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monalisa mukherjee

@chocohollic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: ...anju...
AWESOME UPDATE.LOVED IT LOADS.

SO UDAY WAD JUST A PUPPET.ACTUAL CULPRIT IS GIRIRAJ.

HE KILLED HIS WIFE N NOW UDAY HIS SON.MAY B UDAY WILL B HIS STEPSON.

MURARI IS DEAD.WILL HE GIVE HIS TO HER N GET HER EYESIGHT.

NOW CANT WAIT CONTINUE SOON

thank you so much
yes it was all a game in which uday was betrayed by his own father
no uday is his own son
murari died of tumour and if murari gave his eye sight to manyata
then she has probability of getting tumour too
sure i will try my best to give the update
faster and longer
thanks for commenting

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monalisa mukherjee

@chocohollic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: ...navina...
Great update Mona. The beginning was so sad😭. Then (OF-COURSE) Giriraj is a monster , trying to kill his own son😡! Doesn't that nurse know that the patient is the same person that built the hospital ... or are there 2 Uday's here😕? Please continue soon.
Thanks for the pm😊.

thank you
i am sorry for that
yes the king of monster of hell
no there is only one uday but everybody except for the people of his status is unaware
as he does not like to be a part of crowd and keeps himself away from common people
thank you for commenting
and encouraging me

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monalisa mukherjee

@chocohollic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: preya_radev
awesome gosh girirag is such a devil wants to kill his own son for a project but glad jagat took uday to the hospital but a shame uday is not able to get admitted in his own hospital please update soon and thanks for the pm

yes indeed he is a devil
he is blinded by money
yes the irony he was the one to change the rules
yes i will try my best to give a longer and faster update

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monalisa mukherjee

@chocohollic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: humairaa1
Awesome, nice update
Can't believe that Uday's father is doing all this
Hope Uday gets better n I feel bad for Manyata
Thanks for the pm 😊

thank you very much
yes he has no values for relations
yea he will so do i

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monalisa mukherjee

@chocohollic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: anushruthi
Awesome
very nice
do cont soon

thank you so much

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monalisa mukherjee

@chocohollic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
awesome update..
omg muarari mar gaya??
and giriraj killed his wife???
giri hit his own son???
fr a sake of some dumb project???
so many questions to be answered...
update soon...
do pm me

thank you
yes story demanded him to die
yes and now he even wants to kill his son
money changed him\
you can feel free to ask
i will try

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monalisa mukherjee

@chocohollic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

i am sorry i know i am giving very late update
i will be a bit busy till 26 th of june
so will give the update probably by 28th june
till then here is the promo of the upcoming chapters

it was another cold evening as he looked out of the window , his wounds were still so fresh as he took an oath
"i swear ma i will pay for my sin they will get what they want "

he extended his hands and asked with love and passion in his eyes
AKASH:will you marry me manyata?
she passed a warm smile that could even melt the heart of snow monster and said touching his face
MANYATA:yes i will marry you akash?

he pinned her to the nearest wall and spoke under his breath
UDAY;you are mine only i can claim my right on you , princess you will marry none but only me
she struggled but he was far too strong as tears rolled her cheek and she said
MANYATA:please uday leave me please i have to go akash is waiting for me it our marriage and that is the truth i am getting married to him
the fierce lion was pocked by her such word as he moved his hands over her face wiped the tear drop and with his signature smirk concluded
UDAY:no way you are marring none but me and now i will claim you fine forever

she sat in a dark corner of the room and cried out her hearts , she knew now there was no way to escape and nothing could be done then to cry
MANYATA:why did you spoil my life uday? what had i done to you?

she had fire balls in her eyes as she screamed
JAI:jaggat it is all your fault and i will never forgive you for that i hate you

this was a small glimse of the upcoming
chapters of reality check i hope
you all enjoyed
thank you

Edited by chocohollic - 12 years ago