OS-My last days on earth :'( - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Amazing OS Vibha

Very Beautifully written
Manyata shouldn't have chosen Majnu over Uday so what if he was a nerd she didn't love him... she would of had a better life with Uday love is not everything a person can fall in love after marriage too... she chose majnu over parents disgusting very bad choice
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww😔 A very sad story but has great morals.
Nicely written. Superb👍🏼
Thank you for the PM😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey!
nice os dear
it gives us the good msg
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ohh god, i was just feeling a lil low today n den i read this update which made me cry alot...
I wanna just kill people like aakash... 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice story di...
Thanks fr pm n update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh lord That was emotional, I seriously cried alot. You wrote it so nicely😳 Loved it. I miss ManVeer🥺
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shahista01

Vibha that was truly deep and heart touching.

I love the fact that u made it very realistic, sad reality 2 life is that not all love stories have a happy ending and not everything is hearts and roses. Many young ppl end up falling in that same trap and illusion and end up like manyata. It tugged at my heart and u wrote it beautifully. Great job vibha, its been a while since I read something that I really enjoyed...

Sadness is every bit like the reality we choose 2 believe in... all depends on the decisions u choose...

Hugs...



Hey Shahista di😃
im glad you liked the story...yep i was tired of writing those candy floss romance stories where nothing is real...🤢
wanted to write something thats real and hard hitting..i think i succeeded😳

Thank you so much for the comment😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: -Zina-

what was that Vibha? 🤣



im sorry...i don't know if it was so much funny...😳
Thanks for the comment😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

That's what I call short and sweet. ❤️
The story is a tragic one but it has greater depths.
Loved reading it mom 😃



Thanks bachcha😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: .medha

A beautiful OS Vibha di!

I love the narrative style and you bring out the regret so perfectly!
It has a really deep meaning and touched my heart!
Superb job!⭐️



Thank you Medha😃

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