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rockingal09

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi everyone!! I'm Taniya and m going to write a lovestory on Manveer and dis is my 1st tym 😉
M nt sure if its an SS or FF, it depends on the responses that i gt from everyone!!
I couldn't think of a title so I left it as L.O.V.E.

chapter 1-page2
chapter 2-page4
chapter 3-page5
chapter 4-page 12
chapter 5-page 26

Edited by rockingal09 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

All da best for ur first ff/ss! looking forward to read it...update soon!😛

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Looking forward for to read it. Update soon!

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Looking forward to read it. Update soon!

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Posted: 12 years ago

go ahead taani.
waiting for update

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Taniya, Looking forward to reading your story😳. Good luck Dear 😃!

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rockingal09

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Posted: 12 years ago

thanx all of u.. 😊
i'll update it in 2-3 dayz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Looking forward to read your story !

Do go ahead !

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manisha98

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Posted: 12 years ago

lukin ahead 4r ur story dea...!!

do start soon!!

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rockingal09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#10

CHAPTER 1
Hello guyz...😊
This is how I wanted DEKHA EK KHWAAB to go. All characters are the sa,e as DEK ! Story is exactly the same. The story will take on various twists and be quite challenging. Now Manyata's character is slightly matured. This story starts from the wedding day of Udayveer and Manyata, when Manyata had gone to meet Akash for the last time to say Goodbye!!

CHARACTER SKETCH :-
DEVGARH FAMILY-
Rajmata Mrinali Devi : Maharani of Devgarh riyasat. she is like a typical maharani. Mother of Brijraj and Menaka and Grandmother of Manyata Jai and Vijay.

Maharaj Brijraj : Son of Rajmata and father of Manyata and Jai.

Maharani Komal ; Daughter in law of rajmata, wife of Brijraj and mother of Manyata and Jai.

Manyata : Manyata is a uvrani of Devgarh. She is beautiful, bubbly girl. she is daughter of komal and Brijraj. She loves her family.

Jai : She is younger sister of princess Manyata, who lost her love Udayveer to Manyata. now she is trying to get him back from her.

Vijay : son of Menaka and cousin of Manyata and Jai.

JAIGARH FAMILY-
Maharaj Giriraj : The maharaj of Jaigarh. He is father of Udayveer and Unnati.

Udayveer : Udayveer is a uvraaj of Jaigarh. He is son of Giriraj. He is handsome, dream of every girl but he loves only Manyata. He is elder brother of Unnati.

Unnati : Daughter of Giriraj and younger sister of Udayveer. She is very sweet and she loves Uday and Manyata with all her heart.

NOW STORY STARTS FROM THERE :-
She is coming back to palace and Atlast Manyata said Goodbye to Akash and requested him to not come in her future life again.😃 Because she realised her love for Uday and in her heart there is no place for Akash. Now it ws for Uday only and only Uday is everything for her, Uday is her life!!
She reachd Devgarh palace. She ws very happy because she thought- now everything will b fine and today she is going to marry her love, her prince, her Uday after that she will bcme his Maharan.. Maharani of Jaigarh. When she reachd inside the palace she saw noone there. then she saw seema there and asked her-
Manyata: sablog kaha hai ??
seema: uvraani ji sab log toh...
Tabhi pichese avaj ata hai wo koi or nayi to briraj the, unke sath sablog waha aajate hai sivay Uday ke
Brijraj: hum sab yahapehi hai ur highness.. aapkahi intejaar kar rahe the hum sab.
Manyata: kya hua papa aap aise kyu baat kar rahe hai? or Udayveer kahape hai?? wo kyu nayi dikhai de raha???
sablog ye sun ke shaant ho jate hai.. Manyata after 5 min observing everyone's reaction, she gt tensd nw
Manyata: kya hua sab ko koi kuch bol kyu nayi raha?? please koi to batao Uday kahape hai?? mujhe usse jaroori baat karni hai. then she lookd at jai and saw her smiling there. she asked her- kahi iss jai ne mere udayse shaadi to nayi karli??
Jai: Ooh jiji ab bus bhi kijiye ye natak. Ek toh shadi ke din mandapse bhaag ke chali jaati ho uss Majnu ke liye or baadme wapas aakar yahape sabke saamne innocent banne ka natak kati ho.
After heard this jai's words she said her in angry tone..
Mnyata: bass kar Jai ek to tere wajese hi me waha gayi thi. tunehi mujhe ulta sidha bol kar bhaagne me madat ki or ab bholi banne ka natak kar rahi hai. hum dono ko bhi pata hai ki such kya hai. toh please jai or jhoot mat bol.
Tabhi pichese Uday gusseme waha aata hai or usse dekhtehi giriraj, brijraj and komal unhe waha chodne ka sochte hai and wahase apne kamre me chale jaate hai.

