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Posted: 11 years ago
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yaarrr I can't give long update becoz I'm very busy now a days nd will try to uodate long part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

yaarrr I can't give long update becoz I'm very busy now a days nd will try to uodate long part

yeah no problem btw I have updated WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 3
when she saw him angry then she was about to go nd sit with him but at that time komal bridraj nd dr saheb came starthes their dinner.during dinner manayta started touching his legs with her legs. when uday notice this he started smiling but on the way so that she doen't see it.nd gave her angry glare. nd she stopped nd got sad.when uday saw her sad he felt very bad nd thought that she became very upset from him.so he thought he have to do something to cheer her up nd tell her that he was just joking.after dinner he told everyone that he have to go somewhere with manayta nd it's about the joint projectwhich hee was going to start with devgarh.everyone agreed nd told that come soon. after talking with everyone he went in manayta's room to tell her about this when he reached there he didn't found her even he see in her washroom nd everywhere but he didn't found her.he also asked every servent wheather they had seen manayta anywhere or not they all replied that they hadn't seen her. he also told this to everyone in family but they also didn't seen her. vijaay bhai called on her cell but it was switched off.now everyone was very worried about her thag where she had gone without telling anyone.after a while uday's cell ring when he recieved it it was call from manayta he asked her where she is how she is feeling etc etc she told uday that se went to the beach becoz she wanted some fresh air nd didn't wanted to disturb anyone nd when she was about to call him from her cell she saw that the there was no battery ther so she was calling him from someone else phone to tell him not to worry nd to tell driver to bring a car becoz her car had stopped in mid way.when she said this he told her to wait there he is coming.when they hang up the phone uday told everyone about what manayta said nd that he is going to take her nd from there they will go uday nivas hotel to discuss nd will come tomorrow morning. everyone said okay.when he was about to go unnati j nd vijay bhai came nd said r u both really going to dicuss about project (winking) . uday said yes we r going to discuss about project can I now go. nd then he left that plac. after reaching beach he saw manayta was sitting alone as it is night time so no one was there nd beach was only with very few people.when he went near manayta he hugged her tightly from back first she was shocked who was he after that she sense it was only his uday's smell no one else. when she turned around she saw uday had some tears in his eyes. she asked him what happen why u r crying. uday said princess when u left without telling anyone I was scared that what if something happened to u.manayta said uday nothingg will happen to me until u r with me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey sry for late comment
ur update was fab second update so romantic
third update was cute jay vijay unnati teasing uday
now lets see what manveer are going to do in uday nivas 😛
waiting for ur update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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okay I try to update today otherwise I will update on weekend becoz mine midterms r going to start. nd if I update then there will be only short updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

okay I try to update today otherwise I will update on weekend becoz mine midterms r going to start. nd if I update then there will be only short updates

thats okk dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 4
PART A
when they both reached uday nivas uday told her go nd wear this dress manayta said why we here for a meeting so why I have to change uday said becoz we r not here for a meeting for our date nd I lied to everyone . manayta said udayy u r... uday said I know I'm cool nd hot now go nd get ready we have to go somewhere manayta said where uday sa8d it's a surprise for u. after that manayta went nd got ready.after that she came down wearing hot red sarree. nd uday was just watching her becoz she was look8ng like an angel.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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CHAPTER 4
PART B

After hoing out from hotel in car uday put blinds on manayta's eyes. manayta said why u put nlinds on my eyes he said so that u cannot see the place where I'm taking u . she asked why r u kidnapping me. he said omg princess how u get to know this that I'm k8dnapping u oh no my whole plan id floped now what should I fo now.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey pls update
its so small part
pls update longer parts
pls its a request
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Hey..
Let me first introduce myself..
My name is Nitya..
I read both the chappys..
Both of them were fabulous..
Maveer romance was very nice..
I would like you to continue..
Please PM next time..

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