Mistake - a Manveer OS ch 3 pg 9...completed/.. - Page 7

OUTSTANDING...👏

Originally posted by: coolsaloni.nira

OUTSTANDING...👏

read all the prts in one go...

glad i read such beautiful manveer os.

AWWW,,,,,,,,uday wanted to be the first one to know about his princess well being

but was left disappointed whn he realised tht he was the last one...

but their love surpassed all the hurdles nd finally they became one...so romantic...😳

GREAT dear...👍🏼

Originally posted by: catty2000

Amazing OS !

It was all so cute 😊 I mean Uday being happy about his princess but being sad because of knowing it last and then the happy ending 😳

Great work 👏

Originally posted by: andy.a

loved this part poor uday- he was happy to see manyata back but sad to know about it last

simply loved it

it was just awesome!
Loved the possessiveness of uday for his princess!
Cute ending!
Great job krishna love ur writings

Originally posted by: -Zina-

it was just awesome!
Loved the possessiveness of uday for his princess!
Cute ending!
Great job krishna love ur writings

Originally posted by: mimi.maik

great work krishna jiji 👏 👏 👏..

loved this OS to the core...😳 that was simply very amazing...

really very well an nicely written,...👏 u always maintain the emotions very beautifully... keep it up...love u...

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Out-standing update Krishna. Perfect end to a beautiful story. Very well written👏. Loved it immensely😳.