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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 5
the moon light penitrated through the room and hit his brown chocolate eyes as she shivered in his embrace his hold on her hands were too tight as his nail dug even deeper into her white soft skin as he saw her eyes were filled with fears all she could manage to ask
MANYATA:sir you here i mean how and pleasee leave me sir
uday got his nails even deeper at no condition he could let go of her so soon ,he had waited a lot for her and now he was getting his fruit
UDAY:MANYATA ARORA THERE IS A PRIVATE MEETING BETWEEN YOU AND ME AND THIS IS THE WAY I CHANGE A CONVERSATION IN MY MEETING
He emphasised in each and every word he spoke as she shivered going week on her knees
MANYATA:but sir what is that you want from me now i mean i thought the case was over
UDAY:not yet first you tell me WHO was the one to kidnap you?
MANYATA:Sir it was my friend Virat ,he kidnapped me but sir it is not his fault i was the one to ask him to do so actually i have a mystery to solve my mom i do not know who she actually is sir i need to find her i am not doing anything wrong please sir forgive me you were so good to me but i...
she could not speak anymore as her tears had overpowered her speech yes she started to weep like a 5 year old child ,he never expected her to be so innocent and so honest he thought she would never confess it but she did without even he asking for it ,manyata indeed was a master mind ,but she never did this to hurt any one all she wanted was to find her mother ,the quest of a child for her lost mother filled uday with emotions as he himself was an orphan since birth manyata was ashamed at her deeds as she shed some more tears she felt his grip on her getting lossen up she turned to see him ,he was now away from her as he took a bed sheet and handed it to her ,and looked away ,she quickly covered the bed sheet which now covered her entire body he turned back at her while she looked down they pulled down a chair to sit as he spoke very politely and she was a good listener
UDAY:see manyata i know about your entire plan ok do not ask me how but i do because of my detective skills and a bit of clues you are doing good but you are playing it too easy like just now you should have not said your plans to me
MANYATA:but sir i trust you
this single word took uday to another world a smile crept in his face but her had to continue and finally taking a deep breath he spoke
UDAY:i am glad that you do but listen up now you are not alone now i am going to help you to find your mom ok first tell how many people knows about your plans
MANYATA:sir only i and you virat did ask me but i did not tell him
UDAY:Ok what more do you know about your mother
MANYATA:Sir nothing at all except for the fact that her name was Kritika Arora and that is the reason for my changing my surname
UDAY:now that is really hard to find out ok now listen up we need to plan are you with me
MANYATA:yes sir
UDAY:So first thing stop calling me sir we need to conduct our plans but like i do with akash we need to keep secret names like i can call you princess
MANYATA;and then i will call you halkat veda dad won't even doubt at me
uday 's heart was scattered all he wanted from this nick name was a cute lovey dobey name by which manyata would call him but now she was far too naive to think about an appropriate one
UDAY;ok so princess no body should know about our meeting ok
MANYATA:yes halkat veda
UDAY:We will meet up again tomorrow at 1 in the night in the broken hut at the end of the forest ok
MANYATA:fine
UDAY:do not be late and tomorrow do not come out from the guest house ok
MANYATA:YES
UDAY:now listen i
had gone to there home and all i know is that there is komal a widower but she has nothing to do with bridgraaj i mean your dad she never saw him in her entire life
MANYATA:i knew that last year i came here for a school trip and that time i came to know i did not tell dad as i feared by doing so the truth will never be revealed
UDAY;you think soo much
saying this he moved his hands patting her hair like a small dog as she chuclked and he said
UDAY;you
are so cute
she looked at him with her eyes wide as she got drown in his chocolate brown eyes and his eyes fell on her lips she being unaware of him kept admiring his eyes as he got himself even more closer to her face his breath  fell heavy on her face as for the very first time his lips met her his manly strong lips brushed against her soft lips ,he intended to explore her lips each and every corner but realising her soft innocent lips against her he just seperated his lips it was more like a peck to him as she looked at him ,he knew he should not have done it going physically so fast yes indeed he was in love but that does not mean he decided to appolozise as she asked
MANYATA:What was that?
manyata was truely naive she had never seen any such movie ,read such books or even talked about such thing she was pure and innocent so she could not fix her mind to what just happened he smirked at her innocent face and said
UDAY:nothing it was my way of telling goodbye now every day we will bid each other bye like this only ok
MANYATA:OK
uday took his leave and went off to the forest to search for akash ,while manyata stood by the window she did not know what had he just done to her but she liked it and wanted him to do it again as for uday he could not control but blush his lady was so innocent and pure ,he smirked at her innocence which he have to preserve and keep.
done with this chappy
sorry for my mistakes
promo for chappy 6
manveer stuck in the hut due to heavy rain

Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
d update was awsum annesha..
luvd it a lot..
manyata was 2 cute in dis update..
promo is 2 gud..!!
eagerly waiting 4r d nxt chappy..
thnx 4r d pm nd do continue soon..!!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: manisha98

d update was awsum annesha..

luvd it a lot..
thank you glad u liked it
manyata was 2 cute in dis update..
hmm yea tried to present her innocent hope i succeded
promo is 2 gud..!!
eagerly waiting 4r d nxt chappy..
i am glad u liked it
thnx 4r d pm nd do continue soon..!!😉
next sunday is the next update

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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Nice update
love the way the story is progressing
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Nice update
manyata is so innocent
looking forward for the suspence
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: andy.a

Nice update
love the way the story is progressing
thanks for the pm


thank u soo much
i am glad dat u liked it
next update next sunday
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: roopali15

Nice update
manyata is so innocent
looking forward for the suspence


i am glad u liked it
next update
next saturday
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Wow gr8 update ... Manyata so innocent na Thanx fr pm n cntinue soon
i love it
Edited by Karkit - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Karkit

Wow gr8 update ... Manyata so innocent na Thanx fr pm n cntinue soon
i love it


glad u liked it
will uopdate next sunday
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: annesha18


glad u liked it
will uopdate next sunday


k ... Kya mai tumhe ani bula sakti hu

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