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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rashmi_pari

really i read it in one go
becaz it was full of suspence
the way you have written is simply superb
just loved it to the core
i'm eagerly waiting for the next update
do update soon

thanks sweety😊
u will get it soon😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessSumbal

Yr ek abi dydo aur ek eid pe dend

Who will write two updates🥱
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

Well heya sup??? one more comment lucky me😆 m fine hru?

How are u???
Well truly said this update was seriously the longest dear!!!!
Well not only in history of ur story but also the other stories!!!
Well the update was too good!!!! umm dont know abt other storeis but in mine it was indeed😉
Omg Uday was ignoring manyata for whole 2 weeks reh paya wo apne manyata ke bager???
Poor manyata!! yea right know he can life without her for weeks but soon you never know if he will be able or not😆
I srsly love the way unnati explained manyata the difference between udays love and mom's love.
Oh my I didn't get this?
Ayaan was the one to ruin unnatis life na??? lol... both are blaming each other what actually happened is still a secret😉
Then why did ayaan say unnati that she ruined his life???
Awww I loved that tom and jerry scene
. Manveer unknowingly care and love each other so much!!!
I loved that keshar khabri scene tooo... Hahahhahhahhahha kya dimag paya hai manyata ne lolzzz.
.has has ke pagal ho gayi mein!!!
Uday's reaction was damn funny!!!
Hahahahahahha... manyata brain works extremely fast like a bullet🤣
Ice cream scene too good...
Omg ayan was gonna tell manyata everything??? yes he was
But whats in that everything is still a question... Fantastic fabulous mind blowing...
Last part was jus a cherry on cake!! lol yea everything is still a mystery...
So Uday ko finally manyata ke dil ki baat samaj aa gayi!!! yeap now uday nows what manyata feels for him
Well now what to say about you ??
You and your story both are one of the bestest ones on DEK forum!!!
The one I wait for reading desperately!!!! thank you so much sweety iam so flattered🤗
Awesome work yar!!
Really wonderful!!!
You are truly an awesome writer!!!!
Loved it to core!!!
Please update soon if possible
Thanks for such a manveerlicious update!!!
And at the end!!
PLEASE TAKE CARE OF URSELF!!!
LOVE U!!!

thank you so much mahi... this was your very first comment which was very long and truely awesome i loved it 👍🏼...
love you more❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Res😊.

Edited :
Part A :
Awesome update. I knew that when Manyata saw the news bulletin about the guy with the faulty horoscope , she'll relate her present story to it , lo & behold , she did exactly that ... but I never assumed that she'd ask Uday directly😲. Poor Uday , I would've hated to be in his shoes , on the other side of Manyata's nonsensical talks😆. She lambasted him for no reason , then played the SUPER-SWEET INNOCENT PRINCESS😳. Such personality changes surely have a disorder behind it! Totally agree with Uday ... there's a brain missing from her head😉! Unnati's convo with Manyata (as per the promo) was superb. I also want to know about Unnati's love-story😳😉! (GOING TO READ THE SECOND PART NOW)
Hahahah well always expect the unexpected from manyata 😆
yeap she has a disorder! uday doubts too if his wife is mentally fine or not😉... her story will be revealed but not now... when the time will be right...😛
Part B :
Great update👏! Unnati stopped Ayaan from telling WHAT I'M DYING TO KNOW😡! Damn !!!!!!!!!!!! Manyata never gave DS those papers ... instead she said that she lost it😉. So , that means - SHE HAS SOME BRAINS😆! Awww , the hug was the best😳 , unfortunately ; Uday didn't reciprocate😭. Loved how Manyata is doing research on love (her dream about Eenu , menu , Teenu and Sheenu was too cute!) ... and the highlight - HOW TO UNFALL IN LOVE🤣!!!!!!!! The girl got it sooo bad , but refuses to listen to her heart😒! BTW - 1;2;4 ... was hilarious!

