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SNOWWHITE83

@SNOWWHITE83

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

dips super update.

love ur style of writing.
woow now uv will come devgarh.
here also j is villian type.
wana to know wat aashi & M planned.
plz continue soon.

pm me next time.

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Dips

@JustLikeMe1

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: ...anju...
dips super update.

love ur style of writing.
woow now uv will come devgarh.
here also j is villian type.
wana to know wat aashi & M planned.
plz continue soon.

pm me next time.

Thanks Anju! J isn't actuallly a villain she just told what she observed about Uday. Sorry about the PMing thing I-F allows me to send just 10 PMs in 24 hours and since this update was within 24 hours I could't send any PMs

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angleroops

@angleroops

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

hey nice update

specially the past scene

naow lets see what ashi is upto

and what this jay was saying

i mean uday was serious with manyata

seriously u r caring the suspence very nicely

waiting for ur update

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Priyanka

@capriya

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

hai i just read all the chapters.very nice concept.its very clearly feel that uday is in love with manyata.loved the story.

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Jarin04

@Jarin04

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

You really are an amazing writer. this story is getting really interesting wid each update. liked the way u r managing to show the past nd present together. can't wait for the date. Uday is going to get a shock. do update soon. Waiting eagerly. btw i've becum fan of your writing. Keep writing nd keep rocking girl

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

hey thanks fr gvin us an update,i am jst loving bth ur past and present!!!!! aha aso duay also gt smitten by sme1!!! uday's pov was jst amazingg!!!!!! loved it!!! it would sound weird bt i am ling j mre than ashi,actually bcoz j is indrctly playign a cupid bt ashi,she is spoiling everythng!!! neways plzzz do cntinue soon!!!!!!😊😊😊

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Dips

@JustLikeMe1

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: roopali15
hey nice update
specially the past scene
naow lets see what ashi is upto
and what this jay was saying
i mean uday was serious with manyata
seriously u r caring the suspence very nicely
waiting for ur update

Thanks Roopali :) That's the whole purpose of writing both in past and present together to keep the suspense alive and I m glad that you are enjoying it😳

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Dips

@JustLikeMe1

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: capriya
hai i just read all the chapters.very nice concept.its very clearly feel that uday is in love with manyata.loved the story.

Thanks! I hope you will continue reading the future chapter too😳

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Dips

@JustLikeMe1

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Jarin04
You really are an amazing writer. this story is getting really interesting wid each update. liked the way u r managing to show the past nd present together. can't wait for the date. Uday is going to get a shock. do update soon. Waiting eagerly. btw i've becum fan of your writing. Keep writing nd keep rocking girl

Thank you so much!!! Trust me it's quite a pain to write in past and present and I m happy that you are finding my efforts interesting to read😳 I will try to update soon such sweet words from readers always encourages me 😃 btw do feel free to criticize too!

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Dips

@JustLikeMe1

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: pia.raha
hey thanks fr gvin us an update,i am jst loving bth ur past and present!!!!! aha aso duay also gt smitten by sme1!!! uday's pov was jst amazingg!!!!!! loved it!!! it would sound weird bt i am ling j mre than ashi,actually bcoz j is indrctly playign a cupid bt ashi,she is spoiling everythng!!! neways plzzz do cntinue soon!!!!!!😊😊😊

Thanks! Glad that you enjoyed reading the part makes me super happy as a writer😃 Well Jay has always been an indirect Cupid for ManVeer even in the show that's why I never hated her as such. Give Aashi a chance she might end up being a cupid too😉😆

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