''ManVeer~IshQ kiya mohabbat kiya~''chp4 pg 41 - Page 14

Originally posted by: pinvin07

It was awsome yar... N update was better than bf4.. That means u r growing well as a writer.. Keep it up...

Originally posted by: preya_radev

awesome ayshu loved the scene between the two friends shruti and manyata and loved the office scene between manveer ... so manyata doesnt know uday is the boss as he lied to her saying he is the manager wonder what manyata's reaction is going to be please update soon and thanks for the pm and sorry for the late comment

Originally posted by: prernakhandelwa

nice concept...loved chapter 1...manveer as usual awesome...thanks for pm...and sorry for late comment....

Originally posted by: mimi.maik

Hmmm a really good starting...I really liked it Jan... Their first fight and then uday gave her the job...something is cooking in udays mind...well keep it up and do continue soon and thanks for the p.m...

Originally posted by: anu1299

loved it loved the first meet or should i say their first fight so cute ans she broke his mirror and the first chapter she is going to work for him and she does not know he is the boss lord another fight can't wait awesome update ...update soon nd thanxx for the pm ..nd now mujhe teri story ki LAT LAG GAYI HAIN YRR CAN'T WAIT UPDATE SOON MANVEER KISS OMG ITS GONNA BE OSSUM

Originally posted by: ..FlOrA..

Hey Princexxx..!!
hello prince charm..!!😛

Super Duper Update...
thank you so much...!!😳😳

tu toh bhutt achy writer ha reeeyyy...
haye akhir princess kiski ho...!!☺️☺️

I must say...
hmm...🤗

Originally posted by: .-Arpita-.

THANK YOU APU...!!

Awesome update ayesha di 👏👏👏

Loved it to the core 😳
THANK YOU SO MUCH BACHA...
I M GLAD U LIKED IT...!!

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

Wow ayesha!!!
THANK YOU!!!
Great updates!!
THANKS...
Par mein gussa hun
AWE...WHY??
Tune updates late diye!!
SHOLLY...!!!
Chal koi baat nahi
Maaf kardiya tujhe
THANK YOU BARE DIL WALI MAA JI
kyunki Bade hi kammal ke manveer scenes dale!!!
HAYA AMA JI ME GLAD U LIKED IT
Hawww Uday ne manyata keliye khudko manager bana diya???
HAN TU PYAR MAI SAB JAIZ BUT YA UNKNOWN LOVE HAN MAHI...!!
Kya din agaye bechare ke!!
Hehehhehe!!!
PYAR MAI SAB JAIZ HAN..!!
Bahot comedy hai manveer chemistry!!
JAHA MAI WAHA COMEDY HONI HI HAN
Aur utna hi jyada maja aa raha hai!!!
HAYEE MAI MARJAWA TERA COMENT DEKH KAR MERI ANKH BHAR AYI YAR...!!
Bahot bahot acha likha hai amaaji!!!
THANK YOU DADI SAHAB
Loved it loads!
LOVE U N LOVE UR COMMENT🤗
Aur han tu fikar mat kar aur bahot kuch banana hai tereko!!
BAS APKI DUA CHAYA MUJHE PHIR DEKHU KIYA KYA KARLETI HO MAI😛😛
Amaaji maji didi etc..
NANI MAA DADI MAA CHOTI JAANU...LOVE U
Take care .
AWEE...TC CYA...!!
Loved the update!!
THANK YOU MERI JAAN!!!
Love U!!

I LOVE YOU MORE DENOK.☺️
❤️