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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: humairaa1
So sorry for the late comment
The update was awesome, loved it
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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

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CHAPTER 6
In the hut akash was extremely tried and sleepy the entire night he had been sleep derived ,as he had strict orders by uday to drug bridgraaj whenever he comes to his sences this kept akash busy the entire time finally the sun rays started to fill in the sky as akash was observing the nature the morning sky looked so magical with all pink lights scattered all over and the birds flying towards the western sky akash had always loved nature he did actually want to become a writer but his father thought that this proffesion would be a disgrade to him so akash quitely accepted the cruel law of nature he killed his dreams and started to study law, then he met uday who was the reason for akash to still be alive ,during one of his exams akash tried to committe sucide but it was uday who saved his life and bought ray of light in his life akash really felt bad for uday he was indeed the biggest detective of India but his own parents were a big mystery that was really awefull ,akash was still indulge in observing nature as all of a sudden he felt a sharp shrill hit on his head and every thing went blank ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
IN THE GUEST HOUSE
Manyata was too sleep derived whole night she kept twisting and turning in the bed .for her every thing was so new she kept thinking about the kiss which was still an unknown yet sweet feeling to her ,she touched her lips and felt her checks going red ,she had never gone close to any boy and he always bought a pleasent feeling to her she could blindly trust him and do any thing for him ,unknown to her brain her heart was expirencing its first love as for uday you can say he had gone insane in love with her ,no girl had ever made him feel so peaceful ,the peck did magic to him staying away from her even for a second toured him to death he did not know what was happening to him why was he so madly in love with her ,what attracted to him probably her innocence but the only thing he knew was that at any point he could not stay away from her they felt an unknown string attached them both to a similar point ...some few hours passed by and now both refreshed themselves and went down for breakfast she was into a green salwar on her way down to the mess but her face was turned pale it had been an entire night yet her father had not return and this thing was not only eating her but also uday even akash had not returned then as she saw uday in the mess she got her life back ,she rushed to him and said
MANYATA :halkat vede do you know where is my dad?
at first uday chocked by listening her slanging him early in the morning but just then he remembered the code system and smiled
UDAY:do not worry he is fine he is with akash
MANYATA;yea but where is he ?
UDAY:princess you trust me no?
MANYATA;yes
UDAY:so just sit down and have your breakfast ok after that we will go out
MANYATA;but dad
UDAY:i said he is fine ok
manyata quitely sat and started to have breakfast while uday himself doubted what he said was really true was bridgraaj really fine .. they had there breakfast peacefully as after that he took her hands in his and headed out of the guest house and they headed toward the opening grazing fields a perfect date planned by uday while manyata still found it strange and asked him zillion of question but he did not reply just kept walking and finally he reached the spot it was a small yet beautiful man made lagoon covered by glittering water he smiled at her and then took her to the boat he rode it to the lagoon and on reaching she jumped off the boat and went on exploring the new discovered place ,while he put his hands in his pocket and followed her she turned back and asked
MANYATA:Woa halkat vede this place is so beautiful
at this uday who was standing a few inches away from her softly whispered in her ears
UDAY:but not more than you
she blushed furiously as she tried to look up into his eyes a droplet of water hit her face and soon from one droplet it increased to a zillion water droplet it started to rain uday who was still indulge in her eyes could not feel the rain drop hitting his body but manyata grabbed his arm and started to run finally she got view of an old hatched hut she dragged him inside closing the door behind to prevent from the strong winds all she went and stood near its window watching the storm and praying god to stop it while uday distracted himself ,now he realize that the bright sky hard turn gloomy and dark and felt his clothes sticking to her body as he looked at manyata things were similar with her ,her clothes were thinking to her body ,as her hair all wet he headed towards her and turned her face towards him and caught her chin pulling her close to his face as he said
UDAY:such a beauty even the best swimmer will get drown in those eyes ,in this and for the next lives my heart ,my soul my everything is committed to you and only you ..i love you so much that it cannot be defined by words but you too are unable to read the love in my eyes i love you till my last breath
this all were too new for manyata as he grabbed her arm tighter pinning her to the wall and dugging his nails hard in her soft tender skin he looked straight into her eyes and did not let her break the eye contact as he said again with full of love and passion
UDAY;i said i love you and i want an answer and i want the answer yes so tell me manyata you too love me
MANYATA:i too love you
he pulled in her for a strong hug and then suddenly he took out a ring from his pocket ,he knelt down and said
UDAY:this was the thing i bought from my salary and i am glad that it is you who is your hand in which i slipped this ring
he slipped the ring into her hand and kissed her hands making her shiver ,he got up and hugged her kisisng her forhead with a naughty smirk playing on his lips he said
UDAY;you know na we are fiance now so i have my complete RIGHT on you
MANYATA;i do and i am happy that you are the guy whom i have given my heart to
Tujhse hi to mili hai rahat
Tu hi to meri hai chahat
Tujhse hi to judi zindagi
Teri yaadein hain kuch adhoori
Saans aadhi hai kuch hai poori
Aankhon mein hai kaisi ye nami
Mera mann, kehne laga
Paas aake na tu door jaa
Chhoone de, honth tere
Zara saanson mein apni basa aa...
Mar main jaaunga, reh na paaun
Gham judai ka seh na paaun
Aye tujhe pyaar ka vaasta
Teri yaadein hai kuchh adhoori
Saans aadhi hai kuch hai poori
Aankhon mein hai kaisi ye nami
Raat ke chaand tale
Aagosh mein meri tu aa
Mera mann, kehne laga
Paas aake na tu door jaa
Chhoone de, honth tere
Zara saanson mein apni basa aa..
this he pulled in her for an embrace she peacefully rested her head on his shoulder till the rain stopped it was after noon by now they headed back to the guest house on entering they met the care taker of the guest house as he said there was a guest waiting for uday they headed towards the reception as manyata saw a girl waiting there she looked at uday whose face turned expressionless and all he could say was
UDAY;meera
the girl came and hugged him with such force that manveer hand got seperated she looked at manyata strenched her hand out and with a smile she said
GIRL:hello i am mrs meera veer singh uday 's wife

