||FF:Revenge-Ishq Pe Zorr Nahi||Chappy-1 PG-14 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Chamakchallo30

<font size="3"><font color="#3300FF">It was simply awesome 😛 thanks for the PM 😊
update the next one soon...

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Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

res...will comment soon
thnxs 4 pm

edited:
Good starting brownies👏
Thanx edward

Kya yaar...chapter main bhi🤣use karna jaroori tha kya🤣🤣
Bohout jarrori tha be..tu nahi samjhegi
really late on writing FF's and SS.Bahot late...3 months baad
Hehe I know🤣Really sorry be🤣🤣
I think prologue was a bit confusing😕
Akhir prologue kisska hai

Was the girl and the boy Uday and Manveer??
I wont tell🤣🤣


I think they are that is why Uday want to take revenge from Mana
Nope..Mana was kidnapped...It wasn't her fault naa🤣"Mana kahan houn tum?"A three year old boy said..As tears started to fall from his eyes(uff his eyes🤣)Oye chapter pain focus kar😡

Oww*meanie*ok ok karti houn karti houn🤣

Young Uday crying for Manyata
Hayye..so cute

Yeah I know damn cute*hayee*🤣

Ab jaldi update karna..consider it a threat😆

I'll only update when other will unres their posts..consider it a thread😆🤣
Thanks alot edward for ur commentwa😃

Originally posted by: Ashish.Holic

Omg omg omg...finally itne months baad swinu ne update k liye muhrat nikalva liya 🤣
Hmm finally shudh muhrat nikalwaya🤣
Awsome.update swinu but ina chhotasa kyun?

Thankoo..wo apun ka dimaag satak gaya tha na🤣
Awww..chhotu uday was too cute
Yayy tere ko cute laga yappa..hehe I know be🤣
Uday's was so emotinal...
Hehe true..Par bada hone keh baad pata nahi..U know na what I mean🤣

Love it...very nice...

Thanx Suru😃
Update soon aur soon matlab soon 2-3 months baad nahi

Maine chappy already likh liya hai..jab sab unres karenge tab hi post kardoongi..
Aur friendship mri no sorry & no thank u to PM ke liye koi thanx nahi🤣
*Hawww*kamini kahiki🤣
Thanx Suru😃

Originally posted by: Karkit

Wow awesme update
cntinue soon n do pm me

Originally posted by: anjuroopak

it has been long u give an update.
wen r u going to give next
update choco .waiting for next chappy. update soon na

Originally posted by: Choco.Swiss

The following 14 member(s) liked the above post:Rsaakka, angel_jara, anjuroopak, Karkit, wendy25, anushruthi, catty2000, princessSonia, ...navina..., iluvmanveer , pia.raha, Chamakchallo30, -DEATHmusic-, Ashish.Holic,
THANKS FOR THE LIKES GUYS😃

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

zorse bol mujhe sunai nahi di🤣🤣

Originally posted by: Choco.Swiss

THANKS ALL FOR THE LIKES...BUT EDWARD KO NO THANKS🤣
PS:Maine finally tera reply kiya..cheak karr🤣

Originally posted by: -DEATHmusic-

ja katti...mujhe thanks nahi...😭😭
aur kis thread me reply kiya...🤣🤣