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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Bhumika, That was a really nice first try👏.
But very , very sad 😔 !!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi dear, welcome to our forum. Nice try. But sad story.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg a very touching story.. he died😭
short n sweet os.. 😊 u write well😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hiii bhumika,
if dis is ur first try den must say
its
AWESUM👏👏
FAB😎
AMAZING👍🏼👍🏼
BUT SAD ENDING...

do wrote more...
bdw m sonia...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww...that was sweet!
Very nice OS
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Short and sweet!😳it was really heart-touching, l luved it! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG that was such a sad ending 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😭
Very sad touching story.
Well written bhumika.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OYE UDAY KO MARDALA US ROBBER KI TOH MAIN...
BUT AWESUM JOB
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bhumika I have become a fan of ur short stories...Ur plots are amazing. Very sweet but touching and it always has a touch of pain in it.👏😭...Very beautiful and keep giving us such wonderful OS😊

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