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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: sanah12

Fantastic updates, really loved it! Glad that jay changed. Hate that stupid minakshi. Hope uday n manyata's differences sort out soon. Do continue soon n thanks for the link.



thanx dear 😊 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

plzzz update next prt we r waiting



Hmmm will update it very soon..! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Here is the next chapter😉
CHAPTER 3
After three months- DS ab ekdum thik ho gayi hai so manyata helps her DS in all her riyasat work. bt because of some important work DS and Brijraj are out of India so manyata is doing all her work and Jai, Vijay, Unnati helps her in her work. Manyata was keeping herslf busy, she never showed her pain, bt still everyday she ws thinking about Udayveer. Jai unnati and vijay knew that and they couldn't see her like that bt as they promised her that they wont discuss on Uday topic in front of her So now they had to think of a way to get him back in her life..

Uday was in London from last 3 months. He decided not to go back to India. he kept himself busy in buissness..

At Uday Nivas-
It was dinner time so Giriraj was already there at dining table waiting for unnati. unnati came there and hugged him
Unnati- Hello dad, nd sorry i know i'm late
Giriraj- it's ok bete... come and seat here

Unnati sad beside him and both started their dinner.suddenly Giriraj's cell rang. He excused him to attend the call. After 5 min he came there and sat beside unnati..
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Daima- She is mother of Giriraj and grandmother of Uday and Unnati... she stays in Jaigarh.
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Unnati- kya hua dad kiska phone tha?? or aap itne tension me kyu dikh rahe ho..??
Giriraj- beta jaigarh se call aya tha Daima ki tabyet achanak se bohot kharab hui hai.islie hame kal subhe hi jaigarh jana padega lekin..
unnati- lekin kya dad? kuch problem hai kya?
giriraj- lekin yaha pe kaam bhi sambhalna hai or 2 din baad hame shastriji k beti ki shadi bhi attend karni thi aapko to pata hai Shastri ji mahasabha ke head me se ek hai or hamare family se koi nahi jaaega to unhe accha bhi nahi lagega.
unnati- Ohhhoo dad sirf itnisi baat pe aap itna kyu soch rahe ho?? hum hai na, hum sab sambhal lenge or shaadi bhi attend karenge. filal toh aapko jaigarh jaake daima ke sath rehna chahie.
giriraj- Thank you beta, agar uday yahape hote toh hum unhehe shaadi ki reception party me bhej dete bt ab tum ho toh hame fikar karneki koi jaroorat nahi..chalo beta ab hum hamare kamre ja rahe hai kuch kam bhi karna hai.. suddenly unnati ke dimag me plan aata hai and she stopped her dad and said

Unnati- dad wo actually hum soch rahe the ke kuch dino ke liye aap dada ko yaha India me kyu nahi bula lete.. fir wo hamari help bhi karenge yahake sab kam me or waisebhi agar me akeli reception party me jaungi to wo accha bhi nahi lagega. or bohot din ho gaye dada waha london me hai islie hum chahte the ki kuch din agar wo yahape aaenge toh hum unke sath rahe..

giriraj- ha beta waise aapki baat to sahi hai. hum chahte hai ki kuch dino ke liye wo yaha hamare sath rehne ke liye aae lekin aapko toh pata hai ki udayveer yaha wapis aaneke liye jaroor mana karenge.

unnati- hmm lekin hume ekbar try krna chahie unse puchkar..

giriraj- ok beta agar aap itna keh rahi hai to hum abhi unhe call karke India wapis bula lete hai. saying this he dialled his no.

unnati's thoughts- " ohh god plzz dada maan jaye india aane ke liye.. plzz"

At London
Uday ws in his room. he was drinking and still thinking of manyata. suddenly his phone rang. It ws his dad's call, he received it and said
Uday- Hello Dad.. kaise ho??
giriraj- hum toh thik hai bete, aap kaise ho??
uday- hum bhi thik hai dad.. waise bohot dino baad call kiya aaj aapne..?
giriraj- bete call toh aap bhi kar sakte hai na
uday-really srry dad wo hum buissness me.. cutt off by giriraj
giriraj-It's ok bete wo hume pata hai.. wo sab chhodiye humne aapko isliye call kiya tha kyuki, actually beta hume kal hi jaigarh jana padega daima ki tabyet achanakse bohot kharab ho gayi hai toh yahaka sab kaam hamne unnati ko diya hai lekin wo akeli to sabpe dhyan nahi de paegi or 2 din baad shastriji ke beti ki reception party me bhi jana tha lekin hum wahape nahi ja paenge isliye hum chahte hai ki kuch dino ke liye aap India aajaiye..
Uday doesn't want to go india so he said-
uday- wo dad actually hume yahape bohot kam hai or party me to aap unnati ko bh... cut off by giriraj
giriraj-ohh toh aisa konsa kam hai jo aapko apne dadse bhi jyada jaroori lagta hai.dekho uday ab hum aapse puch nahi rahe balki aapko bata rahe hai ki kal hi aap konsi bhi flight se india wapis aaiye busss.. ab iske aage hum kuch sunna nahi chahte hai or ye kehtehi girirajne phone cut kr diya.
uday- lekin dad.. helloo... ye kya dad ne hamari baat sune nina phone cut kr diya.ab to hamare paas koi option hi nahi hai .. ab hame India jana hi padega.

