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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

this was awesomeee👏👏

well-written⭐️

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sanah12

@sanah12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Don't have words to describe how awesome the os is!
Loved it to the core.
It was beautifully written.
Uday was a jerk to do that to manyata but now he realized his mistake.
Manyata still loved him though he did that to her aww that's true love!
Uday was a stepson feeling bad that he didn't have a family who he could share his feelings with.
I'm so happy manveer r together.
The last part was really cute and sweet.
It was really marvelous.
Do write more!
And thanks for the pm.

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angleroops

@angleroops

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

hey mahi nice os

its very cute

first i felt anger on uday

but latter manyata was an oscur winning actor

nice

latter how uday proposed her was vey ute

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jazsidhu

@jazsidhu

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

a superb os...

luv it...

very cute...

thx fr the pm...

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..Ghazz..

@..Ghazz..

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Marvellous and a beautiful OS dear👍🏼😛

do write more 😊 😳

Edited by ..Ghazz.. - 11 years ago

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pooja urf pari

@parish99

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

awesome & cute os dear, loved it
& thanks for the pm

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huma

@huma12.

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

fantastic os mahi YOU R LIKE BACK WITH A BANG

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

hey mahi,
aha 2 surprise in a day
not bad
anyway the story is awesome
my eyes are filled up
after reading the first part
the prank proposal
and then even now
poor uday he too did not have a happy life
but m so glad that they reunited
and that they are together now
awesome mahi
huugs

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Hi Mahi Firstly ... thank u so much for the dedication😳. Giving us such a beautiful OS just because I sent out 253 PMs for you - waise ... I'll keep sending your PMs if u keep on thanking me THIS WAY😉! Coming to the OS - it was fabulous, fantastic , wonderful ... MIND-BLOWING!👏👏👏 I read it last night, when u posted it ... but I wasn't logged-in as a member ; so could not comment then. (now I think I'm last to comment😭) Gosh ... I wanted to kick Uday hard when he spoke so rudely to Manyata😡. I hate people who think too highly of themselves, because of their looks. They have so much PRIDE AND ARROGANCE in them, that it makes them THE UGLIEST PEOPLE IN THE WORLD🤢! There's a saying ... U REAP WHAT U SOW. I think THIS was so apt here , as the thing Uday was over-proud of (his "handsome face" ) , was taken away in a flash! Manyata was an angel for forgiving Uday and giving him another chance😳. I don't think I would be so kind! I loved the proposal scene ... I loved that u repeated it from the first nasty 1 into the "PERFECT ENDING" 1 . The OS was an absolute delight to read (read it 3 times😳). I loved it so much😃. It was perfectly written ... U took us through all the emotions, and left us with a huge smile in the end😃. Thank u for this treat! Aur haan ... mere paas TAMATAR bhi hain - tere liye nahi , uss Sheena aur Priya ke liye😈! Bye now ...

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nimra malik

@mimi.maik

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

hey my mahi...how r u??? 😊 feeling very great after seeing your pms...😃 thank u so0o0o much 4 a lovely OS and an episode.

well the whole OS was just awsum, amazing and lil bit suspenceful. hehehehehe 😆 totally superb,👏 👏 👏 u seriously made my day. At first my heart was shattered just like manyata, i felt happy when she becomes a very hot and happening girl of india. and than the ending ,,,,,,,awww loved it. Finally they r together.

You wrote each n every word perfectly, again thanks 4 the OS... AND ALSO 4 the p.m...love u and take care. 🤗

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