'WHISPERING HEARTS '..... Chap - 6 ; Coming soon !! Surely :)

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: MAHI1198
awesome blossom great deary...
seriously awesome... ,,,,,,thnxxx mahi, m glad u liked the upfate.
now my confusion is clear... ,,,,,,now i m really releived. 😆
thanks alot ...
waiting fr next chapter...,,, try to uodate soon.
update soon

Thnx mahi fr ur cmment.😳

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: humairaa1
The chapter is awesome
Waiting for the next chapter
Thanks for the pm 😊 👏

Thnxxx humaira, m glad u liked the update.😳,

Oh btw, thnxx fr commenting here fr the first time

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patakaguddi

@patakaguddi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: Archi02
Wow...two updates!! Asweme. Both the updates were fabolus. Really loved them. But tell me 1 thing, where did you find the pice of uday?(4th chapter, 1st pice ) . And thanks for the pm. I really don't have time to come here.

Well thnxxx archi fr ur comment.

I m glad u liked the updayes.

Regarding the pics i had already pmed u dear, u already know now 😉

I knw u r qyuite bussy with ur life, same is the case with me dear. Newys as i told u before i would pm u as nd whn i update next.😛

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#484

Hello saloni hun how are you? i hope you are doing well...

first of all iam really really sorry for commenting after ages but at first i got busy in studies and then i had so many stories to read and now have new responsibilities too so just didnt had time to read update of one of my very fav writer!

Ah so finally i read and liked both the chapters! they were quite long which is one thing i always love about your writing u always give full yumilicious updates😆

alright so the story is now slowly slowly unfolding!

the thing is this ff has way too many characters which is quite difficult to handle! i mean you have to write about each character has to add each scene in every update so i can understand how difficult might be for u to right with so many characters!

but what i feel is here every character is playing a crucial role... each one of them has a huge role to play none of them is extra!

Saloni till now i was thinking that sahiba might be related to manyata somehow or she might be manyata lol yea still i was thinking 😆 actually its not my poor brain its because of watching ekta kapoor serials!

The way you are writing past and present at the same time is awesome... in this way we will come to know how manyata came to this college and why uday hates manyata so much!

Sahiba i hate her😕 she is getting extra attention! i mean first samrat when saw her he felt something for her and now even uday🥱 he liked her somewhere but why why😡😡😡

watever jay did i wasnt surprised because she is selfish from day one so her switching sides was expected!

throughout these chapters new things which i figured out were that manyata jay n vijay r siblings or maybe cousins!

sahiba the mysterious girl has some thing in her😆

manyata has a past which samrat is trying to make her forget and move onnn...

samrat maybe loves her maybe not!😆

Saloni who asked you to write such intriguing ff everytime i read any update i start making my assumptions which are mostly wrong😆...

but i wanted to ask you from where you got this idea? i mean r u inspired from a movie or novel cox the way you write its clear that the story is crystal clear in your mind?😊 unlike me who thinks what else to write with each update😆😆😆

ahhh i guess this would be enought for u and me as well cox whenever i begin to give comment on your ff i just dont feel like stopping😆

i hope we will get an update soon this time i would be really quick in my comment tc😊

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#485

babiee can u pm me ... i really love to read ur story plz... if u will post next part ... plz pm me i m dam waiting i like ur whole update plz

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andy.a

@andy.a

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#486

Hi saloni, i know am very late. But isnt it better late than never?so chap 5 was totally awsome. I loved it. I really love the way u reveal everything. When the part one ended i was like "how could she end here?" but loved the suprise.
I really loved that angry uday.
And just one doubt who actually is saibha? And hw could u allow uday to dance with her. Does uday know manyata before? Continue the story soon. And tell me hw soon is "coming soon"?

Edited by andy.a - 12 years ago