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Sonali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

wow how interesting hope it's a misunderstanding and will be clear soon

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sanah12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Awesome os!
Loved it loads!
The emotions were perfectly described.
Hey I searched for some titles here they are:
A Heart Full Of Love
My Heart Belongs To U
You Make My Heart Leap
Two Hearts Become One
Love Is A Work Of Heart
U Are The Key To My Heart
For All Eternity
Circle Of Love Is Never Ending

Thanks for the pm.

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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Hey... Vibha..

Finally someone wrote an os...

This was great...

Waise I can't imagine Manyata in a dark complexion...

Haaww... Uday cheated Manyata...

But I know there is surely something in it...

I am eagerly waiting for the second part...

Update soon...

And thanx for the PM...

PS: The title for this could be " The Perfect Love Story"

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roop kaur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

it's nice vibha...well written...waiting for second part.

like the concept of story

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saakhi01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Mistrustting trust cud be a title bt this nt original, it is a story frm anothr forum...
The update was good n nicely written n had a suspense element... N why nt make it a ss wid 5-6 parts...
It has scope for a small ss

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azwa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

i love it

u have start adding music that made it intersting

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sonu/ sonali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Awesome really loved it... I don't think uday cheated on manyata...the promo for the second part is really interacting please update soon nd thanks for the pm

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Vibha Bangalore

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: saakhi01
Mistrustting trust cud be a title bt this nt original, it is a story frm anothr forum...
The update was good n nicely written n had a suspense element... N why nt make it a ss wid 5-6 parts...
It has scope for a small ss

thank you so much for telling me that...could you please give me the link of that supposed 'original'?
i'd like to check which is original...
i did mention that i took the concept from an existing story, didn't i? but i haven't copied every word...just the underlying concept...that too from a magazine, not other forum...
if you found it so much similar, you could have scrapped or PMed me about it...sorry for my words

and thank you for the comment...

Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 11 years ago

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Vibha Bangalore

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
wow lovely os vibha!!
really thought it was a long time any1 had wrote an os
thanks for such a lovely update
waiting for next part desperately!
update soon

Thank you Mahima😃