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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

that was a mind blowing update...
loved it loads vibha...
I got a bit confused in end part...
like wat storm was yet to come??
anyways update soon deary



Thank you Mahima🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

aww Manyata got hurt! overall awesome update!



thank you😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: humairaa1

Wow, superb update
Loved it
Shame, poor Manyata
Thanks for the pm 😊



Thanks Humaira😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Amazing update Vibha👏.Thanks The beginning with Armaan and Jai was lovely and cute😳. Their love confessions were so romantic ... and not over the top!im glad you found it worth reading
Glad that Manveer patched up ... I was shocked that Veer gave in so quickly. Another man would make their wife work hard for that forgiveness😆!yep so true but this Veer..Manyata's Veer😳
I'm so sad that their joy was short-lived😔. I'm sure Manyata will be fine ... right Vibha😡? wrong Navina But your statement of "NEW BEGINNING" ... makes me think , Manyata has lost her memory😭. Hope I'm wrong though!you're absolutely right
It was a wonderful update ,Thank you so much
thoroughly enjoyable... Very well-written👍🏼!aww😃

Please continue soon,in sometime
... thanks 4 the PM😊.



Thanks for the lovely comment Navina🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
A new beginning

Udayveer looked at his unconscious wife and felt a strange emotion in his heart. Actually it wasn't new; he had seen it coming before. It was a feeling of annoyance, resentment. Initially he hated himself for feeling it but now he had begun forgiving himself. But the guilt of developing certain wrong emotions still gripped his heart. Seven months had passed since that unfortunate day. Yes Seven.

The ordeal of seeing your loved one being still and pale like a corpse. Waiting every moment, hoping every second for some change in the flaccid body that was lying on bed.

He tried to remember the ill fated day that had sealed Manyata's fate. The impact of waves had thrown her head long onto the sharp rocks and in the mean time she had swallowed a lot of water. Though he took her to the medics almost immediately, the damage had been an internal one and she never gained consciousness again. In the months that followed she had been subjected to various doctor's diagnosis; some doctors were brought from other countries even but no one could reverse the malady that gripped her. One thing common that all medics had told him was sometimes luck and fate rule the life of human being and no medicine can cure their effect. When she was brought home from hospital, Udayveer lay by her side day and night, losing sleep; neglecting his own health in the process. Though she could not reply, he spoke to her every waking moment like she was actively listening to him. He narrated her everything that happened outside and his own feelings.

For a month or so, no one stopped him and let him be where he was. But when it got clear that he was becoming a permanent fixture in her room and ignoring others in the process, they began to try weaning him off her.

His English course which had ended as soon as it began was started again and the tutor kept him busy for hours together deliberately.

Their distancing had begun without Udayveer being aware of it. Off late he was becoming impatient while talking to her and sometimes he dozed off in her room.

Of course he loved her like he did before and there was no changing that, ever; but that feeling was becoming dusty, foggy everyday.

Yuddhaveer developed Malaria in his jail cell and died a painful death; Mihika's death had been avenged. Their family got to know every element of truth about Akash and they accepted J and Armaan's relationship without much hassles. Since no one wanted a big celebration, they got married in a court and that was it.

He picked her hand and touched it to his heart. "suno Manyata..mera dil aaj bhi kehta hai ki tum use sun sakti ho.." he told her.

"Udayveer, beta hum sabko aapse kuch zaroori baat karni hai zara neeche aayenge please" Manyata's mother told him.

He replaced her hand and followed Komal down where all of them had already gathered.

"Yuvraj Udayveer..humne iss ghar ke bade hone ke naate ek faisla liya hai jo aap ke baare me hai" Mrinalini devi informed him when he was seated.

She looked at each persons face once and continued "hum raj gharane ke hain aur yeh gharana sadiyon se chalta aaya hai..aage bhi chalta rahe iske liye ek vaaris ki zaroorat hai.."

"Kya matlab hai aap ka?" Udayveer cut in.

"matlab aap jaante hain..Manyata shayad coma se bahar aaye ya nahi aaye, kuch kaha nahi jaa sakta..par humari zindagi rukni nahi chahiye"

"aap mujhe seedhe seedhe batayiye ki kya baat hai" Udayveer was getting impatient.

"matlab yeh ki aap ko dusri shaadi karni hogi" His father announced.

"aap log insaan hai ya janwar iss baat ka shak ho raha hai mujhe...I am not going to get married again and that's final" he said and left the place feeling disgusted with his family. Seriously what were they thinking?

Manyata was their own daughter for heavens sake, how could they not see that?

'You are no better than them..aren't you begrudging her for deserting you?' his subconscious told him.He closed his eyes and saw a vision where Manyata was falling into a deep gorge in slow motion and his hand was too short to catch hold of her.

Precap ' She blinked her eyes and took in the place she was in. some strange man was looking at her.

Hell he was clasping her right hand, how dare he?

"Excuse me? Do I know you?" she uttered in a hoarse tone. Whoa.. why was her throat feeling like it was full of sand?



ok so that was a bad chapter🤢 tell me how bad


Edited by Chamakchallo30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ahhh it was intense though and i feel the story is taking a new coarse...👏👏👏...
This chappy is perhaps a connector of its type...
But vibha i enjoyed reading it..
Though it made me loe a bit but it did has that charm,,...
And seriously how could her family even ask him to do that..😡😡😡
If they are asking him now to remarry then why didn't they allowed manyata to get married to some1 else during Uday's absence... 😕😕😕
This implies a girl is always a girl to the world no matter poor or rich🤢🤢🤢
Continue soon sisu...
Edited by snowdream - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update !
In the writing sense ... 👏
Though otherwise it made me feel very sad 😭

The family is asking him to remarry ... 😲
Have they forgotten she is their daughter ? 😡

I think Uday won't agree !
Or ...
Maybe Manyata might become well !

Talking about that,
What was the precap about ?
Was that Manyata waking up ?

Continue soon ...
... Thanks for the PM !
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update jiji
made me a bit low
it was emotional too
thank for the pm
awnn poor uday
he is so madly in love
uff if this mrinalini devi wants a waris so desperately than
it is better she produce herself
how can she tell uday to remarry
it her own grand daughter there
but glad uday is faithful to his love
i have a feeling that manyata
will wake up but will forget everything
that is what i figured from the promo
sorry if i offended you
update asap
Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsssmmm vibha the promoo is scary

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