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Pranoti aka Sanju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

@angel
nai reh! ye band hogaya hain. no updates now. bs cs aur prologue hi ths iske diamg me.

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hmmmm dude i forgot

@.maleficent.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

swetu hiii tere exams kase gayi
i miss u all this days

wasse yeh thread ko ct bana ne ke hai kya

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LadySosostris

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: angelina6
swetu hiii tere exams kase gayi
i miss u all this days

wasse yeh thread ko ct bana ne ke hai kya

nahi nahi pliz..

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LadySosostris

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Season-One
Kismat Connection
*Chappy-One*
Burning hearts*The unexpected*
(Eeps sorry for my both sarakchap titles)
MUMBAI
The most populous city in India and the forth most populous city in the world..
The city that never sleeps..The dream city as the people say..
It was afternoon..The sun was on the wane now.The daylight had softened and in the palace like mansion a man was shouting as if a bomb going to explode any minute now..
"Humme woh kissi bhi halat mein chahiye..samjhe app..kissi bhi"The man said angrily but was soon interrupted..
"Brijraj app pliz shant hojayie.."The rajmata of Devgarh said..
"Kaise shant hojaye maa saheb..jab..jab humari beti pure ekdin seh lapaata hai?"
"Brij tum dheeraj rakho..Hum usse jaldi dhoond lenge.Wo Murari humse bachke nahi jane wala"Another man said in a stress voice..
"Par Giri kaise huh?Ab Komal keh barey mein hi sochlijiye.Bichari ki toh roun roun keh bura haal hogaya hai..Humme toh darr lag raha hai ki kahin Manyta humain ab kabhi na mille"
"Brij Manyta humme jarror millegi..Aur rahi baat bhabhisa ki toh Shelja unke pass hai..wo unhe sambhal lengi"
"I hope so my friend..I hope so"
Devgarh(Scene shifts to Brijraj n Komal's room)
"Komal apne app ko sambhaliye pliz"
"Humme apni beti chahiye Shelja..bass apni beti"Komal said as she tightened the hug,crying on her best friend's shoulder..
"Maharani jee"A maid suddenly interrupted them..
"Haan bolo Rukmani"Shelja said..
"Woh woh yuvraaj khana nahi kha rahey hai"The maid said..
"App chaliye hum abhi atey hai"
...
"Mana kahan houn tum?"A three year old boy said..As tears started to fall from his eyes(uff his eyes🤣)
The workers were reaquesting him saying how he should eat or else he will get sick..
...
"Uday"Sheela asked..
"Wo Yuvraaj andar hai"The maid said as she pointed at the door..
The worker lady lets Shelja enter the room came inside with her..
Shelja walked up to Udayveer not hesitating one bit n gazed at him sadly whilst he continued to ignore her..She placed her hand over his..
He stared at the hand blinked and more tears fall from his eyes.He moved his hand from Shelja's but Shelja bring her hand back down..The worker lady started speaking saying he wasn't eating anything nor he's talking to anyone..
Shelja didn't look away from her sons face.She touched his hair..Uday hesitated pushing her hands gently,he moved away and sits alone in the corner of the room..Shelja came near him..
"Uday"Shelja said..
"I want Mana mom..I want my Mana"Uday said as more tears fall from his eyes..
"Woh wapas ajayegi beta"Shelja whispered as she hugged her child..
...
An old couple were talking with eachother..The couple living togather in the mystic hills..They were happy to be away from the noisiness of the centre of Mumbai,the main town.
It had been 7 years but still they dont have any child.
"Ahana have you finished taking a pail of water?Why must you be so slow everytime?"Yash yelled.
"Almost finished.Just wait for a while..wait a second..
1
2
3
WHAT THE HELL IS THAT?"Ahana yelled.
(just forgive me for being such a stupid girl..who doesn't know how to create names)
Yash slowly walked to the rivers,ready to pinch Ahana's cheeks for being so slow.But then he saw a box made of bamboo flowing on the river..With the help of Ahana..they managed to take the box from the river.Inside the box there was a cute girl with black hair n brown eyes.She was enjoying her mandarin orange(Yeah yeah she HAS teeth🤣)
It was awkward that the girl wasn't effected by the coldness of the water.
"Yeh kaise hosakta hai?Yeh abtak zinda kaise?Kiski bachi hogi yeh?Mei abhi police ko phone karta houn"Yash said..
"Nahi Yash pliz aisa mat karoo.Isko yaha rehne doun..Shayad bhagwan neh isko humare liye hi bheja hai"
"Nahi Ahana police ko toh batana hi parega..Aur wasai bhi yeh bhi toh hosakta hai ki iski koi rishtedarr hi naa houn"
"Aur agar huya toh?"
"Toh I m sorry Ahana..hum isko apne pass nahi rakhenge.Humme unki bachi ko unke pass lejana hi parega"
To be continued
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If u like it..Really sorry for the late,short n stupid update..Kindly ignore my mistakes..I know its not good.Sare galti headache mata ki..
ps:pm's will be send late..
Love
Sp/snigdha

Edited by Choco.Swiss - 12 years ago

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Pranoti aka Sanju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

hum reswa lagayenge! u have no right to say it ghatiya ok!
dekha! finally humne is ff ko discontinue karneke baad ye start kr rahi hain haan nahi toh
hum res lagayenge hume humre dhobi ke 1st chap pe 1st cumnt karna hain
HAAN NAHI TOH!
JO UKHADNA HAIN WO UKHADLO
(ped mat ukhadna, unka marna accha nahi!)
lolzwa roflwa 🤣

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LadySosostris

@LadySosostris

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: iluvmanveer
hum reswa lagayenge! u have no right to say it ghatiya ok!
dekha! finally humne is ff ko discontinue karneke baad ye start kr rahi hain haan nahi toh
hum res lagayenge hume humre dhobi ke 1st chap pe 1st cumnt karna hain
HAAN NAHI TOH!
JO UKHADNA HAIN WO UKHADLO
(ped mat ukhadna, unka marna accha nahi!)
lolzwa roflwa 🤣

Just read the ghatiya chappy.Tere ko pata chal jayega ki yeh kitni ghatiya hai..

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LadySosostris

@LadySosostris

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: serat
good :)👍🏼

thanx😃

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SNOWWHITE83

@SNOWWHITE83

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

nice begining...
nice concept...
keep it up...
continue soon...

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LadySosostris

@LadySosostris

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: anjuroopak
nice begining...
nice concept...
keep it up...
continue soon...

Thanx dear😃

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LittleDhampir.

@LittleDhampir.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#110

res...will comment soon
thnxs 4 pm

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Good starting brownies👏
Kya yaar...chapter main bhi🤣use karna jaroori tha kya🤣🤣

really late on writing FF's and SS. Bahot late...3 months baad

I think prologue was a bit confusing😕
Was the girl and the boy Uday and Manveer??

I think they are that is why Uday want to take revenge from Mana

"Mana kahan houn tum?"A three year old boy said..As tears started to fall from his eyes(uff his eyes🤣) Oye chapter pain focus kar😡

Young Uday crying for Manyata
Hayye..so cute

Ab jaldi update karna..consider it a threat😆

Edited by -DEATHmusic- - 12 years ago

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