||FF:Revenge-Ishq Pe Zorr Nahi||Chappy-1 PG-14

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okay guys I know I'm
really late on writing FF's and SS.hehe hum hai adaad seh majbur🤣Ok now I think I should stop my blabbering.If whatever I want to write coincides with any movie or show specialy GUMRAH then it is just coincidence🤣

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What is love?
For me love is companionship for
life. We love our families our friends to death
still deep down we reserve a special place for a
special someone, till we meet that someone we
dream about him/her, love the idea of being in
love and wait for that moment when we come across him/her. The world seems blissful and
colorful with and around him/her. However
with time the color of love changes, for some it
gets deeper and then they move on to the next
level of their relationship where as for some it
fades away leaving a vacuum behind which may or may not be filled in again.
...
I was just sitting there. *Tap, tap, tap* wen't my
pencil on my table.
It was a quarter to three and the clock kept
ticking.
It was almost the end and as usual I only had one thing on my
mind,"tomorrow is my result.Yikkes my result.What if I fail?"
...
She moved purposefully towards his red locker, once opened, she scanned all his things
which hung stationary in place.Like always she put a red rose there...
...
Girl1:Yaar kya lagta hai iss baar koun top karega?
Girl2:Obviously our rockstar...
..
Person1:Yaar result dene wale hai.Where is he??
Person2:Ghar pei soan raha hoga...Aur wasai bhi topper toh humaisha keh tarah wo hi hoga..
Person1:😳😳
...
He awake bcoz of shining rays of sun falling on his
face through glass window.he curld in blanket, pick
da alarm clock 2 check da time. its only 9.
BANG
He threw the alarm clock angrily..
...
i was staring da board, still waiting 4 him. he is late
like always.Now I cant wait man.Cant wait to see him.I was in my own lalala land when suddenly I heard his voice.I turned quickly and yah he is here ,in front of me.I wanted 2 run to hum,give him a hug.But I know I cant.I was staring at him like a fool..
...
He turned around and faced the girl he once dated.
"What" He snapped and looked at her with disgust.
"Is something wrong" She said a little frightened
but she hid the fear in her voice as much as she
could. He shook his head
"Why him?"
"I...uh...well...I"girl stumbled
"WELL!" boy shouted stepping closer demand that
she answered him, he could tell she was scared she
knew how strong he was.
"I love him"girl was cut off by the boy
"I loved you..What was wrong with me?" the boy questioned
...***...
so how was it?Crappy???Pliz dont throw ur jootas at me.Kindly hit the LIKE button n do comment if u like it.Criticism r welcome.Let me know that should I cont it or not.
Ps:kindly ignore my mistakes
Love
Sp/snigdha

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Posted: 12 years ago
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reswa for cswa
unres
I want 2 dedicate it to my bestest friend Suru aka Ashish.Holic..So joote chappals mujhe nahi usse hi marna lolz🤣
Caracter Skeatch

Jo chahat hai usko paane ki taaqat dena!

Jo kismat hai usse qabool karne ki himmat dena!

"Give me strength to gain what i wish for,
Give me courage to accept my fate"

Yuvrani/Rajkumari Manyta/Mana(Priyal Gor)

She is an
unattractive bespectacled nerd with an odd style of dressing. She is a
somewhat naive, but intelligent girl. She is
constantly mocked by her more beautiful female (and sometimes male) classmates, while being in
love with her classmate and fiance Udayveer...Her wedding was fixed with Uday when they were children and since then,Manyta considers Uday her love and her life..

Yet, the destiny plays its role, our fate often store things for us
that we have never imagined .Time changes
everything,even the relationships...
A simple girl, the ugly but brilliant
duckling turned into a beautiful swan...

Yuvraj Udayveer(Ashish Kapoor)
he is a tall ,dark ,handsome Prince whose only mission in life is to become the Yuvraj of Jaigarh Estate and marry his childhood sweetheart princess Manyata .He believes in achieving his dreams with his power and strength . His Royal Prestige and Honour matters the most for him and he can go to any extremes to emerge victorious in his mission..Uday is an obedient son of his father giriraj and a caring, protective brother for his sister Unnati.
Rajkumari Jaynandini(Shritama Mukherjee)
She is a rich ,beautiful and arrogent princess and younger daughter of Maharaj Brijraj Singh who believes that she can win anything in life with her wealth and power.She doesn't like anyone interfering in her life. She is not very fond of her sister Manyta
Jagat Singh(Kunal Bakshi)
He is a son that every parent wants. He is respectful, hard-working and a successful businessman. He is also the type of brother that every youngster wants. He loves his brothers and sisters too much. His family means everything to him. People could say that he has everything, but what he does not have is what everybody does not know. He has always had the dream of meeting his true love. He is
positive that there is somebody out there made only for him, a person who waits for him