hahahahaha i know whenever they come face to face i never let the truth come out... because if it did everthing will be fine 😆 thats what i dont want right now😃 i know iam worse than the soap queen ekta kapoor😳 i always say this and people always agree😆
Part C :
THE BEST update out of the 3 (for obvious reasons😆). Manyata's absence has pricked Uday! I agree immensely with the quote ... NEVER ARGUE WITH AN IDIOT , but our Manyata isn't an idiot. She's an innocent soul , who's highly confused! The ice-cream fight was utterly entertaining - thoroughly enjoyed that😳! The end was so cute and Manyata's last confession hit Uday like a tornado. Umm - did she have to lose consciousness in the end🤔 ... I'm certain , Uday would've loved her to clarify her statement! ( Actually , it's I that would've loved to hear how she gets herself out of that situation😆).

yeap it got the most likes...
ahem ahem innocent😆...
for uday she is an idiot... how she reacts is worse than a kid... uday gets more and more surprised each day from his wife cum child ... she always do what he least expect...😆 he is from the world where girls die to be with him... but his own wife spends whole day thinking of ways to be as far as possible from him😉... ... he he he he not tornado VOLCANO actually...he never ever thought she will develope feelings for him... and now he knows how she feels for him😛 excited na😆...

Loved the massive updates Sarah,
hope u continue soon.
Thanks for the PM😊.
Ramadan Mubarak to you 🤗 .
navina thank u so much for such lovely comment i loved it to the core😃... thank you:)

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Posted: 12 years ago
You have to wait for 10 days 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my god... How can I miss the promo???😡 I'm really very sorry saria, that I didn't notice this.😳 And you're right. I never make a comment after res.That's because I forget to update after res. I can't even remember on which post I made res. So sorry sweety.😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
promo
wowww
superb
uday shot him
i m shocked
wowww
plzzz update
next chap
plzzz update
aur wait nahi ho raha
plzzz
plzzz
update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

thank you so much huma for such lovely and emolicious comemnt😆... i really love emos... and the comments with emo bring a bright smile on my lips... you know whenevr i see such pretty comment of yours i wonder how the girl who used to give AWEOSME only as a comment now gives such cute comments😆...

engagement has changed you humaa...😉
but i really really loved your comment thanks alot sweets😃






yuppp sarah i thought why too give the pet comment soo give this one and yuppp engagment change me ur to be JIJU is emotinol u knw EMOTINOL FOOL 😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Author's Note:~hey manveerians this notes is to inform you that from now onwards iam planning to give updates in pms... I mean whenever i will update my ff i won't post it in this thread i will pm you the chapter and you can comment on this thread how you found the chapter...Why i figure out this idea has two reasons...Reason one is whenever i even give a promo i have noticed within some hours the visitors number of my ff increases by 1000 people just for promo... You can see i have just updated thrice in this thread and might have give 2 promo's maximum and the visitors list is already 15 thousand something...It proves there are lots and lots of silent members out there who never comment but are members of IF... I neglected this silent member issue for long but i wont do it now... Reason two is great number of decrease in likes... When i ask to like to get pm i get alott of likes but when i update idk where those pm wanters disappears:|Last time i gave 3 mega updates and got no good response.. Good, Awesome, Perfect, Loved it... Are these comments enough.. What if i write update of only two lines? Would that be enough..?? All three updates got little likes... My readers couldn't even press the like button thrice then now don't expect me to write for you anymore...
Its better if i move my ff to fanfiction thread there your work grts appreciated... But i didn't left due.to this forum... Because i started this ff here and will end it only here...
Please dont RES when you plan to never unres it again... I am noticing all this from long but never said anything but today i felt it was enough ...
Some girls are there i don't want to disrespect them by naming them still read updates but never comment or like ... I always see their name in my recent profile visitors whenever i update... I don't know what takes you to like or comment O.O
So from now i have decided i will either end this ff or start pming only those who likes and comments on my work from the very start...
M not happy with response of yours ... Though my ff gets the most likes in this whole forum but that doesn't mean you can free your.self by liking once inorder to get pms... I am extremely disappointed... :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi sarah, i just read ur author's note.
I must say am sorry for nt commenting, but time is a big problem.
However i do like the chaps.
I can understand about how u feel, especially when u spends all ur time and energy for ur update.
And what u say is totally correct too.and please dont end this ff
Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago

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