ManVeer SS ||Crossroads||NOTE Pg14 - Page 10

Originally posted by: JustLikeMe1

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thank you so much!!! Trust me it's quite a pain to write in past and present and I m happy that you are finding my efforts interesting to read😳I will try to update soon such sweet words from readers always encourages me😃btw do feel free to criticize too!</font>

what friends r for ? will surely criticize u when u need it. Nd the pleasure is all mine.

I am soo soo soo sorry for not commenting on chapter 6 before
I will like both the updates from my lappy
Both chapters were superb
I loved chapter 6
Manaya and ashi and uday and manyata and flashback and present
U write brilliantly
And always manage to leave me speechless
Chapter 7 was beautiful and flawless
loved every snall line and word
U r amazing writer
Thanks sooo much for the pm
Love u sooo much
Autograph please ;P
Thank u for such an amazing story :D

Hey di
How you? 😊
I'm so sorry for the late reply
Truly amazing, awesome, mind-blowing update 👏 👍🏼
Loved it loads ❤️ ⭐️
Wow, looks like that girl Uday fell in love with in colleage was no one else but Manyata
The flashback truly amazing, first Manyata had it n now Uday
Wonder how he's going to react after seeing Manyata's friend n so called boyfriend
Jai is as evil as always
Wonder how she's going to react when she finds out that Uday's girlfriend from colleage was no one else but her jiji 😆
Thanks for the pm 😊
Plz update soon 😃

Awesome update woww
I love flashback
Wowww
Really good
Can't wait for the next chapp
Plzzz update next chapp plz

Read all the parts and it was awesome please update the next part soon

Nope I am still waiting. update soon please!!

i would really like u to updatee,will wait fr it dear😊😊

Hey whr r u
Plzzz update dis ss
i realy love it plzzz