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SNOWWHITE83

@SNOWWHITE83

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#401

WOOOW...👏 MANVEER MET AFTER A LONG...😃IT WAS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN GARGI..👏.OOO MY GOSH UDAYVEER CLIMBED TO MANYATAS ROOM JUST LIKE A TYPICAL LOVER😳 AWWW... ONLY TO GET A GLIMSE OF HIS PRINCESS...AWWW SO SWEET OF HIM.👏

DEN DIS MANYATA ARRR!!!! 😡Y ALWAYS ACTS AS DUMPPP,😳 BROKE DAT MAGICAL MOMENT... Hmmm... ATLAST MANYATA CONFESSED DAT SHE IS IN LUV WID UDAY😆...DEN LAST PART UDAYS CONFESSION DAT SHAURYA KILLED CHANDA IN PREVIOUS BIRTH.😕..IS IT TRUE GARGI...DID HE REALLY...NO HE CANT😲...WANNA KNOW MORE ABOUT D PAST.

MINDBLOWING UPDATE GARGI.👏.. ENJOYED EVERY BIT OF D CHAPPY... 😃LUKING FORWARD FOR NEXT CHAPPY...CONTINUE SOON...DANXS FOR PM.

Edited by ...anju... - 12 years ago

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#402

Originally posted by: ...navina...
Res😊 Edited : The first part was so lovely , with Uday peeping in on his "QUEEN" 😳. I knew he won't be able to resist touching her😉 ... but the kiss was unexpected😲. ( loved it though😳). And the fact that Manyata kissed him back ... was the cherry on the cake! I'm glad that she woke up when she did , so that she'd be in a conscious state when she's having those HOT FLUSHES with him around😳. Hawww , she was expecting another kiss ... and YOU didn't let it happen Gargi😡. U broke MY HEART along with hers🥺. So , Manyata has FINALLY realised her true identity (it took long enough😆). And she admitted her love for him ... along with Uday , I was also shocked😉. Now this is the part , which nearly stopped my heart ...
"I KILLED YOU!!...Do you still believe me love?..."
I WANT TO KNOW MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon Gargi , thanks for the scraps😊.

The first part was so lovely , with Uday peeping in on his "QUEEN" 😳. I knew he won't be able to resist touching her😉 ... awww...i knew you would love that and all my readers would...then how don't i give such a scene😉

but the kiss was unexpected😲. ( loved it though😳). And the fact that Manyata kissed him back ... was the cherry on the cake!---Really?...that kiss showed Uday's craving for her and Manyata's too..will try to create suh more scene next time then😳 I'm glad that she woke up when she did , so that she'd be in a conscious state when she's having those HOT FLUSHES with him around😳. Hawww , she was expecting another kiss ... and YOU didn't let it happen Gargi😡. U broke MY HEART along with hers🥺.----Ohh sorry to break your heart Navi😆...but something more important needed to proceed rather than the kiss and so i stopped it from happening..Will make up for that😉 So , Manyata has FINALLY realised her true identity (it took long enough😆). And she admitted her love for him ... along with Uday , I was also shocked😉.---hmm yes...she had to admit after all, she was dying to meet Uday and she scared that she might miss the chance to reveal her feelings to him😊 Now this is the part , which nearly stopped my heart ...

"I KILLED YOU!!...Do you still believe me love?..." ---i knew that will shock you and everyone along with Manyata...well there is lot more in the past than you can actually think of. Its my mind you see which fancies around😆 but i always had this in the plot...This is the main reason of all the chaos and END of their love story in the past...

I WANT TO KNOW MORE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!---Just wait for it to come sweety😉 Please update soon Gargi ,thanks for the scraps😊.---ill try to be soon and your always welcome for the scraps...🤗

Thanks for the lovely comments🤗

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#403

Originally posted by: huma12.
Awsssmmm gargii
did realy shuriya killed chandrakala

thanks huma...

did realy shuriya killed chandrakala ---thats a secret of the past😳

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#404

Originally posted by: priyash..
yeh yeh gargi next part de rhi hai res for next part 🥳🤪yo jaldi de ... !!!

update kiya to bhootni...ab reply bhi karna...res likhke bhag mat jana😡

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panchaali

@panchaali

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#405

No no Gargi you cannot end it here!!! This is sooo unfair...

I wanna read it more...

i just want to know Chandralekha's next step and how she died!!!

OMG I hate to tell but I am falling for Shaurya Pratap 😲...God save me from that Monster king!!!!

