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anushruthi

@anushruthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Good work

I read all the 22 parts in one go

do cont soon

and PM me if possible

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Panther_panja

@Panther_panja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Hay Deepsoul

aweosemly handled the situation. 👏 😊 😃

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I dont feel that this stubborn rani will ever accept Yuvraj and she wont forgive him for this as she wont understand the love of Raj for Nandini. I feel that Nandini wont accept Raj after knowing the truth from them. But if Raj makes Nandini realize that the whole story of lying started with her lying to him then she might think and regret what she had done to herself. here if we talk of Rani hmmm I feel that she wont forgive both of them and hate Yuvraj for keeping her and her family under dokha really.

I feel Brijraj and Komal will understand and forgive both them as they will see that they have accpted the truth boldly in front of the whole family and loudly also so they will understand the true feeling of Raj for Nandini and see a good friend in Yuvraj a true Yuvraj in him and agree for Nandini and Raj marridge they will take some time to come out of the shock and realize it.

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deepsoul

@deepsoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

23 part!
Rani say" nahi yeh nahi ho sakta hai aap mazak kar rahey haina?" then nandani interrupts n say" khash jiji yeh mazak hota sach tho yeh hai ki Yuvraj hum se payar kartey" then brijraj shout " nandani tum hosh mai tho yeh kaya khey rahi ho" nandani make sad face n say" dad hum tho wahi khey rahey hai jo sach hai" then komal say" sach tho yeh bhi hai ki Yuvraj se tumari jiji ka rishta paka hochuka tha kaya yeh bhul gaye ho tum? " nandani make angry face" nahi mom hum kuch nahi bhuley hai humhey sab yaad ki humse phele aapkey liye jiji hai hum nahi" brijraj say" humhey griraj se bat karni padey gi is barey mai " then Yuvraj n raj get shocked n Yuvraj say" nahi uncle abhi wo nahi miley gey wo Ksisi kam key liye out of india gaye hai" brijraj say with angry face " aap log ko bhi shai wqt mila hai hum sabko batney ka par yaha jo bhi hua hai na iska bhuktan griraj ko bhuktna hoga! Or yeh mat sochey ki aap jitni shan se apney payar ka izhar kia hai tho humlog siwikar kar legey?" n leave for his room after that rani still crying n pull raj collor n say" apney humarey sath esa kuy kia Yuvraj Akhir kaya kami thi hum mai jo apney humhey dhoka diya?" then raj say with sad face" koi kami nahi thi rani bas bat yeh hai ki hum apnse payar nahi kartey hai" rani remain slient n look at his eyes then komal come close to rani n take her to room n ria also go back to them after that nandani make crocodile tear n raj feel sad to see her like this n say" ro mat abhi abhi wo naraz hai islye gussa hai bad mai samjh jayegey ki humney esa kuy kia" nandani say" par aap humara sath tho nahi chodey gey na?" then raj say" kabhi nahi " eye contact between nandani n raj then Yuvraj act like coughing which disturb them then nandani blush n go from there then Yuvraj smile n say" kaya bat hai tumney tho jung jeet li?" then raj say" abhi tho adhi jung baki hai" then Yuvraj say" hum hai tho kaya gum hai' chal tujhey ek peg pilta hoo" then raj say" yarr tujhey koi fakar padta bhi hai ya nahi I mean itna sab ho gaya hai or tujhey fikar tak nahi padta hai? Pata hai kabhi kabhar lagta hai ki terey shiney mai dil hai ki bhi nahi?" then Yuvraj say" dil ka tho pata nhi par han yeh wqt dost ki kushi manney ka jarur hai" then they also go to room
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rani n komal enter in rani room n komal say to sitdown to rani n rani remain slient n sitdown then komal say" beta aap fikar mat kiye Yuvraj se apkey hai" rani still remain silent then ria enter n say" han rani shaibha Yuvraj srif apkey hi hai" then komal say" han beta bas aap ese chup mat bethiye" then rani break her slience n say" han maa ab mai chup nahi bethu gi aap fikar mat kijye hum thik hai bas humhey kuch pal key liye akhele rheney jarurt hai" then komal say" par beta aapkon" then ria say" maharani saa hum hai aap jaye" n komal leave room then rani say" ria tum bhi jao humhey akeley rhena hai" then ria say" par rani shaibha aapko u akley " then rani shout n say" humney kha na jao" n ria also leave
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Yuvraj n raj in room sitting on sofa celebrating n toast with whiskey n say" cheers " then Yuvraj ask " ek bat bata tuney use parpose kese kia ?" then raj say him that how he pospose her n Yuvraj say" wow yarr mujhey nahi pata tha ki tu itna romantic hai" then raj become sad n say" par yarr mujhey ek bat dar hai ki usney tujhey samjh key han ki hai par sachi pata lagney key bad kaya wo ese hi raheygi kaya?" then Yuvraj say" is bat ka tho dar mujhey bhi hai but jab tak parivar waley nahi mantey hai tab tak tu use itna payar dena ki wo tujhey se alag honey ka khayal bhi na aye" then ria enter n say" shayad ho sakta hai nandani han bhi karde par rani shaibha yeh nahi honey de gi" then Yuvraj n raj get shocked n look at her n Yuvraj say with confused face" kaya matlab?" then ria say" mera matlab hai ki rani shaibha kuch bada shoch rahi hai hum rani shaibha ko bacpan se jantey hai wo itni asani se har nahi maney gi" then Yuvraj say" par wo soch kaya rahi hai? " then ria say" yeh mujhey bhi nahi pata hai par kuch bada hai" then Yuvraj n raj look at each other
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Brijraj in his room with very angry walking here n there n thinking about whatever happen in hall then komal enter with crying face n brijraj look at her n say" komal roney se iska hal nahi nikleyga" then komal say" hum kaya karey maharaj humse humari beti ki halt dekhi nahi jaa rahi hai" then brijraj say" dekhai komal roi mat hum griraj se bat karkey iska koi na koi hal jaur nikal legey"
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In nandani room nandani at front of mirror saying to herself " mubrak ho rajkumari nandani Akhir tumney wo paa hi jo tumhey chaye tha! Or Us rani ka face dekhney layak tha bechari humari jiji phele bar use mehsus hoga jab koi apse apka chinta hai to kesa lagta hai"
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rani call ria n say to her to call everybody in hall rai get confused n try to say some something but rani interrupts n say" jesa humney kha hai karo" then ria say yes n leave after sometime everybody gather in hall n waiting for rani n then rani come n everybody looking at her then briraj say" kaya hua apney hum sabko yaha kuy bulaya hau?" then rani say" papa humney ek fasela liya hai" then all get confused then briraj say" fesla kesa fesla?" then rani say" hum chatey hai ki aap yuvraj or nanadani key fesle ko han kar de" then everybody get shocked to hear this then komal say" aap hosh mai tho hai aap kaya khey rahi ho?" then briraj say" nahi rani yeh nahi ho sakta hai?" then rani say in low tone" hum jantey hai ki nandani or yuvraj ney humarey sath jo kia hai us key wajse aap han nahi key rahey hai per sochye agar yuvraj humse shadi key liye han bhi khey dete hai tho kaya wo humhey dil se apna saktey hai?" then briraj say" par hum yeh nahi kar saktey hai hum apki kushiya kisi or ko nahi de skatey hai" then rani say" kushiya tho wase hi nahi rahi par humara yeh fesla kisi ko kushi tho de sakta hai na" then briraj make angry face n say" par hum yeh sab apki kushi key liya kar rahey hai" then rani smile
To continue...

