manveer ishq

heyy guys I'm starting my story first time so plz plz like it nd if there is any mistake then tell me
CHAPTER 1
This story starts from where there everyone forgive manayta for her mistakes nd jeh also tells everyone aboyt her deeds how she tried to seperate manveer with that akash. after hugging each other everyone went in their rooms except our uday who wents in manayta's room.when he reached there he saw manayta is not there so he about to go outside when he saw she (manayta) is coming out from washroom after taking bath he locks the door of room.manayta doesn't know that he is in her room becoz she was drying her hair witb towel. when she turns then she saw her uday is there by seeing him she got shocked
manayta: uday what r u doimg here go out what if someone sees us.
uday: common princess don't be scared or kko dekhta hsi toh dekhne do becoz now u r only mine .
manayta: (shy) uday plzz go
uday: okay but
manayta: but what
uday: give me a kiss on my lips which was left outside
manayta: (blushing) no
uday:okay then I'm not going
manata: theek hai
manayta goes to him then... continue soon

so this was the first prt. nd it is my first story nd if there is any kind of mistake nd if u all want something then plz plz tell me. I'll try to update soon

yay me to comment first!!
awesome concept!
loved it
but short one
plz more longer!!
update soon!!

yeah u r the first one to update nd I lromise u that I will try to update soon

INDEX
chapter1_ pg 1
chapter2_ pg 1

hey ur starting was gud
hope u continue soon
lf possible pm me
and i am also wrting a manveer ss
pyar ke ek kahani u can read it

hey...
nice interesting concept...

Chapter2
after that when therir both lips were about to touch then someone knocked the door of the room nd they both got seperated.their servent seemaji told them that dinner is ready nd everyone is calling them.
manyta_ ok seemaji we r coming
seemaji_ theek hai yuvrani jee
when she went from there
uday_ now give me my kiss
manyta_ no what if someone come. nd said go out otherwise I will shout
uday_ okay shout but I will not go until I get my kiss
manayta_ when she was about to shout uday fastly come nd kissed her on her lips manayta got shocked nd her eyes were widely got opened. and after sometime they kissed passionately nd slowly slowly while kissing they both fall on bed uday on top of her. nd slowly start kissing on her neck nd becoz of this she got love bite nd slowly he starts opening her robe but suddenly beoc of wind her room's window opened nd they both came back to their sensesnd they both stand up on their proper place nd they were looking down. after that uday about to say sorry to her but she said it's okay it was not ur fault nd their is no need to be guilty becoz they both love each other nd were going to get married soon.after that uday went downstairs nd manayta got ready by wearing her yellow colour colour dress.after getting ready she also joins everyone in dinning table nd sat in front of uday nd he got angry by this becoz he was signalling her to come nd sit with her but she not.

nice update yar
but shooorttt
please give big na!!
anyways loved it to core