Very nice update...so Manyata started realizing that she is Chanda but why Sharuya took his diary I thought he only came for romancing his queen!!!! 😕

Plzzz update sooon

hows new office? 😊

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Ayesha

@Ayesha.behroz

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#406

lovely concept OMG manveer kiss never forget ever lovely part ya kiya kardiya manveer tumne mujhe mardala yar gargi tumhare hath chumlena chaya kiya likhti ho yar sach mai kaamaal ki writter ho director ban jao yar try karo😉😉😉

amazing story first thank you 4 the pm maan n update 4 ur story i m eagerly waiting 4 next update plss fast this time n take ur time take care urself😊😊😊

update was great i really liked it it's amazing written manveer so much nice awee...manyata ke lips😳😳😳

wow kiss wow amazing i loved this scene finally manveer kiss very nice update plss now i want ahem ahem lol update soon wid ahem ahem

great writting n thinking n thank you 4 bottom my heart 4 long update this story i really like it really love it

very nice story keep it up keep writting n update soon take ur time cya soon bye

hugs
take care
love ur update
keep smiling

Edited by Ayesha.behroz - 12 years ago

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#407

hi gargi,

i am still in a shock here. i mean i dont know whether to laugh😃 or cry😭.( dont mind me i am a drma queen)

but i must say Awesome update, it was just so cute and romantic.

After a lot of updates in the past we got something in the present and it was just amazing. manveer moments😳

i really loved when uday wanted to meet manyta before leaving, he is so romantic.

loved that scene in the room, just so cute.

loved how manyta's subconscious was tuned to uday and that kiss😳

manyta does want that book!!! she has started to believe she is chandralekha

i was like, so living i n the manveer moment when uday's dialouge

"i killed you" brought me down to the earth, that's why i said i dont know wheter to laugh or cry😃

now please update very soon, i want to know the truth soon.

i am sure uday did not kill her literally, there must be some emotional drama behind it. uday's hands cant be stained with manyta's blood

so dearest gargi, please update very soon

thanks for the pm😳

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#408

amazing I wonder what she will do now

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#409

Originally posted by: panchaali
No no Gargi you cannot end it here!!! This is sooo unfair...

I wanna read it more...

i just want to know Chandralekha's next step and how she died!!!

OMG I hate to tell but I am falling for Shaurya Pratap 😲...God save me from that Monster king!!!!

Very nice update...so Manyata started realizing that she is Chanda but why Sharuya took his diary I thought he only came for romancing his queen!!!! 😕

Plzzz update sooon

hows new office? 😊

No no Gargi you cannot end it here!!! This is sooo unfair...
Awww...sorry Payel...I was tired n wanted to keep everyone in the grip of suspense😉😆

I wanna read it more...I know...n I want everyone to feel d same...tabhi to next chappy ka wait hoga😳

i just want to know Chandralekha's next step and how she died!!!-----Yu will know that for sure darling n in a different way this time

OMG I hate to tell but I am falling for Shaurya Pratap 😲...God save me from that Monster king!!!! ----aww your falling for him?..common he is not that monster...not so bad..after all at least Chanda fell for him, so how can he be so bad?😳

Very nice update...so Manyata started realizing that she is Chanda but why Sharuya took his diary I thought he only came for romancing his queen!!!! 😕----because the rest of the story has to be known through some other way😊

Plzzz update sooon---I will Payel dear...thanks for the grt comments🤗

hows new office? 😊---my new office is gud...it keeps me busy so m happy😛

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#410

Originally posted by: Ayesha.behroz

lovely concept OMG manveer kiss never forget ever lovely part ya kiya kardiya manveer tumne mujhe mardala yar gargi tumhare hath chumlena chaya kiya likhti ho yar sach mai kaamaal ki writter ho director ban jao yar try karo😉😉😉

amazing story first thank you 4 the pm maan n update 4 ur story i m eagerly waiting 4 next update plss fast this time n take ur time take care urself😊😊😊

update was great i really liked it it's amazing written manveer so much nice awee...manyata ke lips😳😳😳

wow kiss wow amazing i loved this scene finally manveer kiss very nice update plss now i want ahem ahem lol update soon wid ahem ahem

great writting n thinking n thank you 4 bottom my heart 4 long update this story i really like it really love it

very nice story keep it up keep writting n update soon take ur time cya soon bye

hugs
take care
love ur update
keep smiling

awww...thanks Ayesha for such grt n lovely comments..

.you really made my day with so much appreciation n credits...m in cloud no. 9 now..😃...director to nahi ban sakti bt surely I will keep giving good chapters..promise bas be with me like this🤗...

n u don't have to thank me like this sweets...its completely my pleasure...just keep on reading n if u have any feedback u r very welcome to give it..

Hugs

Gargi 🤗

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