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Nitya Tandon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Hey.. u know what I want to give a big hug to u for this...

I just luved it...

I never told u... but this one is my favourite among all ur stories...

Yaayy... Very gud ki us avendra ko bahut sare marks aaye...

And I toh thought ki manyata ko is tarah gidgidate hue dekhkar Uday kuch naughty karega...

But usko realize hogaya ki he is in love...

Maharaj sujamal... I think u r also watching Jodha Akbar... just a guess... even I watch it... whenever I see I always think ki iss role mein manveer wud have been the best...

Par woh ekta kapoor toh hai hi pagal...

Anyways coming back to manveer..

Uday ne Manyata ko shadi ka proposal bheja...

Par I don't think ki woh accept karegi...

Pllease update soon...

And ye this time not a thanks to u for sending me the pm... Because u said that it is ur duty...

So a salute to u for fulfilling ur duty...

And as far as my ff is concernd (I am sorry for replying on the other ff) I wud try to update it asap...

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: htgcute
Sorry shona was super late comment...
That was truly grt and awesome loved it...
Do continue soon...
Thanx for the pm...

thank youu so much

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
yes so finally the devil will turn in a passionate lover!!!
wonder how manyata feels about him!!!
update soon
awesomely written!!
do pm me

thank youu so much

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: nityatandon
Hey.. u know what I want to give a big hug to u for this...
I just luved it...
I never told u... but this one is my favourite among all ur stories...
Yaayy... Very gud ki us avendra ko bahut sare marks aaye...
And I toh thought ki manyata ko is tarah gidgidate hue dekhkar Uday kuch naughty karega...
But usko realize hogaya ki he is in love...
Maharaj sujamal... I think u r also watching Jodha Akbar... just a guess... even I watch it... whenever I see I always think ki iss role mein manveer wud have been the best...
Par woh ekta kapoor toh hai hi pagal...
Anyways coming back to manveer..
Uday ne Manyata ko shadi ka proposal bheja...
Par I don't think ki woh accept karegi...
Pllease update soon...
And ye this time not a thanks to u for sending me the pm... Because u said that it is ur duty...
So a salute to u for fulfilling ur duty...
And as far as my ff is concernd (I am sorry for replying on the other ff) I wud try to update it asap...

no i am not wtahing
i do not like this here akabar character is a disgrace to real akbar
actuyally i love ashitosh odha akbar
of hrithik and ash
they fitted the cast like none could
yea need name
ok thankk youu

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serat

@serat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

wowww

loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awesomeee

plzzz update next chap soon

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: serat
wowww
loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awesomeee

plzzz update next chap soon

thank you so much
i am glad you enjoyed

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: huma12.
updateee baby sister

jiji it not 1st yet and now a days something is really keeping me buzy sorry

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

a small promo of the next chappy
for my readers

He was cut short by uday , his frostly glare made him shiver he realized his mistake and appolozised and said

SOLDIER:please forgive me I meant by Rajkumari of Devgarh , it is her birthday the next day and as you advised we are ready so when shall we leave maharajsa

UDAY:lets us leave tonight before the sun I want to be the first to wish my princess birthday and gift her my love

MANYATA:oh almightly I have tried each possible way to please you as a loyal servant please reward me with the life partner I carve for , who has captured my heart my mind , I know there are several odds in our way of love but please do stay with us

She closed her eyes and opened it again with a smile she had trust that her god would certainly hear to her and she would get one she loved but poor princess she was too blind to know that her faith was already written by UDAY VEER.

UDAY: a very good evening Maharaja Bridgraaj and Rajkumar Anwar

BRIDGRAAJ:it is a pleasure to see you here Maharajasa

ANWAR:we did not accept you here

he would at no condition forgive him for doing so revenge was building in his heart as love and peace was replaced by hatred and arms the history was to unfold the most romantic incomplete story

DONE PLEASE HIT THE LIKE BUTTON

THE UPDATE ON 1st OF JULY

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago