||OneShot-You Are Mine|| - Page 3

Originally posted by: anjuroopak

hehehe
very funny 🤣
loved it.

Thanx😃

Originally posted by: snowdream

manyata and chicken good combo😆

🤣Thanku🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30

Awesome 👏
🤣 🤣

Thanx Chamki😃

Originally posted by: Karkit

🤣

Thanx Karki..glad that u like it😃

Originally posted by: huma12.

awsssmmm

Thanx

Originally posted by: annesha18

woa sooo funny
even i go mad for chicken
it was awesome

Thanx anni..haha me 2 me 2🤣

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

mai kuch comment nahi karoogi

🤣🤣🤣

Lazy edward😡🤣

Originally posted by: Vasishtha

<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="5">LQ :- Sach batao kaisa laga?😆</font>

LOL jaisa lagah na🤣

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira

Wow !!!!!

wow !!!!!!

wow !!!!!

Wow !!!!!

wow !!!!!!

wow !!!!!

Wow !!!!!

wow !!!!!!

wow !!!!!

What an awesum nd delicious 'ONE SHOT' u have written my dear.

Hatts off To you for ur such explosive idea.

the last line just took my breath away. dear, trsuts me

🤣

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#cc0000" size="3">"Oh, you're mine. All mine! My dearest chicken barbeques!</font>

Kha se laati ho tum aise mashallah ideas 😆

Thankoo
thankoo
thankoo
thankoo
thankoo
🤣🤣Yeah yeah I trust u be🤣Yeh jo logo keh dimaag hote haina..woh bohout mast hote hai rey lini🤣Really glad that u like it😃

i do,t understand the concept one shot story means?

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">DHOBI!!! OFFO! TUNE TO MERI NEARLY JAAN NIKAL DI THI!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">ISME US CHICKEN BBQ KA NAAM MANYATA HAIN KYA?</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">AREH BHAGGU!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">TU BHI NA!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">SABKE CHORI KIYE HUE DIMAG ACCHE SE USE KARTI HAIN!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">NAI TUJHE ANDE JOOTE TAMATAR NAHI MARUNGI!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">PR I SWEAR, MERA SAR PATK PATAK KE TUTNE KO AYA THA!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">HAIN, TERE PAAS BADA CHAALAAK DIMAG HAIN!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">AWESOME OS DHOBI!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">LOVED IT LOADS!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">SO HATKE!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">BEST OS I HAVE EVER READ!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">TUNE UDAY AUR CHICKEN KE BEECH KA WO BANDHAN, WO PAVITRA RISHTE KO JIS TARAH SE DESCRIBE KIYA HAIN NA, MERI TO AANKHE BHAR AAYI!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">*TISSUE PAPER LAA DO KOI*</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">TERA YE OS AMARE RAHE!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">DHOBI KI JAI DHOBI KI JAI!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">LOLZ ROFL LMAO!</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4" color="#ff00ff">HAS HAS KE MERA PET DARD KR RAHA HAIN!</font>

nearly nikaldi matlab,abhi tak nikli nahi dhat dhat dhat🤣Hmmm shayad hai🤣Ab chori ki hai use toh karna parega naa🤣Mayko bhi pata hai mere chalak dimaag keh bareme,tere ko bolne ki jarrorat nahi🤣Thankoo shankoo for the compliment😃🤣Tissue paper deti houn par tu pehley paise toh deh🤣

Originally posted by: candy08

i do,t understand the concept one shot story means?

and isko pm karna hai ye story likh kar

Candyland oneshot means os re..aur sorry but I didn't get u..Maine yahan kissi ko pm karne ko nahi kahan...maine toh 'os contest'mein kahan tha..ki tum sab apne os's(realeted to rain huh) mujhe ya ashish.holic ko pm kardo..

Originally posted by: rockingal09

ab kya bolu me choco 🤣


kyuki ye os read karne k baad me sirf has rahi thi... 😆
it ws jus mindblwng !!!! 🤣

tum toh talentd ho choco... 👏

aisehi aage b OS likhti rehna 🤣 😉

Meri thori aur tareef hi karde🤣tere comment parne keh baad mera bhi haal kuch aisa hi tha🤣Thanku shanku re...

Originally posted by: preity_d

choco Date kitni acchi language se likkhi re...
your OS was full off poetic flow, First of all I thought it will be a passionate one, but yeh kya kia tune CHICKEN ko daal di last me???? 🤣🤣🤣

mast tha... too good 🤣🤣🤣
aisa OS aur likkha kar 🤣🤣🤣

ahaan thanks alot datewa🤣Ab mein kya kahu,tere datewa ko bohout zorr ki bhook lagi thi🤣
Again thankooo🤣ab tune kehdiya toh aur kya bohout sare likhoongi😃🤣

Originally posted by: princessSonia

wow😎

jzz wow😆

Os padke bohot mazha aaya..🤣

do cont

similar OS's😉

🤣🤣

Thankoo soni..mayko bhi likes dekhke bohout maza aya🤣

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Choco yeh kya tha 🤣
🤣

Chicken bbq!!!! 🤣🤣🤣 I thought it was Manyata 🤣 🤣🤣

Yummy OS choco 🤣🤣🤣 .. Thanks for the pm 🤣🤣

Dhakkan os tha🤣*haww*tune Manyta ko chiken kahan😲🤣Haan mera bhi pait bhar gaaya🤣Chal issi khushi mei mayko daru deh🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

Pehale thoda has lu
🤣
tussi gr8 hillarious OS swinu but tekko nahi lagata ye oneshort nahi one scene tha:(thoda aur lamba likhati maza ata naa BBq wala pyar...thanx for PM.

Jaa hass leh🤣Thanku shanku re ok🤣Jab tu apna yeh typo error band karegi tabh mei lamba oneshot likhoongi🤣