At uday nivas-
unnati ws waiting for dad in hall.. giriraj came ther with a smille on his fac.
unnati-kya hua dad ?? dada ne kya kaha aapse??
giriraj- humne unhe bolne hi nahi diya kyuki agar hum aisa karte to wo india aanse jaroor inkar karte isliye humne sidhe unhe order de di..
unnati- matlab dada India aarahe hai??
Giriraj nodded and said yes.
Now unnati was really very happy. she hugged him and said-
unnati-wWoww dad aapne to suchme kamal kar diya. thank u so much. hum bohot khush hai.
Giriraj- waise bete hame pata hai aap itni khush kyu hai or hume ye bhi pata hai ki uday ko aapne india bulane ke bareme kyu socha..

Now unnati ws shockd and broke the hug.. she didn't know what to say..

giriraj- dekho beta hume pata hai aapne dada ko isliye bulaya kyuki aap manyata or uday ko firse ek karna chahti hai. lekin uday aaj London kiske wajese hai ye toh aapko acchese pata hai. manyata unhe pehle bhi bohot baar hurt kiya hai or hum nahi chahte the ki wo yahape rehke uske wajese or hurt ho isliye humne bhi unhe London jaanese roka nahi. firbhi hum apko ek chance dena chahte hai un dono ko eksath laane ke liye.. lekin agar firse us manyatane uday ko hurt kiya to humne soch liya hai ki uday ka rishta kisi or ladki ke sath kr denge..

unnati- dad dont worry aisa kuch bhi nahi hoga ham sab thik kar denge.and really thank u dad dada ko yaha laane me hamari madat karne k liye. but dad aapko kaise pata chala humari dimag me kya chal raha tha?
giriraj- bete hum apko nahi samjenge toh or kon samjega?? akhir me hum apke dad hai..chalo ab hum apne kamre me jate hai kuch kam bhi hai or bag bhi pack karna hai.
unnati- ok dad bye.gud nyt..

unnati's thought- ye gud news sunke jai or vijay dono bhi bohot khush ho jaenge ham kal subhe hi waha jake unhe ye gud news bata denge
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At London- in uday's room--
uday in his mind- " agar humne dad ki baat suni nahi to unhe bohot bura lagega.. ab toh hume india jana hi padega. lekin waha janeke baad hum jitna ho sake utna uss manyata ko avoid karenge' and he started for packing. suddenly minakshi came in his room and saw uday packing his bags.

minakshi- uday ye tum packing kyu kar rahe ho ?? kahi ja rahe ho kya??
uday- haan minakshi hum kal hi India jaa rahe hai isliye..
minakshi- India?? lekin kyu uday??
uday- wo dad ne bulaya hai.. unhe kuch reason ke wajese jaigarh jana hai. to kuch unka kam sambhalneke liye hum ja rahe hai or wo shastriji ke beti ke shadi bhi attnd krni hai.

minakshi in her mind- " ohh God ye uncle ko bhi abhi jaigarh jana tha. agar uday india gaya toh jaroor manyatase milega or agar usse milne ke baad... nahi minakshi ye kya soch rahi hai.. hum uday ko manyata ke paas firse jane nahi de sakteakhir humne itna w8 kiya hai uday ke lie..hume bhi uday ke sath india jana chahie. after all i dont want to take any risk."

