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Posted: 11 years ago
HAI VIBHA.HOW R U

HAPPY NEW YEAR.

DAT WAS PRETTY LONG UPDATES.
THANK U SO MUCH FOR TRIPLE UPDATE.
I ENJOYED READING IT SO MUCH.
MANVEER JEALOSY WAS A TREAT.
DYING TO READ FURTHER.
CONTINUE SOON .
THANKS FOR PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for the delay... All the chapters are awesome. I dont like Uday behaving like this. Thanks for the update and pm. continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago


Thanks Huma😃


Originally posted by: saakhi01

All chapters were awesome...
I liked last line d most said by manyata " men are pigs" 😉
N pls add hypocrites also to her dialogue...



Thank you Saakhi😃




Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Amazing Parts Vibha

Manveer made each other jealous
Uday is very bad how can he say to her to go to Kabir.. now she will surely leave him
Cont Soon when ur free



She will not leave him..its the other way round..thank you for comment di😃




Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

Wow so Udayveer thinks Manayata is cheating him? Wow that is crazy! Hope it is cleared soon, glad you kept writing!



Thanks Sonali😃




Originally posted by: MAHI1198

woah party!!
triple update...
thanks alot yar vibha... welcome Mahi😳
loved it to core...
poor manyata...
true men are pigs!!!! I agree..
u know girls aarre the best...always😛
oh that blonde and Mr.zombie.
ruined everything...
loved it loads!!



Thanks Mahima😃



Originally posted by: Lovelydrops

superb update...loved it...oh no manveer agin get into a quarrel...poor manyata...i love the scecne where uday punched that guy who is trying to kiss manyata...hope evrrything became fine soon...



Thank you Prerna😃




Originally posted by: Asmimelody

kya baat hai waah!taaliya taaliya😃awesome update..loved it😳cont soon..waiting for the next chapter..PM karna ok🤣




Thank you so much🤣




Originally posted by: capriya

Sorry for the delay...I made delay too.. All the chapters are awesomeThanks Priyanka😳. I dont like Uday behaving like this.Same here.. Thanks for the update and pm. continue soon...Updating now...thanks dear..😃




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

RES😳

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I can't believe it😲. When I saw that u updated ... my mouth opened up , just like in the emo😲😆. I quickly posted an "RES" , because I wanted to be first😳 (sorry about the RES - I hope u don't mind). And then when I started reading ... I saw that u updated ESPECIALLY for ME - I was so touched. I'm super elated ... truly - CHRISTMAS has come early😃.
Comment for ch20 . Awesome chapter👏👏👏. A masquerade ball , that too in a drug-den😲 ... very interesting👍🏼. I'm glad that the blonde didn't overstay, otherwise Manyata may have gone overboard in flirting with the other guy😉. I was so happy when Uday asked Manyata to dance with him and not the other way around😳. However, hearing about the zip-thing ... made me think of that scene in NA TUM JANO NA HUM , where Hrithik zips up Esha's dress whilst they were dancing. I thought that was very Beautiful when I saw it in the film ... now when it concerns Manveer - it's double the delight😳.
Comment for Ch21 . Wonderful chapter👍🏼 ... Uday saved Manyata from a highly embarrassing situation, which shows that he is highly protective of her😳, and her dignity matters to him.
Now , I think I was as confused as Uday and Manyata ... I also began wondering who the Hell Walter and Lilly were😕? For a moment I thought u brought in 2 new characters😆. (yep , I do know that these are the names of the 2 people, Manveer are mistaken to be).
I loved Udays reaction to Mr Zombie's flying-kiss😆. (bulls-eye, I'd say😉) The dance was awesome ... too bad Blondie came back into the picture.
Comment for Ch22 . Oh no ... how did we get to this point😭? I never thought this chapter would end like THIS. I was sure we'd get a repeat of last night☺️ , but we got a bitter ending. Mr Zombie ruined everything🥺. Uday's words were so hurtful😔 ... hope he apologises when he sobers up (hoping really hard😉).
All-in-all ... it was a wonderful EARLY CHRISTMAS TREAT Vibha. Thanks so much for the triple bonanza 🤗 . I thoroughly enjoyed all 3 parts😳. Continue as soon as u can ... I just love this SS😃.




Thank you so much for this awesome and wonderful comment Navina...🤗you know, every time i wait to read your comment on my SS...you analyse so well and sometimes your comments have helped me in planning the story line for my next update...😳im glad you liked all of them...thank you once again😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princessSonia

Me 2nd...