Uday: ab bass karo bohot ho chuka.. Actually natak Jai nayi balki tum kar rahi ho manyata. Jai hamesha tumhare baareme sahi bolti thi lekin galti hamari thi jo hamne uski baat nahi suni. hame toh laga tha abtak sudhar bhi gayi hogi tum lekin nahi tum toh wohi Chwal ki anpad gawar ladki ho. galat the hum jo ye soch kar bethe ki ek na ek din tum jaroor sudhar jaaogi or hume apna logi lekin nahi tumne toh hamesha ki tarah hume firse galat sabit kar diya.
Now manyata was really hurtd by Uday's words, tears strts to fall down frm her eyes..
manyata: nahi Uday me sach bol rahi hu.. aaj me mandapse bina kuch bataye chali toh gayi thi lekin bhaag ke nahi balki Akash ko Bye bolne ke liye or hamesha hamesha ke liye hum dono ki life se nikalne ke liye or...cut off by uday
Uday: bass karo manyata ab or jhoot mat bolo kyuki ab hum or jhoot nahi sunna chahte or ha ye rone ka natak band karo kyuki ab in aasuo ka (tears) ka humper koi asar nahi hone wala. or hoga bhi kaise kyuki aajtak tumne hume sirf dhoka hi diya hai or aaj bhi aapne wahi kiya ur highness!! hame toh laga tha ki aap ab samjdar hogayi hai or saare faisle soch samajkar le sakti hai lekin as usual aapne toh isme bhi hame wrong prove kiya ur highness.lekin ab bass bohot hogaya. ab hum aapko firse hamari kife se khelne nahi de sakte. aapko jana hi hai na toh jaaiye aapke uss majnusehi shaadi kr lijiye kyuki ab hamare life me aapke liye koi jagah nahi hai ur highness..

Manyata: Nahi Uday please aise mat bolo.. ek baar meri baat toh sunlo. ek chance to do mujhe please..

Uday: Shayad aapne suna nahi hamne kya kaha. thik hai hum hi chale jate hai yahase.. uday grabbd unnati's hand and left the palace.

After this Jai ws smiling evily and said " Congratulations Jiji!! now u are free from all responsibilities, free to live uy life with your Aakash."

Manyata broken on hearing everything Uday has said. she could not say anything as Uday refused to listen her, he was very angry on her. but then she turnd back to jai and said-

Manyata: jai I hope u are happy because now you got whatevr u wanted. so Congratulations Jai !!
After saying this she ran to her room leaving Vijay and smug Jai standing there. But vijay ran after her leaving Jai alone.Jai did not know why but she felt bad.
Jai to herself : " Why am i feeling like this?? I got wht I wanted but still i'm feeling like empty and i have noone to share this happiness."

Now at Uday's palace-
Uday was packing his bags and he is rushing the servants to hurry up in his packing. Unnati saw that and came inside the room
and asked-
Unnati : Dada now where are u going?? why are u packing ur bags??please dada before this anything I think u should give 1 chance to Manyata.
Uday: Choti please I dont want to talk about this anymore. I'm tired of this game. bas ab or nahi choti
Unnati: but dada... cut off bye uday
Uday: choti hamne kaha na hame iske baareme baat nahi karni or waise bhi hamare paas ab itne time bhi nahi hai. kuch hi samay me hamari london ki flight hai.
Unnati: whaat???? 😲 aap abhi london jaa rahe hai?? but y dada??
Uday: kyuki hamne already apna bohot time waste kiya hai lekin ab nahi.. ab hum hamare buissness me dhyaan dena chahte hai or waisebhi hum ab iss sabse bahar aana chahte hai.
Uday took his bags and walkd to his var, turned around and looked at unnati who had tears in her eyes, hugged her and said " Choti ab iske baareme jyada mat sochne and ha apna khayal rakhna" and then he got in his car and drove off leaving Unnati standing there..
But Unnati decided to go at Devgarh palace to tell Manyata and Vijay about this and then she also got in her other car.

PRECAP-
Jai realises her mistakes... Unnati will tell manyata, vijay and jai that uday is goin to london... now jai is helping them to get Uday back again...

please excuse the mistakes and errors.. i hope ull lyk it.. plz press like if u like this chapter..

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