Manveer OS- Aisi Dewanagi

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Girl lie on her bed and crying very much she want to kill herself but she can't do that because she loves her family a lot guy open the door and enter the room sit besides her but she didn't realize he was here she was busy in her deep thoughts chain boy caresses her back and checks she think he was her beloved she woke up and hug him tightly very tightly boy think inside "yuvraj udayveer singh magic start working you princess Manyata Kumari of devgarh" evil smirk appeared on uday face

Manyata- Akash I love you please don't leave me please
Uday tite his fist he listened Akash name from his beloved he was damn angry he become wild held Manyata arms tightly
Uday- now time to forget this Majnu you are mine for always
understand tommorow you will be mine forever
Manyata- leave my arms uday you hurting me
Uday- you are hurting me from one year don't you think about me when you resist me push me how can I feel all love for Akash and hate for me why?

Manyata- uday please leave me...ahaaa
Tears rolls down from her checks due to pain
Uday- now I will make you mine tommorow

In evening Manyata stand up near window and think uday words she think inside mind "God g tell me what can I do uday loves me but I love Akash but he leave me alone but I love him a lot I almost wait him from one year but still he didn't come now what can I do?

Unnati came in Manyata room and huges her
Unnati- congratulations Manyata I m very happy
Manyata- didn't answer her back
Unnati understand and ask her
Unnati- Manyata why you are looking so dull?
Manyata- she narrates whole scene

Unnati put her hands on Manyata shoulders
Unnati- Manyata then why you confused its simple Akash not love you he was just your attraction bhai love you truly madly that's all I m not saying as uday sister I m telling you all as your friend
Manyata Hugs her tightly
Manyata- unnati I will think about it
Unnati- ok will talk you tommorow

Tommorow Manyata woke up and held uday pic and tell " uday now I forget Akash unnati is right he was my attraction and you my childhood love I will tell you all tonight and give you surprise"

In evenIng all ready barat was came in devgarh palace uday sat on Mandap and was so sad...Manyata tell unnati everything now unnati was very happy for her dada and her bhabhi also her best friend after sometime Manyata came down from stair uday didn't look her Manyata sad because he didn't see her once but unnati try to control situation after all rituals Bidai time Manyata uday gives all elders greeting and hugged youngster Manyata little crying and hug everyone

They reached jaigarah palace unnati give Manyata arti and welcome her they play some games in hall after games unnati and all girls went manveer room sat their room and Manyata and went their respective rooms

Manyata sat on bed middle whole room was dark and decorate with candles and red roses Manyata wait for uday but he didn't came she wait for him maximum 3 hours Manyata wait for him sudden he open the door and came he was not in his sense he was to much drunk came and sat on bed besides her

Manyata saw his condition tears start rolling down from her checks uday think this tears for Akash he thinking he tight his fist and he was very angry he become like wild tiger and also he was not his sense

He just push Manyata on bed and make her lie come top of her and and held her both hands and pinned with bed Manyata confused from his behaviour she trying to say something but in a second he start kissing her lips and hitting like a hungry tiger it was so painy for her but she control herself to shout

He nibbling her neck hardly removes her jwellery from one hand squeezed her dupatta and throw on the floor throw her cloths on floor and in a second he shrugs with his clothes and banging her on bed being so wind bitting her body part and sensitive parts he just found is way inside her he entered her with jerk and start thrusting in and out in very speedily Manyata shouting

Manyata- ahaa uday...nooo udayy...stop please ...ahaa nai

She was screaming in pain he was very hard on her she start crying badly she weeping badly uday not in his sense and her voice make him more crazy he just doing for one hour after thrusting in and out still he inside her and kissing her banging her badly she clutched bed sheet tightly and crying tears rolling down from her checks uday squeezed her boobs like animal snatch it food he hitting her cleavage and upper part of breast bitting her hard nipples bitting her navel and belly area a sharp scratches he leave on her waist on...heron her waist blood oozing from her waist part because of his sharp scratches Manyata try to push him but he held her again she again push him he held her again and did all these for maximum 4 hours and then he dozed of on bed Manyata under him

Slowly slowly Manyata gain her energy and try push him aside but unable she try four times and in fiveth time she success to push him aside she wore her night dress she was so frightened she go to go unnati room and knock the door in sleep unnati wake up and open the door she was just shocked to seeing Manyata condition she quickly make her sit and give her some water

Manyata narrates whole story to unnati she was shocked to listen all this she make her sleep and call doctor she just come and check and dressed her wounds she was in high fever now because of shocked she is also so weak

In morning slowly slowly uday wokes up and saw himself he was nude under the blanket he saw his hands and waist part...blood drops on his hands and waist he was shocked to saw then he saw down on the floor Manyata marriage cloths jwellery all lying on floor he wash his body with cool shower and then drink cappuccino he try to remember last night but he didn't slowly he re-remember Manyata voice "no uday...nai ahann" he closed his eyes he saw black and white image and remember night now he slowly slowly understand what he did he was crying to much and go outside

Ask all servants about Manyata But they answer negative he shout in anger and tension unnati came and give signal to all leave

Unnati- Kia hua bhai why you so tensed? She hates her bro for a minute

Uday- unnati Manyata kaha han tell woh kaha Han?

