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another os adapted from a short story but with my own modified method


uday veer glanced skywards at the wide bands of searchlights probing the jaigarh sky and then went up steps into the library ,his colonel Giriraaj and the rajmata of Devgarh mrinalini devi was waiting and turned a large map of Devgarh ,he opened a a file on his desk and handed uday veer a photograph
DS:this is jaggat he is the head of the army in devgarh two days before we heard that he 'd been taken by the britishers uday veer just in a week the war is going to start
uday veer like every indian had been expecting a war of independence but still the statement came as a shock to him
UDAY:A week???????
DS:yes a week and if there is a leakage about anything then we will be in a huge trouble so you either need to rescue him or murder him
uday veer nodded it was not first time he was doing it the first time he did was before three years when he killed a general soilder Akash Verma who was suspected to help the british but it is only after that he discovered that Akash was innocent ,so this would not be a new experience
UDAY:when is he being held?
griraaj rose and tapped the wall map
GIRIRAAJ:here in devgarh the old prison near the marketplace our mens will be there to help you
UDAY:i will do my best sir

uday knelt on the damp grass and bundled the billowing folds of his parachutes into the hole ,around the wood was quite and deserted ,the expected torch signal were no where to be seen he walked and suddenly his legs slipped and he fell inside a trap he stood trying his best to come up but it was impossible he saw a shadowy figure came up the steps and a hand came ,it was ahnd of no boy but of a girl he caught it ,the hand was so cold yet so soft ,within seconds he fond himself up again he looked at the girl who had helped him ,she was most in the early age of her twenty ,she was beautiful she was wearing a white sari with no jewels her hair was shoulder length and she looked no less than an angle uday was mesmerished by her beauty and fell in love at the first sight ,
GIRL:you are the man send by giriraaj right
UDAY:Yes but you
GIRL:i am manyata i am here to help you this way follow me
she urged him to the town ,the streets were all deserted and took him downthe steps he saw for the first time a gapping hole in the embankment without hesitation she went down and he followed ,grimacing in distaste as the stench of the sewer reached him ,shots sounded behind him and he quickened his pace splashing through the stream of foul water that was dimly lit by moonlight glancing through the drains above
MANYATA:now we go up
above was a large lighted room as they both were seated she smiled with a touch of sadness
UDAY:i do not know how you managed to find me but i am very grateful to you
MANYATA:you needed help and i knew you were coming
UDAY:i was supposed to meet them in the forest what happened?
MANYATA: British officers arrested them someone betrayed ...but still the reason of you coming here is alienated from them
UDAY:you know why i am here
MANYATA:to rescue jaggat
UDAY:yea but i still do not how to manage it
he realished her had not told her his name yet by the invitation he held out his hands
UDAY:i am uday veer singh
she smiled and took his hand in a suprising strong grip
MANYATA:i do not suppose you know where they are keeping Jaggat
UDAY:in the old prison
MANYATA:yes just the room above this one my husband had been there and i often visited him
UDAY:you are married
MANYATA:i was my husband is no more
UDAY;but how did he die
MANYATA:his people thought he betrayed so he was hanged
UDAY:i am so sorry
MANYATA:you should be a long time before
UDAY:i did not get you
MANYATA:OK let us get started i can take you there
UDAY:now
MANYATA:yes night is the best time its darkness enclose most of secrets
UDAY:i think you are right
MANYATA:come we will go
they started but the sewer seemed no end but manyata appeared to know the way and after countless twist and turns they were finally there they opened the door and jaggat lay face downwards on the stone floor his ,they walked to him jaggat was semi conscious uday knew carring him would be the worst idea even he ownself would loose his life so he took out his gun and pointed it at jaggat but manyata caught his wrist in a grip of steel
MANYATA:that is murder
her voice was cold ,as icy as her eyes he felt his his fingure going numb
UDAY:manyata this is the best this i cannot escape with him and if i leave him he might talk so this is the best thing for us
MANYATA:AH the same old story better to sacrifice one life than many but everyone is not akash verma
there was a pitness anger in her voice and bitterness in her voice ,he could have fought but he did not want to risk the noise of her struggle he grabbed her by her waist and dug his nails sharp on her soft waist and pulled her close to him but she just struggle with every struggle his nails dug depper in her
UDAY:i will do what i want and you cannot stop me
he whispered harshly while she looked straight into his eyes and with a hint of sweetness and softness
MANYATA;it sickens you na you too know that every life is precious war demands that we kill but only in our defence you still hate yourself each day for what you did to akash i know but back them there was no one to help you but now you have me
he gave up the fight he let go of her waist and said he felt her grip on her wrist loose he knew she was right ,he was tried of pretanding the cold blooded
UDAY:how do you know about it ?about akash
MANYATA:he have forgiven you
she picked up the gun and handed it to him
MANYATA:put it away
he obeyed her without question
MANYATA:take jaggat on your back and follow me you will run from here then go to the river there is a boat then you ride that and you both will be safe
UDAY:what about you come with me i mean you are just so young to be someone 's widower come along marry me we will stay very happy
MANYATA;i cannot my everything is here laws of nature do not permit me to do so now and now listen even if i cannot make it do not worry do as i said do not wait for me ok
UDAY:but promise me you will take care of yourself
MANYATA:i do even a long time ago someone promised me this same thing
UDAY:so are we going from the back way
MANYATA:no we are leaving by the front door ,we are walking out of there under their nose and keep this it will keep you safe
she handed him a small silver locket uday knew it was sheer madness still he obeyed her orders she unlocked the door with the help of a pin and they both saw many guards
MANYATA:you run and i will be there to handle these dogs
UDAY;are you mad they will open fire st you
MANYATA:do not worry i ahve been through fire before now go bye
he knew he had no other choice he ran hearing behind him the startled sound of the guards ,the sparh click of riffle bolts ,the main gates were open and he finally made it to the river ,he aong with jaggat got on the boat as the current carried them swiftly downstream and looking back he could see an empty embackment a gnawing of fear began inside him ,there had been so much of firing he should have not let her alone but now it was too late to return

giriraaj flung the typewritten report down on his desk and glared at uday
GIRIRAAJ:see boy the rajmata of devgarh is really pleased with you but this report is nonsence where you drunk
UDAY:no i was not and if you do not trust me jaggat or manyata she stays in devgarh
GIRIRAAJ :rubbish you were alone jaggat himself had assured that when you ran with jaggat the guards were unable to shoot straight and put six bullets in there own officer
UDAY:fine according to you manyata is no one giriraaj i touched her she was real ok take this
uday handed the locket to giriraaj he slowly nodded
GIRIRAAJ:to my dearest wife manyata from your husband akash
for a moment uday stared at him half uncomprehending half willing to accept what the inscription implied
GIRIRAAJ:uday veer we all knew that akash was very dearly loved by his wife even we meet her a couple of time during his capture she often came to visit him but after his death even she was set to fire according to the sati rule nearly a year ago i too was present there uday
giriraaj handed the locket
GIRIRAAJ:only you can decide whether your manyata is a ghost or a living human but you should know this locket it a valuable trinket
uday took it with a smile
UDAY:i do know and do not change the report let rajmata thinks as she wants but from now i am doing things manyata 's way fearless and free


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Nice stry thnks for the pm
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WOW Ani , that was brilliant!!!
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