done with this chappy
scroll down for chapter 7
sorry for my mistakes
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Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

mrs meera veer singh
age 23
a clever, beautiful and rich woman with a comfortable home and happy disposition seemed to unite some of the best bleesing of existence ,and the only daughter of an indulgent rich father ,she and her family stays in states so no body know about her here in India ,she had fallen in love with uday during his first case where he assisted her uncle who too was a detective there she fell for him but he played around with her heart and got her pregnant but he decided to take his responsibily and married her but then he came to know she destroyed the baby ,he tried his best to co operate and be a good husband but she was too arrogant for such relation and they ended up in divorce it had been 5 years they are seperated ,they never contacted each other but she has come back to his life to ruin many things

CHAPTER 7
the last word rang in her ears ,she looked at uday passing a smile believing that any moment he would give his smirk and say
"that is what she thinks princess"
but it did not happen ,manyata felt her heart been cut into pieces ,she started to have a very bad pain in her heart as though it was being repeatedly pierced as she saw the girl oh sorry now the girl was his WIFE carssing his temple and said seductively
MEERA:ok hubby i am going to room i am too tried now bye
saying this she went inside leaving manyata and uday all shattered ,manyata knew that any moment she would break down as for uday meera was like a night mare in his perfect fairy tale love story he knew he had cheated on his love by hiding about his first marriage but that is not what he intended to do he looked at manyata with teary eyes she was trying to make a move to her room as he held her wrist tightly he said sobbing
UDAY:manyata stop let me explain
manyata turned to him and opened his plam he looked at her eyes which was filled with the pain he gave her his betrayal ,suddenly he felt a small metal on his hands he opened it to see it was the ring he had just gifted her
MANYATA:sorry sir by mistake this thing slipped into my hands but i think it belongs to someone else
UDAY:manyata please stop let me explain
MANYATA:i do not want any explaination i am totally fine and sir i am glad that i came to know about it faster than taking another wrong step
saying this she left him all alone standing there ,she went to her room and locked the door ,she knelled on the floor and started to cry and her heart ached even more when she saw her fingure just before a moment it was filled with her love but now her life was scattered again as for uday he was filled with anger for meera he stormed into the room and saw her getting the room ready ,he went and grabbed her by her arms and BAAM went his left hand on her cheek as he crushed his teeth ,his eyes were filled with anger and hatred for her
UDAY:Why ?why are you here huh when everything in my life was going perfect why you had to again spoil things
MEERA;you destroyed my life when i did not get my love she should not get it either ok
UDAY;i cannot believe you could stoop so low
MEERA;oh really am i stooping low what about you mr detective case ke naam pei you are playing love games with her
UDAY: I LOVE HER
MEERA;now that is great you could love a shult like her
UDAY;GET OUT NOW
saying this he left her hands while she picked her bag and went away from the hotel she sat in the car as he asked
PERSON;good job
here manyata needed someone very badly to consoul her she called up ankita
MANYATA:jiji i need to tell you something
ANKITA:What is it dear and why are you crying wait i and virat will come tomorrow but do not cry angle what happened
she narrated the whole incident with every passing seconds ankita 's blood boiled thinking the way he used her and played with her feeling when she came to the kiss part ankita fumed
ANKITA;manyata how could you let him kiss you
MANYATA:kiss me but,,...
then ankita explained her everything ankita was glad that he could go no futher and promised to reach asap and as for manyata she felt used ,betrayed and disguiated how could he take advantage of her innocence
both heart were broken the pain was felt in both side in the loud cries of this love birds there were people who took there pleasure at there this conditon while manveer knew no way to ease there heart
Hum tere bin
Ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya vajoodh mera

Hum tere bin
Ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya vajoodh mera

Tujh se jhuda agar ho jayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jayenge jhuda

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chaina bhi mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ek pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hain jeete
tujhko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera

Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chaina bhi Mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

Kyun ki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho
the next morning crept in manyata had a sleep of only a few hours her sleep was badly disturbed by continuous knocks at her door she saw it was the care taker he held her hands and took her down to the reception ,she almost colapsed seeing the scene she fell on her knees in front of her was the death body of her dad he had been stabbed she looked up and saw uday with hand cuffs as the police said
POLICE;we arrest uday veer singh on the charges of doctor bridgraaj 's murder
suddenly manyata looked up and he looked back at her there was an emotinonal wave running inside both of them as all she could do was to turn towards the police and ask
MANYATA:do you...do you all have any proff
just then every body turned there head it was akash as he passed an evil grin to uday and said to the police
AKASH:i am the proff i saw uday veer stabbing bridgraaj to death

done with this chappy
forgive me for my mistakes
a special thank to all 15 members who liked my previous updates
please like this update too
promo for chappy 8
UDAY;so this was the story behind my and meera marriage
MANYATA:even i am 18 who knows even you are playing with my feeling and you too will leave me after getting tried of my body

Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago

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Jarin04

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Waiting anny aj sunday hai

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annesha kapoor

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Jarin04
Waiting anny aj sunday hai

i know
actually i made a banner in imgur
but that is not being uploaded any idea how to do it
and update will be by night
only one chappy
as this ss is too short
so double will make it end fast