TDLS(Dark Love)-Bk 2. Imp note on Pg 93 - Page 10

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Gargi ... comment edited on pg9. THANX.

WARNING ... DON't GET SCARED

Originally posted by: andy.a

hi gargi😛

the chapter was soo spooky i must tell you

i really loved the chap to bits

the heading, the graphics had a element of fear in it

the scene where vishals car stops in the midst of a deserted road, just stoped my heart

the scene were the car light goes on and off was spooky, i would have had a cardiac arrest if i was in that place

is that invisible person, shaurya??

poor vishal, he had to suffer a lot that was very brutal

the scene in uday's home was nice

manyta seeing her own portrayt and the ancient boook was just lovely

so it was kurwaki, who wanted manyta to see the book

looking forward for the next chap

continue soon'

thanks for the pm😃

Originally posted by: ...navina...

RES😊.

EDITED :

Yikes!!!!!!!!!! What an eerie looking graphic! When I said this yesterday , I had no idea how terrifying the chapter was going to be !!!!! But it was spectacular👏👏👏.

U know Gargi , I thought no-one could surpass Andy in the "EVIL" stakes ... but after reading this update, YOU are the NEW QUEEN

of EVIL .

Awesome job on the chapter 👍🏼 .

Vishal was only looking at Manyata as his "million dollar property"😡. Good , he got what he got. He deserved every bit of it ( AND I GUESS , THERE'S MORE TO COME )

The attack on him was utterly scary . Was it a ghost or a ghoul or a spirit or a witch ??? So many questions I have 😕. But 1 thing i know for sure , was ; that it was something super-natural .

I think Shab stated that it might be 1 of those atma's from Mayong ... I agree with that, especially after the message that was given in the end . Those spirits know everything , therefore they must have known about Vishal's intention of coming between Shaurya and Manyata ... and they did something about it !!!!!!!

Manyata's visit to Uday Niwas was nice , but why didn't she "join the dots" about Shaurya and Uday yet. It was right in front of her and she failed to make the connection😡. Kurwaki got her work done ... but what's in that book 😕? Could it be a journal of Chand's😳?

Lastly ... I missed Uday

Really waiting for the next chapter .

Please update soon😊.

I loved this part ❤️.

(I'm sure you'll get more than 30 "LIKES" for this piece)!!!

Thanks for the 2 PM's😉.

Okay , I'm off now ... GOOD-BYE .

Originally posted by: serat

niceee updateee yaar
contiuneee
👍🏼

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

Great update Gargi
Sorry for the late comment
But I am commenting now, right?
Great start to a new book...creepy, I must say.
Where is Shaurya aka Uday gone? 😭
Manyata borrowed (stole) a book and Kurwaki wanted her to do that...I so want to know the content of book
And lastly, who is the new villain of the villain?
Thanks for the pm and update soon.

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Your comments were so sweet and encouraging..Yes ill update tonight and m still writing...will try to make the second book up to the reader's mark..😊...The plot just came to my mind all of a sudden n its future is still in progress as i have many new ideas coming up everyday😆...So lets see how it turns out...I knwo in today's world we don't have such lovers thatswhy trying to idealise one in my story..😉...but even here Manyata is full of errors and Shaurya is not an exception as well. we have a hero with flaws😊...

Will PM you for sure but plz send me a buddy req so that i don't forget to PM you

Love Gargi

Originally posted by: ricna

🤗 YOU WELCOME GARG. HONESTLY LIKE I TOLD YOU BEFORE. YOUR STORY IS SUPAFANTABOULOUS AND BRILLIANT AND DOES NOT GET THE RECOGNITION AND APPRECIATION IT DESERVES. YOU DONT DESERVE 30 LIKES, THIS DESERVES ATLEAST 60. NONE THE LESS I AM ONE OF THOSE PEOPLE THAT ADMIRE AND RECOGNISE YOUR IMMENSE TALENT. HATS OFF TO YOU. AND MIGHT I SAY BRILLIANT UPDATE, FULL OF GLOOM AND EERIENESS. I HAD GOOSEFLESH WHILE READING IT, VISHAL THAT TWERP DESERVES WHAT HE GOT. I LOVE THE SUPERNATURAL ELEMENT IN THIS STORY THATS WHAT MAKES IT SO DIFFERNET AND LOOKING FORWARD TO READ. ITS TRUE IN LIFE NOTHING IS PERFECT LIKE MANYATA'S FLAWS, SHAURYA HAS THEM TOO. COMPROMISING AND ACCEPTING THE FLAWS IS WHAT MAKES THE RELATINSHIP, LIKE THEY SAY YOU CANT HAVE GOOD WITHOUTH A BIT OF BAD😆😉

ONCE AGAIN... AWESOME AND THANKS FOR PM... CONTINUE SOON