||OneShot-You Are Mine||

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well I read the story somewhere..but I add mine 2.

*You Are Mine*
Udayveer's Pov
The beautiful indigo sky sparkled with tiny stars of
different colours. The bright lights adorning the
place danced under the moon. I quickened my
pace as I neared the spot where the music was
coming from. I continued to run, afraid that I might
lose you to my best friend. I felt my mouth water as I thought of you.
What if… what if you're with…Akash… now?
Nooo. STOP it. I don't wanna think about it. My sweat dropped as I realized that I lost myself in
the forest.
–BEEP- it!
Where am I now? I can hear the mad thumping of my heart, threatening to jump out of my ribcage, and the nerve-wracking ticks of my watch.
–BEEP-!
Time is running out!
I so have a bad sense of direction. After poking my way through the thick trees, I reached the end of the clearing and stood before the dance grounds. I saw people dancing and talking. They seemed so
happy. Slow music filled my ears as I searched the
garden for my friend..
Anger slowly rose inside me and jealousy made my
blood rush in my veins.
–BEEP-!
I'm too late.
Akash's holding you now, the sight tormenting me as he took his time licking the sweet sauce off you.
Memories came back to my mind.And I can't help but remember how honey-like you tasted, and how chestnut brown you are. I recalled how my tongue darted out in anticipation to wet my lips, with just your taste and smell intoxicating me.
My brows met in a dark manner as I approached
my friend.
Akash looked at me with an amused expression, his mouth letting out chuckles which kinda irritated me more.
He moved away slightly from the table, allowing me
to see that there's more of you that I have yet to taste.
An embarrassed smile crept into my face. By now,
he was laughing at me, obviously glad at my wrong assumptions.
I can't believe it with my two eyes. I can see my features soften, reflected in the eyes of my male friends.
I drool at the enticing sight of you, lying there on the table.
Oh, you're mine. All mine! My dearest chicken
barbeques!
The End
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Pliz dont throw ur jootas n chappals at me🤣

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SNOWWHITE83 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
hehehe
very funny 🤣
loved it.
Edited by anjuroopak - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
Wow !!!!!
wow !!!!!!
wow !!!!!
Wow !!!!!
wow !!!!!!
wow !!!!!
Wow !!!!!
wow !!!!!!
wow !!!!!
What an awesum nd delicious 'ONE SHOT' u have written my dear.
Hatts off To you for ur such explosive idea.
the last line just took my breath away. dear, trsuts me

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣🤣 🤣🤣 🤣

"Oh, you're mine. All mine! My dearest chicken barbeques!

Kha se laati ho tum aise mashallah ideas 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
manyata and chicken good combo😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
DHOBI!!! OFFO! TUNE TO MERI NEARLY JAAN NIKAL DI THI!
ISME US CHICKEN BBQ KA NAAM MANYATA HAIN KYA?
AREH BHAGGU!
TU BHI NA!
SABKE CHORI KIYE HUE DIMAG ACCHE SE USE KARTI HAIN!
NAI TUJHE ANDE JOOTE TAMATAR NAHI MARUNGI!
PR I SWEAR, MERA SAR PATK PATAK KE TUTNE KO AYA THA!
HAIN, TERE PAAS BADA CHAALAAK DIMAG HAIN!
AWESOME OS DHOBI!
LOVED IT LOADS!
SO HATKE!
BEST OS I HAVE EVER READ!
TUNE UDAY AUR CHICKEN KE BEECH KA WO BANDHAN, WO PAVITRA RISHTE KO JIS TARAH SE DESCRIBE KIYA HAIN NA, MERI TO AANKHE BHAR AAYI!
*TISSUE PAPER LAA DO KOI*
TERA YE OS AMARE RAHE!
DHOBI KI JAI DHOBI KI JAI!
LOLZ ROFL LMAO!
HAS HAS KE MERA PET DARD KR RAHA HAIN!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
ab kya bolu me choco 🤣


kyuki ye os read karne k baad me sirf has rahi thi... 😆
it ws jus mindblwng !!!! 🤣

tum toh talentd ho choco... 👏

aisehi aage b OS likhti rehna 🤣 😉
Edited by rockingal09 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
Awesome 👏
🤣 🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: Karkit

Nice one so funny last part ws awesme hahaha...

🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
choco Date kitni acchi language se likkhi re...
your OS was full off poetic flow, First of all I thought it will be a passionate one, but yeh kya kia tune CHICKEN ko daal di last me???? 🤣🤣🤣

mast tha... too good 🤣🤣🤣
aisa OS aur likkha kar 🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
wow😎
jzz wow😆
Os padke bohot mazha aaya..🤣
do cont
similar OS's😉

🤣🤣

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