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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1

Hey Bhumika, That was a really nice first try👏.

But very , very sad 😔 !!!

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@ITV_Loverr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#2

Hi dear, welcome to our forum. Nice try. But sad story.

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Sunshinegirll

@Sunshinegirll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#3

omg a very touching story.. he died😭
short n sweet os.. 😊 u write well😊

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Sonia

@princessSonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#4

hiii bhumika,

if dis is ur first try den must say

its

AWESUM👏👏

FAB😎

AMAZING👍🏼👍🏼

BUT SAD ENDING...

do wrote more...

bdw m sonia...

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zainab

@--Zinay--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#5

aww...that was sweet!
Very nice OS

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LazyBing

@LazyBing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#6

Short and sweet!😳it was really heart-touching, l luved it! 😉

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#7

OMG that was such a sad ending 😕

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Shahista

@Shahi01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#8

😭

Very sad touching story.

Well written bhumika.

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

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Posted: 12 years ago

#9

OYE UDAY KO MARDALA US ROBBER KI TOH MAIN...

BUT AWESUM JOB

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Bhumika I have become a fan of ur short stories...Ur plots are amazing. Very sweet but touching and it always has a touch of pain in it.👏😭...Very beautiful and keep giving us such wonderful OS😊

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