Manveer FF: You mean the world to me. - Page 2

Originally posted by: catty2000

<font color="#ff0099" size="2">Nice concept and character sketch !</font>

<font color="#ff0099" size="2">After a long time there is something quite new in the forum😉</font>

<font color="#ff0099" size="2">Waiting fortheupdates !</font>

<font color="#ff0099" size="2">And fortheCONFUSION to be cleared !</font>

<font color="#ff0099" size="2">Do PM me !</font>

Thanks alot! Will update soon.

Originally posted by: huma12.

awsssmmm continueee sooonnn sanah

thanks and will update tomorrow.

Originally posted by: serat

continueee
plzzz
updatteee

will update tomorrow.

u didn't mention any thing about uday why????

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

u didn't mention any thing about uday why????

I dont need to mention uday because he is always there in our hearts. Just joking. uday's character is the same as it was in dekha ek khwab.

Chapter 1:
someone opened the door and said mom!
ayesha: pia
pia: yes its me. Mom app apne banayai howai rules follow nahi karti.
Ayesha: meaning?
Pia: meaning that you always tell me to change my clothes immediately after i came back from school so why didnt you change your office clothes?
Ayesha: i was just going to change. Vaise I hope meri little angel nai koi badmaashi nahi ki hogi ajj school mai.
Pia: mom i didnt do any badmaashi you know that i am a good girl.
Ayesha: yeah i know kai tum kitni achi ho. Now go change and make sure you drink your milk which i have kept in your room.
Pia: okay i will drink the milk and where is my chocolate?
Ayesha: chocolate after you drink milk.
Pia: not fair but its okay my hitler mom.
Ayesha: so my baby is angry with me?
Ayesha goes and kisses pia on the cheek.
Pia: i cannot be angry with you mom and hugs ayesha. I love you mom.
Ayesha:i love too baby, now go change.
Pia goes out of the room.
Jaighar palace in mumbai:
jay:hey! Jay n unnati hug.
unnati: jay you are here in the morning, is everything alright?
Jay: yeah everything is alright actually dad told me to give this file to uncle giri or uday.
Unnati: dad is not at home aur dada... I think dada has come.
Unnati's phone starts ringing and she says: jay you sit down, i will attend this call and be back in a minute.
Jay: yeah
unnati leaves from there and uday enters the palace with a girl.
Girl: bye darling i will see you later.
Uday: bye.
Uday goes by jay and jay gives him a disgusted look.
Uday: hello jay. tum mujay greet nahi karogi? Someone is burning, jay are you J? Jay: hum aur jealous, you wish. Uday tum apne butterflyland se bahar aawogai tabhi to hum tum hai greet karenge.
Uday: butterflyland?
Jay: tumhari vo despo butterflies(girls). Uday dont forget that you are jiji's property.
Uday: like how jagat is your property.
Jay: jagat is my friend not my property.
Uday: thats how i am manyata's fiance and not property. hum tumharai jijusa hai isliye adab se humara naam lo aur tum nahi humai aap kahkai pukaro.
Jay: so why do you forget that you are jiji's fiance when you are flirting with those despos. Hum tumhai adab se kyu pukari vo bhi jijusa maankar jab kai hum tumhai apne jiji kai layak nahi samajte. Even if jiji is not here but we still love her and when she returns back i will make sure she gets a better lifepatner then you.
Unnati comes.
Unnati: jay you gave dada the file?
Jay: unnati give this file to uncle giri.
Jay gives the file to unnati and starts going.
unnati: jay
jay doesn't listen and leaves from there.
Unnati: dada what happened?
Uday leaves from there without answering.
Unnati:O God not again!
Hope you guys like it. Plz hit the like button and do comment.

wowww
really goood
but ayesha is manayta right
and how she have a daughter
???????
buttt
is really good

nice update...

and manyata has
a daughter.
sounds interesting.

will wait for ur
next udate.

Wow nice update
Pai manveer ki beti hai na
do pm me n cntinue soon