EARLY LOVE ROMANCE-IMP. NOTE ON PAGE 13 (DO READ) - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww so cute concept..
Loved it 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nabs4ak

Awww so cute concept..
Loved it 👏


THANK YOU SO MUCH...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: serat

update next chappp

updateee
plzzz



yeah yeah we will try update fast
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Hey... it was really nice
But did not got the pm though I am in the pm list...
Pls pm me next time
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Hey plz pm me i m skaliya176 i forgt my passwrd so i made nw id pm me on dis
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
EARLY LOVE ROMANCE
CHAPTER ONE
PART TWO

helloo..!! guys we are back with the chapter one's part two hahahaa hope u enjoyed our first update...!! ...!!!! kindly ignore our grammatical mistakes.. chapter one(1) part two(2) uday reaches at manyata's room n opens the door suddenly manyata comes from washroom wearing bathrobe n both collide with each other n loose balance nd fall on the bed and both have a long eyecontact but manyata comes to her sense n she remembers all his mistakes and that she is angry with him.she pushes him n stands up wearing bathrobe... manyata:i told u na that i dont want to talk to u so please leave me alone(she pretends that she is still angry) uday:oh princess u r mine n mai jab chahu yaha a sakta ho smaji tum [oho princess u r mine and wenever I want I can come here got it] (he starts moving towards her playfully)

manyata:oh please tum apni unn bimbos ke pass hi jao mere pass ane ki koi zarorat nai han samjhe now plz go away [ oh please uday u go to ur bimbos only no need to come near me okay got it now plz go away] (she says in a very angry tone) uday:princess ab itna bhi kiya gussa please forgive me na n forget the past u now enjoy the present na [princess why to get so angryplease forgive me na n forget the past u now enjoy the present na] (n he tries to go closer to her but she is still angry n she pushes him again) manyata:don't try to come close to me please jao na bara maza aa raha tha na unke sath london mai dance karte hua kisses karte hua tu unke hi paas hi jaao yahan par q aye ho mere pass [don't try to come close to me please go to them only u were having so much fun with them in london while dancing and kissing them why have u came here to me go to them only]

uday:princess forget it hum tu bas chill kar rahe thhe ismai itna bara issue q bana rahi ho it's not a big deal [princess forget about it I was jus chilling y r u making it such a big issue its not a big deal] manyata creases her eyebrows n says manyata:really acha theek han iska matlab mai bhi kisi ke sath bhi chill kar sakti ho right par phir tumhe q itna dukh hota han jab mai kisi ke pass jati hoon ya phir koi mere kareeb ata han toh??why mr yuvraj why?? can u plz tell me?[really if it so then that means I can chill with anyone but then why do u mind wen I go near someone or someone comes close to me why mr yuvraj udayveer singh tell me why..??] uday gets very angry n hold her from shoulders very tightly uday:becoz u r mine only mine dammit wo meri galty thi ayanda aisa kahna bhi mat tum kisi or ke pass jaogi aur aisa sochna bhi toh bilkul bhi nahi becoz tum sirf meri ho ager kisi ne koshish bhi ki tumhare kareeb ane ki tu jaan lele ge hum uski mardelega use [becoz u r mine only mine dammit that was my mistake don't u ever say that again and not don't even try to think of it becoz u r mine only mine and if anyone tries to come close to u then I will take his life I will kill him princess...]


n hugs her tightly n starts kissing her neck her body starts shivering first her body does not respondes his kisses but after 10 minutes uday kisses her neck shoulder n face she feel every touch n her body starts responding now.. manyata says in broken voice. manyata:uday what are you doing?? please stop uday this is not right before marriage plz stop it uday plzz uday holds her cheek n start carresing her hair n comes closer to her both of their bodies are very close to each other and it looks like they are one body.. uday: i love u princess ap sirf humari han bolo na princess ki ayanda kabhi aisa nai kehengi aap ki ap kisi or ke kareeb nahi jaogi bolo na princess please tell me [I love you princess say that u r only mine princess please don't say again that u will go near anyone else princess plz.. Tell me] manyata:hm or tum bhi sirf mere ho sirf mere ayanda tumhaare kareeb koi bhi ladki aayi na toh tum dekhna na woh bachengi na tum understood?[hmm.. And u r also only mine if I ever see u near any of those bimbos na toh just see wat I do to them and u understood] uday:yes my princess den uday starts moving playfully towards her n hold her waist tittly both of their bodies meet
uday:acha ab apka haq han tu apna haq jatiya na princess hupar[oh really princess if there is ur right on me than show me ur right on me princess] manyata is confused


manyata:kiya matlab[wat do u mean] uday:ya ke jab hum apke han tu ap bhi hume un bimbos ki tarah pyar kare na[it means that if I am urs then u also love me like those bimbos na] manyata:mera pyar itna kamzoor nai hai ki mujhe use jatane ke liya tumse chipakana pare smaja tum or han mai un bimbo types nai hoon han nai toh[my love is not that weak that I have to show it to u by sticking to u and yeah I am not like those bimbos okay haan nahi toh]
uday:i know i m kidding princess but ek kiss tu banti han na plz[I know princess I am kidding but yeah one kiss is to be there na plz...] manyata:ap bhool rahaya han ke i m still angry wid u[u r forgetting that I am still angry with you] uday:not again princes...!! manyata:oh hello hume manana han tu kuch special karna hoga mere liya [oh hello if u want to make up with me u have to do something special for me okay]
uday:cool princess seems intresting ok so after 1 hour be ready for ur surprise manyata:kkk... uday:now my surprise manyata:kaisa kounsa surprise[which??? What??? Surprise? ??] uday:princess do na plz[princess plz.. Give na] manyata:kiya do[what to give??]

uday:wahi jo hum apse mang raha han [ the thing that I am asking from u] his eyes pointing to her lips manyata:hume nai pata[I don't know] uday:toh hum bata de kiya[so should I tell] manyata:acha kiya bataoge?[really wat will u tell] uday moves towards her lips n carreses her waist suddenly someone opens the door
precap:uday's accident

zainy n harshi

KIYA HOGA AB KOUN HAN WO JO ARAHA HAN UDAY MANYATA KE BEACH MAI KIYA MILL PAYEGA UDAY MANYATA KIYA UDAY BACH PAYEGA KIYA ADHOORI REH JAYAGI YA DANSATAN JANE KE LIYA DEKHIYA
"EARLLY LOVE ROMANCE"


Edited by zainab.udayveer - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: huma12.

Awsssmmm bt u didnt pm me

Thanx and Actually we haven't pmed anyone yet we r doing it sorry for late pms..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Hey everyone we are really sorry we are not able to send pms as there is a problem in my pm...😭😭

REALLY SORRY FOR INCONVENIENCE...😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
really nice
fantasti
plz plz plz plz update fast
waiting very desperately
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
wowww
loved it!!!!!!!
really good
contiune soon
next chap jaldi se update kar daina
precap kya tha
uday's accident

abb jaldi se update karo next chap

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