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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Thanks a lot guys ... I mean 37 LIKES !!!! ... I never expected that !
I am overwhelmed at the response to my story ... Thank you so much !


krittika89, PrincessSumbal, Rsaakka, Sunsnow, Rose_, Skaliya178, Janny..,
Edited by catty2000 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1

She flicked open her eyes to be blinded by a bright light. Adjusting her

eyes to her surroundings, she looked around and found herself in a

strange room lying on a king size bed.

Where the hell am I ? What happened to ? Why am I here ? What is this place ?

Then it all came flashing back the jeering, the shot, the pain and the

darkness.

Am I dead ? No, I can't because there is no pain in heaven and what I am

feeling at the moment is IMMENSE PAIN !

Her hand unknowingly rose up to her abdomen and she was surprised to

find her wound dressed. The wound immediately brought back HIM !

Tears welled up in her eyes. She had trusted him but he had broken her

trust. It suddenly struck her that she was trusting a complete stranger. She

mentally smacked herself.

You had not even known him for 24 hours, Manyata. How could you have

trusted him. How could you have trusted a gangster ?

No, Manyata he is your Uday ! No ! No ! He was your Uday a year back but

now he is just a bloody heartless gangster !

She tried to make herself 'see sense' as she termed it when she heard the

knob of the door being turned.

Think of the Devil and the devil is here.

Good morning, wifey !

There he stood, leaning on the door with a smirk.

I wish I could wipe that smirk of his face.

She thought irritated.

Wait, what the heck did he call me ? Wifey .. ?

His smirk deepened as he saw her expressions change and he knew that it

had finally sunk in.

A moment later, her shrill voice rang through the room.

What did you call me ? How dare did you ? What do you think of yourself ?

She continued blabbering and didn't realize when he had closed in on her.

her heartbeats stopped and her breath hitched as he placed his hand

over mouth and nuzzled closer to her.

Well, wasn't it you who announced yourself to be my wife ?

Ok, Manyata here's the proof. You have lost your mind. Weren't you in

your senses while doing all that !

She continued her self - talking when she suddenly found him retreating

back and that brought her to her senses !

Who are you ? And do you realize the danger you are in ?

Uday could have killed himself for saying that. He didn't care for

anyone then why her ?

No, Uday you are not worried about her you are worried about your life.

You are worried about your enemies !

He stood there trying to reason out with himself while she stared at him

blankly.

He still cared for her !

That was the only thing she could think about and it gave her immense

happiness and she was about to say something when he continued ...

Anyways i don't care about that but tell me WHO ARE YOU ?

She felt those tears threatening to fall again.

I am Manya !




Ok guys that's all for today !

Do tell me if you liked it !

Will be egarely awaiting your reviews !




Vidhi



Edited by catty2000 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
awesome it was truly so good
i really loved
it was filled with suspence
but uday did not realize but he does love her i feel
aha the destroyer is a saviour too
left me with many question unanswered
thanks for the pm
yess i am first to comment
Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Beautiful written n delivered 👏
thn ya confusing ...😕
The chapter turned my head anticlockwise😆😆😆...
lol waiting to get my confusion cleared...
update soon n thanks for the pm😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
AWESOME UPDATE VIDHI.GREAT JOB.WELL WRITTEN.
LOVED IT LOADS.

UDAY A GANGSTER.LET US SEE HOW UDAY LOOKS IN
HIS NEW AVTAR AS A GANGSTER.

IF HE LOVES HER Y DID HE SHOOT MANYATA.LAST PART
WAS LITTLE CONFUSING.

EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT PART.CONTINUE SOON
DEAR.N DANXS FOR PM.
Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Hey... It was amazing...
Uday does'nt remember anything...
Manyata is so socked...
Update soon...
And thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
omg that was great!!!!
wonderful job by u!!!
loved it loads!! update soon!!
Janani24 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
nice update vidhi👏 but y doesn't uday remember Manya if he already knows her?😕 think he has forgotten but still his heart recognises his luv😊 well its just a guess😛 continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
It ws awesme update
uday nt remember manyta
thanx 4 pm n cntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
nice plot..nice update 👍🏼

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