifully written.loved it.os was amazing.it was so heart warming.Just loved it.thnx for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing and wonderful os. Loved it to the core. Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Mahima😃 that was a lovely OS dear...👏
at first mujhe laga iska sad ending hoga but you made it end on a perfect note...
loved how Manyata took care of Uday when his so called fiancee deserted him...
it wasn't bad at all...it was very good...😛
no ande tamatar😉 lol

Thank you for PM😳
do write more one shots👍🏼

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