minakshi- uday wo actually hum soch rahe the ki hame bhi aapke sath india chalna chahie. bohot din ho gaye hum mom dadse nahi mile.
uday- lekin tum bhi india aaogi to yahaka kam kon sambhalega?
minakshi-are uski chinta mat karo hum wo sab sambhal lenge.
waise kal hum kab ja rahe hai?
uday-hume kal hi subhe ki flight se jana padega to ab tum bhi jake bags pack kr lo.
minakshi- ok to ab hum chalte. kal milenge. bye gud nyt.. uday also said bye to her.
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Next day at Devgarh palace-
manyata, jai and vijay were siting in study room suddenly unnati came there and said HI! to everyone
unnati- jai 2 min jara hamaresath chalo na hame kuch apse kam hai. jai nodded and both left the study room
jai- kya hua unnati??
unnati- hamare paas ek gudnews hai jo sunke tum jaroor bohot hi khush ho jaaogi.
jai asked her with teasing mode- ohhoo vijay bhai ne tumhi kahi le jake propose kiya kya?? 😆
unnati- No jai😡.. hum toh dada ke bareme baat kar rahe the..
jai- kya?? uday ke bareme gud news?? kya uday india wapas aaraha hai kya??
unnati nodded and said yes
jai- ohh shitt I can't beleive this..tumne toh sachme achi khabar dedi.. saying this she hugged unnati. just that vijay and manyata came there and saw them..
vijay said loudly- heeyyy Bhagwaan yeh hum kya dekh rahe hai... yeh dekhnese pehle hi hame... cut off bye jai
jai-shutt upp vijay banna😡.. aisa kuch sochna bhi mat..
manyata giggld and said- unnati tumne aise konsi bat jai ko batayi jo sunke wo itni khush ho gayi jara hame bhi to batao..
At that time Dr. sahab came there and said to manyata- "manyata bete dadisaab ka abhi phone aya tha toh wo keh rahi thi ki unka kam pura hone me or kuch time lagega to wo kuch din wahapehi rukengi or kal reception party me bhi ja nahi paaegi toh unhone aapko waha jane ke liya kaha hai.

After hearing this unnati and jai looked at each other with a big smile on face.
manyta- lekin dr. sahab ab hum kisi bhi party me jana nahi chahte.
unnati- lekin manyata agar wahape devgarh family se koi nahi jaaega to shastrijiko bilkul accha nahi lagega..
manyata- ha baat toh sahi kahi tumnse.. to thik hai, jai and vijay kal ke party me tumlog chale jana.
vijay- ohk manyata bhai thikkk...that time jai stomped on his feet..
vijay- Oouchhh...
manyata- kya hua vijay banna??
jai- wo jiji mene aapko bataya tha na ke me kal K and L ke sath bahar ghumne jaa rahi hu or vijay bhai bhi hamare saath aaraha hai kyuki koi toh car chalane ki liye chahiye na..
vijay looked at jai with angry face..😡
manyata- ab god ab kya karu me?? Dr. sahab kyu na aap hi chale jaiye shaadi me waisebhi aap bhi to hamare family ke sadsya (membr) hai..
sudenly sumone came there and he was Rohan Raizada

Rohan Raizada- he is a rich industrialist and Ajay Raizada's only son. He was living in Dubai. and met manyata in buissness meeting. after some time they became very good frndz.. rohan started to like her and he decides to propose her, not now bt on ryt time..!

Rohan- kaha jane ki baat ho rahi hai?? jara hame bhi toh pata chale.. saying this he came inside
jai- are rohan accha hua jo tum aa gaye.. hum jiji ko bol rahe the ki kal reception party me jaye lekin ye toh...
rohan- ohkk matlab wo shastriji ke beti ki shadi .. ryt jai???
jai- ha yarr wahi ..
rohan- waha to kal hum bhi jaa rahe hai chaho to tum hamare sath waha aa sakti ho manyata.
jai- ohh great idea rohan.. jiji tumhare saath hi jaegi kal party me.. hai na jiji??
Now manyata had no option so she nodded .. (now manyata and rohan are talking somthng in hall..)

now a big smile came on jai and unnati's face😃.. unnati winkd at jai .. and both started to discuss somthing at the corner of the hall.. vijay saw them there, he knew somethng is cooking in their mind so he wald towrds them and askd-

vijay- jara hame bhi toh pata chale akhir tum dono ke dimag me chal kya raha hai??
jai- Sshhh... vijay banna itne jorse mat bolo..
jai and unnati told him the plan...
now vijay cant control himslf 😃 and said loudly- kyaa sach me Uday...
jai- Ssshhh.. 😡vijay bhai aap apna mu band nahi rakh sakte kya??
vijay- sorry jai bhai..