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snowdream

@snowdream

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

it was awesome deeps...😃...Jainandini evil pagal kahinki😡😡😡...kitna nafrat karti hain apni hi behen se🤢🤢🤢...urghh poor raj uski zindagi barbaad ho jayegi ab...

And Yuvraj don't he care for rani and her feelings...Hunh but perhaps he was right in staying away from theses issues...It was overall a great update 👏👏👏

But then was shorty...😕...i wanted more...so less rani scenes...missed rani's presence a lot😕...

Update soon deepu...this is one of my fav story😳😊

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deepsoul

@deepsoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: snowdream
it was awesome deeps...😃...Jainandini evil pagal kahinki😡😡😡...kitna nafrat karti hain apni hi behen se🤢🤢🤢...urghh poor raj uski zindagi barbaad ho jayegi ab...
And Yuvraj don't he care for rani and her feelings...Hunh but perhaps he was right in staying away from theses issues...It was overall a great update 👏👏👏
But then was shorty...😕...i wanted more...so less rani scenes...missed rani's presence a lot😕...
Update soon deepu...this is one of my fav story😳😊

awww thanks krishina for liking my story actually my dad get hospitalized but now he get discharge so that why i don't get time to write that why it was short i hope u understand!😊

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deepsoul

@deepsoul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

thank u all for liking my ff n who think its is short or less so i just want to say that my dad get hospitalized so i don't get time to write it properly n i hope u will understand my problem n love my work as before!😊

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

awesome blossom great...
I hope yuvraaj jaldi sach batade...
poor rani...
update soon

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Panther_panja

@Panther_panja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Hey Deepsoul,

nice update 👏👏 . Loved the Update 😃 Deepsoul 👍🏼

I like the dialog Dil ka toh puta nahi haaa 😆 😆. I must say Yuvraj is tooo good in joking Dil lugta hai kuhi chula guya ghumne thodi der ke liye 🤣.

Liked Rani decision of agreeing on Raj and Nandini Marriage as you should marry the person where the loving heart is. Great done Rani. For the first time Rani had taken the right and balanced decision.