Unnati- ap ko kiya faraq parta han ise bhai?

Uday- iska Matlab tumhe pata han woh kaha please unnati Kia hogaye han tumhe Hume batao kaha Han humari princess?

Unnati- kyu bhai apne use jitna dard dena tha dedia Na ab or kiya baki reh Gaya Han?

Uday shocked now he understand her sister meaning

Uday- tumhe sab pata chal Gaya choti?

Unnati nodded

Uday- please unnati try to understand mujhe nai pata Maine Kia kardiya woh Sab kaise hogaye...tears rolling from his eyes

Maid come and call unnati because Manyata try to woke up she said I m comming uday hear all this and went Manyata room

He came and hug her tightly tears rolling down from both eyes

Uday- I m sorry princess I m sorry please Manyata Hume maaf kardo Hume maaf kardo hum tumhe kabhi force nai karega tum Jo chahati ho wahi hoga tum chahati ho Akash ke pass Jana tum chali Jana par hum tujhe nai rokega kabhi force nai karega Hume maaf kardo please

Uday said restlessly
Manyata held uday's collar
Manyata- ager mujhe tumse dur hi jana hota tu Mai tumse shadi hi ni karti tum hamesha kahte ho tum ek yuvraj nai tum bilkul halkat Veda ho itna bhi nai smajh Paye ke I love you I really love you

Uday- shocked...he hugged her very tightly kissing her neck and shoulder "I love you too princess" Bdw you forgive me for tonight

Manyata- uday forget it I know I love you only and tonight you misunderstood I think you think tonight my tears for Akash right?

Uday nodded and hugged her hides his face in Manyata chest

Manyata- but no that's for you love you uday don't leave me again

Uday- never ever

Manyata- promise don't you drink again?

Uday- promise...princess yesterday night you bear to much...tears rolled down from his checks

Manyata not say utter a word

She just locked his lips only uday first shocked but kiss her back both involved in passionate kiss and lost eachother both sucking her mouths licking eachother mouth saliva's taste and enjoyed

They locked eachother lips forever

The End

Howz it guys?
You want I write more os?

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sanah12 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I'm so happy because I'm the first one to comment!
Awesome os!
It was really nice
Loved it loadz!!
Poor manyata felt bad for her
but happy that atleast uday realized his mistake.
Unnati is a great sister,
She made manyata realise that that majnu isn't right for her.
Unnati is the best! luv her loadzz!
Do write more os.
Edited by sanah12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ManyataThe update was fantabulous your os was breath taking😳
Awwhhh unnati so sweet she make her understand Akash Majnu is her attraction only😆
Uday her true love who love her madly and truely loved it😃
Your os was very wonderful I loved it core😳
Uday was so wild on bed poor manyata😭
But uday banging her kissing her like tiger awh my poor Manyata she bear so much😭🤢
But it's very good uday realize his mistake very soon😉
Unnati and uday talking was very nice😃
Unnati world the best friend and sister and also NAND 😛
Unnati was so cute and sweet😳
Your os was very lovely and cute very nice👏
Manveer last part was truely amazing😳
Manyata uday talking fantabulous just mindblowing😆
And last kiss OMG very hot and sad update but you give happy ending finally lovely update👏
Love you write more os surely yeh bhi pouchna walk baat Han?🥱🤗
Edited by ---ButterFly--- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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muchSuperb os very nice😛lovely update😊
Poor I feel bad for her she bear much😭
Unnati is very nice and cute😃
Uday was so wild very bad uay😡
Loved it your update👏
Buhot acha like I like it muxh😳
Write more os😃
I love last part verymuch😃
Edited by pari_vania - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice fantabulous os amazing cool lovely poor Manyata uday was so sharp but it's good he realize his mistake I loved your concept and os very much very cool os thank you for the pm dear will pm me next time sure loved it very amazing cute os loved it😛
Edited by shreya.kapoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am glad they worked out their differences...
I just loved the title you used... reminded me of the old song (one of my favourites) - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m-vIYe_KY34
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww so nice dr 😛
i loved it 2 core❤️
hats off👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os
loved it
feelind bad for maanyata
unati is the best sister
uday was so wild
finally he realized his mistake
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb OS! Loved It <3

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