Manyata said bye to rohan.. she heard vijay's voice so she came towrds them and askd- " kya hua vijay banna aap kuch keh rahe the kya??
Now vijay didn't know wht to say..
vijay- haa wo... wo actually hum jai se puch rahe the ki 'Udhar shadi me to bohot log aaenge wo bhi full tayari me.. to manyata ko bhi ek accha dress pehenna chahie..
Jai and unnati breathed a sigh of relief and unnati said-
unnati- han manyata to tum kal kya pehen ke jaaogi? chalo hum tumhare shopping ke liye chalte hai
jai- hmm great idea unnati
manyata- jai and unnati waha koi fashion show nahi hai jo hum itni tayari karke jaye.. hum koi saari pehen ke jaenge..
jai- ok jiji toh kal hum aapko ready karenge..
manyata- ok baba.. waise ab hum kuch kam krne ja rahe hai to tumlogse baadme baat krte hai.. she said bye and left threesome behind.
jai - ab toh hume sirf kal ke din ka intezaar hai..
vijay- I Tell You..!!
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On Next Day-
Uday and minakshi are back to India.
uday- ok minakshi ab hum chalte.. bye
Both said bye to each other and leave to their place

Now Uday reachd at uday nivas-
after seeing his home a smile came on his face. he came inside and saw unnati there watching TV. unnati also saw her dada and ran to hug him
unnati- dada i missed u so much
uday- i missed u too choti..
unnati- broke the hug and said angrily- lekin hum aap pe gussa hai.. london jane ke baad to aap hume bhul hi gaye.. call bhi nahi karte the.. hamesha hamehi apko call karna padta tha..
uday- ohh choti m really srry.. nd hum hamari little princess ko bhala kaise bhul sakte hai.. waise ab hume andar ane bhi dogi ya fir yahipe sawal karti rahogi..
unnati- ohh haa.. srry.. i think ab aapko apne kamre jake aaram kr lena chahie.. aapko evening ko reception me bhi to jana hai. lekin usse pehle aap kuch kha lijiye.. ham abhi aapke liye khana lagwa dete hai
uday nodded and said- ok choti hum abhi fresh hoke niche aate hai..
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IN Evening- at Manyata's room-
manyata- jai ye saari pehnu ya yeh wali??
jai- jiji ye dono bhi bakwass hai. I think ab hamehi koi acchi saari dhundni padegi. tabhi jai ne manyata ke cupbrd me se ek red saari nikali and kaha
jai- jiji i think ye wali saari aap pe acchi dikhegi..
vijay- hmm jai bhai ne bilkul sahi kaha.. aap yahi sari pehen ke jaiye manyata bhai.
manyata- ok thik hai hum abhi ye saari pehen ke aate hai..
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at uday room..
Uday was ready to go in reception party. suddenly unnati came there. and stood behind him.
unnati- waahh kya baat hai dada.. aaj aap kuch jyada hi dashing dekh rahe ho.kahi shastiji ki beti aapko dekhkar apni pati ko chodker aapse shadi karne ka decision na le
uday laughed at unnati and said-
uday- waise choti accha hi hai na fir aapko bhi ek bhabhi mil jaegi..
saying this he winkd at unnati.
unnati- nahi dada hume bilkul accha nahi lagega agar aap kisi or ke patni ko hamari bhabhi banakr laenge to.
uday laughed again and said- " choti don't worry hum aisa kuch karenge bhi nahi. waise aap abhi tak tayar kyu nahi hui ho??'
unnati- wo dada.. actualy woo...
uday- choti 'wo' ke aage bhi kuch kahogi kya??
unnati- wo dada hamare pet aaj thoda dard hai isliye socha aaram kar le..
uday- kyaa?? iska matlab ab hame akele jana padega waha
unnati- ohho dada aap akele thode na rahoge wahape bohot sari ladkiya bhi to rahengi aapke piche piche..
Uday's thought- " iska matlab waha manyata bhi ho sakti hai .. ohh no iske bareme toh hamne socha hi nahi..
unnati waves her hand in front him and askd- ohoo dada ab kya soch rahe ho aap?? jaldise jaiye nahitoh reception party khatam hone ke baad wahape pohoch jaenge..
uday- waise unnati tumhe toh pata hoga devgarh family se kon aaraha hai party me..?
now unnati didn't knw what to say becz if she say the truth she knew uday definately wont go there..
unnati- wo dada shayad DS hi jaengi wahape..kyu kya hua?
suddenly his cell rang. it ws minakshi.
minakshi- uday tum kahape ho?? hum to kabke pohonch bhi gaye party me..
uday- whaatt?? lekin minakshi tum kaise?? cut off bye minakshi-
minakshi- wo actually dad ko time nahi tha toh hamne socha hum hi chale jate hai..
uday knew she was lieing becoz he knew her very well..
uday- ok ok hum bus abhi nikal rahe hai.. to waha pehi milte hai
unnati- wo minakshi bhi wahape hai?? heey bhagwaan ye dayn mere dada ka picha kab chodegi? dada plzz uss minakshi se jara durr hi rahiye.. hume wo bilkul pasand nahi..
uday- ok baba choti jaise aap kahe,.. chalo ab hum chalte he huggd her and said bye..