Awesum updates...
Loved dem...

Hope Uday will apologise wen he is sober...

And it should be Uday's style...😉

Manveer wuld hve enjoyed togethr if nt fr Mr.Zombie n his mate...😡


Do cont soon...
N thanks fr d pm...



Thank you Sonia🤗 im gonna update now...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: annabh

hey jiji Hi Mona...
how are you? im good and you?...
bestest of luck for your examsThank you..
now coming to the update or updates i should say
it was lovely
right from the beginning till the end
i was mesmerized by their dance
no matter how many denials they give they are IN love with each other i agree with you..😆
awn uday zipped her dress
so sweet of him
and secondly thank god atleast one of the two got their drains
that something was going wrong
mr zombie seems so fishy to me
OMG simply loved uday getting possessive about her
she should understand himThats still far away..lol
will miss this ss a lot
do well in your examsits done now..but thanks😳
hugg



Thanks Dear😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cnibir

WOAH i am loving the jealous Uday...

It is true men can be pigs sometimes but only when they decide to ignore what is in their hearts which i think Uday is doing...
Great that Manyata was no less than him and i hope both of the realize they in love...
Thanks for the PM and i appreciate your time and effort..
Good luck for the next chapter... continue soon



Thank you Nibir..😃 i agree, some men keep living in denial until they get a bonk on the head😆 yep im gonna update now..😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

hey,soo sorry fr late commenting,ur chappies was awesomee,must mention i really liked the black dress of manyata!!!!! manveer dance wass sooo romnticc!!!! and the zipper scene,hayee!!!!!! aww manyta is jealouss!!!!😉 zombie ko to sach mein mar dalta humara uday!!!!!! bt he shouldnt have said such harsh thngs to manyata,i hope he realises dat soon!!!!!😊😊



Thank you Pia😃 yeah he's gonna realize his fault but it'll be too late then..😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Hey Vibha di, how you? 😊
Sorry for the late reply
The updates were amazing

Chapter 20
Manyata did go a bit overboard with the flirting
But her situation is understandable, jeolous and I think a bit possesive about him altoghth she won't admit it so quickly
But Uday shouldn't have flirted
Also reminded me of the scene in Na Tum Jano Na Hum, which was completly cute
Which tells us that he cares for his wife's dignity and doesn't like anyone else to touch her

Chapter 21
Looks like there is a jeolous and angry Uday who didn't like the flying kiss sent to his wife from a stranger
Loved the way Manveer danced

Chapter 22
Looks like Uday wanted everyone to know that Manyata is his or he was to drunk to notice what he was doing -by trying to kiss her and carrying her in his arms
Wonder what Uday would have done if Mr Zombie didn't stop him
Wow, loved how Uday punched him when he tried to kiss Manyata
Wonder what Manyata expected Uday to do in the store room, lol
I think Uday went overboard by saying bad things about her character
Manyata's thoughts do have a point
Plus Uday doesn't know that she didn't like Kabir

Loved all updates ❤️
Thanks for the pm 😊
Can't wait for next update 😃





Thank you so much Humaira😃 it was so sweet of you to post a seperate comment for each of the chapters...thanks once again, loved your comment😃...
and im gonna update now...😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hey.. Vibha...Hi Nitya😃

First of all thanx a to for updating early...
I was really eager to read this update... (You know why)Yes i know..😉
And when you said you'll update in Feb..
I was completely heartbroken..aww..im sorry..
And when I saw you updated..
I was full of excitement and joy...
Anyways...thanks dear...
Coming to the chappy...
It was fabulous...
That blonde and that zombie...
I would personally like to kill them both..
But one they did that I liked was..
Make Uday and Manyata jealous...
Because I love them that way...
The dance was amazing...
The way Uday held Manyata as you described...
Reminded me of the last scene in zara sa jhoom lu main...
Where SRK when he is drunk carries Kajol on his shoulder...lol..i always take inspirations from SRK movies and songs..
And the punch that Uday gave to that Zombie must have been really hard...
I never expected that it would ebd like this...
I thought Manveer would have a romantic moment together...Is baar nahi😳
But the way Uday was very rude and harsh..
I hope he apologises soon..
That too in his own style..
Update soon..
And thanx for the PM..



Thank you so much Nitya🤗

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