Vijayendra Singh(Mark)
He is a rich ,manipulative cousin brother of Princess Jaynandini and Manyata who believes in playing politics among the sisters and going with the flow of life
Princess Unnati(Ankita)
She is a simple ,beautiful ,down-to-earth nature innocent Princess and younger sister of Prince Udayveer..She doesn't get angry fast but is stubborn.She keep silent instead of speaking his mind.
Varun Singh(Karan wahi)
Younger brother of Vijay n cousin of Manyta n Jay.He is very versatile. He is a Happy-go-lucky guy who loves to play jokes, hang around but at the same time, is very caring towards his family especially Manyta.
Sanna Sharma(Madhura Naik)

She is a rich and arrogant schizophrenic girl who is used to having things her own way..She is someone who could risk someone else's life to save
her own.She has been secretly in love with Uday since childhood.

Sidhant kapoor(Kushal tendon)
A young enterprising guy with an attitude that he rules the world and can
get whatever he wants with the power of his money. Although efficient in his own way but Siddhanth is always overshadowed by his eldest brother. He was born with a silver spoon in his mouth so doesn't know much about the hardship that one has to go through in establishing an empire as big as theirs.Brother of Sanna...

Rajmata Mrinalini(Aroona Irani)

A born princess, a natural queen and a regal queen mother- Rajmata Mrinalini Devi is the kind of mix of elegance and severity that comes from years and years of practice. For the Rajmata, the world that they live in has a certain balance of power, and she does not like it being questioned. Yet, she has never demanded that power and authority always commanded it. She never raises her voice, in fact she speaks in low dulcet tones, which make a person automatically listen to her, as if what she is saying is too important to miss. Her authority over her kingdom, her family and her children and grandchildren is absolute. She is controlling but not cruel or malicious in any way.

Maharaj Brijraj(shahbaz khan)
He is well spoken, beautifully dressed and with impeccable manners. He is all that you would imagine a royal to be. He also has a sense of entitlement, the sense that he is, a king and that the rest are his subjects. Born to an illustrious mother, he understands the meaning of being in limelight, he too, is extremely aware of his social skills.
Maharani komal(anita)
An only child, a princess, and later a queen, her royal duties define Komal.Her marriage to Brijraj was a strategic alliance, and really she felt lucky, he was handsome, well spoken
and a good match for someone like her. She just blended completely into his lifestyle, and his family.

Maharaj Giriraj(Amit behl)

He is a happy go lucky man with a very positive and supportive character.. He is Unnati n Uday's dad.. giriraj shares a very friendly bond with Manyta.
...
So how was it?Should I cont it or not???Kindly
LIKE
COMMENT
If u like it.Sorry if I wasted ur time..
Love
sp/snigdha
Edited by Choco.Swiss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*pm list*
*iluvmanveer


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*Archi02
*Ashish.Holic

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Ps:pliz mention it in ur comment...


Edited by Choco.Swiss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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reswa for commentwa
lol
i want pmwa
--I--I--I--I--I--I--I--I--I--I--I--I--I--
unreswa.
BEAUTIFUL!!!
it was mindblowing sniggles!!
give the cs fast!!
cant wait for the further story to unfold. i was really breathtaking
main to teri fan bangayi
(wo toh pehlese hi thi. rofl.)
will give a longer comment wen i'll come from my lappy.
Edited by iluvmanveer - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oye kamini, Mitwa...Ishq pe zor nahi ko tune revenge me kyu change kar dia??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@sanju:Addedwa.Now jaldi jaldi unreswa karr..
@Archu:Mere story mei mitwa kissi kaam ka nahi hai🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yayy!!
m the first to comment
dekh sniggles comment unreswa kar di hain
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvmanveer

reswa for commentwa
lol
i want pmwa
--I--I--I--I--I--I--I--I--I--I--I--I--I--
unreswa.
BEAUTIFUL!!!
it was mindblowing sniggles!!
give the cs fast!!
cant wait for the further story to unfold. i was really breathtaking
main to teri fan bangayi
(wo toh pehlese hi thi. rofl.)
will give a longer comment wen i'll come from my lappy.


Oh thanx alot Sanju.Glad that u like it..Will give the cs when I'll get some more readers hehhe.Oh u r my pankha.Mei bhi teri pankhi(fan)🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@sniggles
lol
check hall of fame of yesterday...
tujhe options diye hain
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG...swinu tune prolouge post kar diya ab CSwa jaldi karde
BTW prolougewa is awsome...mindblowing GR8 job ab toh hum manveer ki ankhe char hone ka wait kar rahe hai 🤣 👍🏼 ...now plz...update 1st chppy...

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