At manyata's palace-
She ws ready and waiting for Rohan because he said that he will cum to pick her .. tabhi rohan usse calll karke bata deta hai ki he is waiting for her outside the palace.. she came outside and saw rohan near the car..
when she ws coming to car he saw manyata in red sari.
Rohan in his mind- " Oh My Godd..she is looking so awsome in this red saari.. hamari toh nazar hi nahi hat rahi hai.. koi b itna khubsurat kaise ho sakta hai..
manyata waves her hand in front of him and said
manyata- oye rohan ke bacche kya soch rahe ho?? hame aaj hi party me jana hai. agar aise yaha khade rahoge to hum kal tak bhi pohoch nahi paaenge waha..
Rohan smiled and said- ab kya kare hum bhi.. tum aaj itni acchi jo dikh rahi ho.. hamara to man hi nahi kar raha yahase hilne ka..
manyata- agar teri bakwas ho gayi hogi toh kya hum chale??
rohan smiled and said- ok miss manyata aap itna keh rahi hai to chalte hai pehlecar me to bethiye..
manyata sat in d car and soon they left the palace..
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Now at reception party-
Uday reached there every girls' eyes were on uday now.they were whispering looking at him. minakshi saw him and walkd towrds him.
minakshi- atlast tum aagaye.. hum kabse tumhara wait kar rahe the..
uday gave her a fake smile and both walkd inside.

Now manyata and rohan also reaches at the party.
Rohan entered in party with manyata on his arm. everyone's eyes were on the gorgeous manyata. everyone was looking t the couple and whispering something about them..
Just that time uday and minakshi saw them..
after seeing manyata uday in his mind- "princess.. OHh Godd you r killing me now.you are looking so hot in this red saari that i can't control myself..he started getting angry thinking- ye hum kya soch rahe hai or wo bhi uss manyata ke bareme. hume ab usse avoid karna padega chahe kuch bhi ho jaye hum usse dekhenge hi nahi.." and he started to leave.. minakshi stopped him
minakshi- kaha ja rahe ho??
uday- wo hum drink le ne ja rahe hai. saying this he left..
minakshi in her mind- oh god is manyata ko bhi abhi ana tha iss party me.. isne to sara mood kharab kar diya.. waise accha hai uday nahi to kisi or ke sath aagayi yahape.. usse us ladeke ke sath dekh ke uday ko manyata ka or bhi gussa aaega.."

Manyata saw uday in party. after seeing him she thought to herself- " uday yahape kaise?? nahi yarr manyata wo to london me hai wo yaha kaise ho sakta hai.. jaroor kisi or ko dekha hoga mene.."

rohan waves his hand in front of her and askd...
rohan- miss manyata ab aap kya soch rahi hai?? agar apka soch k hogaya hoga to kya hum andar chale..?
manata nodded and both entred in the party...
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hushhh atlast this chap is over..🥱 guys plz bear with my mistakes.. and yeah if u lyk d chap press like.. i knw again in this chap there was no manveer scene.. bt i'll write it in nxt chapt.. hope u guys will lyk this chapter... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Yaay
I m first to comment ...

Great Chapter
Glad Unnati 's plan worked and
UV came back 2 india ...
Giriraj wishes to give M a chance
he must want UV's happiness

I like Rohan
I hope i get to see a jealous Uday
thanks for de Pm cont soon...
Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update dear!!👏

it was really nice and beautifully written, you are a awesome writer!!😳

please update asap😳
&
thanks 4 the link😃

Edited by -Zina- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: -Zina-

Awesome update dear!!👏

it was really nice and beautifully written, you are a awesome writer!!😳

please update asap😳
&
thanks 4 the link😃



aww reallyy thax dear😃.. m glad that u lykd it.. nd yeah i'll try to update nxt part tomorrow..!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anushruthi


Yaay
I m first to comment ...

Great Chapter
Glad Unnati 's plan worked and
UV came back 2 india ...
Giriraj wishes to give M a chance
he must want UV's happiness

I like Rohan
I hope i get to see a jealous Uday
thanks for de Pm cont soon...


thanx a lot dear.. and yeah i'll pm u.. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yaaarrr upfate next prt quickly and i loked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

yaaarrr upfate next prt quickly and i loked it



hehe 😛 okay okay i'll try to update it tomorrw..!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsssmmm updateee taniyaaa love it too the coreee thanksss 4pm

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