HEY SAFIA I READ ALL CHAPTERS I LOVED UR STORY
OK DEN POINT KI BAAT HAN KE MAIN 13 CHAPTERS KE SATH COMMENT KARI HO OKK N THIS IS MY 3RD SS I READ N I LOVED IT OKK...WELL DONE DEAR...ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
first chapters se comment dena start karti ho okk safia
chapter 1:its mindblowing manveer is awsome i loved it..but end ko dekh kar main dar gayi thi i m very scraed so i read imegetilly chapter second so i feel better ...π³π³π³π³
chapter two:is awome awsome sab awsome tha n iska season 1 bhi tha na o bhi jaldi parogi jab time millega tab chapter 2 is fab
chapter three::ohhh mindblowing awosme manveer marriage
chapter four:cha gaya ustaad yaar dil khush kardeta
chapter five : amazinggg...πππππloved it awsomee... brilliant...ππ
chapter six:ab tu words khatam hogaya ab kiya kaho hmm phir bhi awsomeee ohhh yaar u r the awsome writter buddy..πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
chapter seven:uday n manyata romance i really liked it n bath scene is also awsome ...loved it
chapter eight:u again dil khush kardeta han nai tu uday jealouse ya galat han he don't her princess discusting ashu but phir bhi i love u ashu omaa awsomee n jo ya dusra manveer ke beach han iska tu main jaan se mar dogi
chapter nine: ohhh buhot acha maza agaya tenu amazing writter kudiya tune mera dil jit liya yaara sabse acha ya scene laga acha pura tha but ya scene mera fav tha
Manyata: arrehh... Mera matlab tha k agar mera haath kisi pe lage to us ka sara dard hi khatam ho jata hai..
Uday by holding her hand: hmmm... Aur ye haath hum kisi k bhi haathon me nhi denge, kyonki tum per sab se zyada haq hamara hai.
Manyata:uday mujh se ek wada karo ge..wada karo k tum kabhi bhi mujhe chor k nhi jaoge, mujhe ye soch k bhi dar lagta hai uday, me kabhi bhi tumhare bagair nhi reh paon gi.
Uday: never princess. Never ever i promise. awsomeee
chapter ten:ha so sad uday is so rude behave usko manyata ko smajhna chaya tha aisa nai karna chaya tha keep it up nyccc...πππππ
chapter eleven:so sad i feel cry heart touching episode poor manyata so sad...πππππππππππππ
chapter twelve:hehhehe i m crying u know hehehhe means safia better den me ππππnycc but uday dad griraj discusting dog lier idiot budha sharam nai ayi iskoππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
chapter thirteen:very nyccc 2 years later awsome priyamika buhot pyari han manyata buhot achi tarah apne apko manage kiya n uday style ana ka acha tha but discusting wo manayta ko nai janta apne pyar ko bhool gaya shayad aisa pyar tu usne kabhi manyata se kiya hi nai tha ya tu phir pyar hi nai kiya tha usne manyata ki ek bar baat bhi nai suni thi or apne apko acha smajhta han apne kamine baap ko dekha n unnati wo tu manyata ki friend thi tu o use nai pouchti ke kiya hua kaise hua ect poor manyata use hamesha dukh hi milte han ab uski lil life ke sath aisa safia its 2 serious cancer yaar know humsafar is my most fav show ab main age is story main kiya hoga sab smajh agaya han manayta ko sambhale bas sab wo himmat na hare πππππhope her lil life get well soon...π²π²π²
manyata ko ab uday ke pass kabhi nai jana chaya q ke usne use buhot dukh diya n buhot takleef di han shayad wo manayat ke layak hi nai han jitni bhi missunderstanding ho lakin use apne pyar par bharosa hona chaya keep it up safia dear...πππ
safia u know meri halat kasi han isko likhne main thora thora 1 hour main likha han u know i m not well so yaar ise bara comment main cha kar nai karpayi i m sorry dear but my tammy n legs give me agan pain so much n doctor advice me sleeping karo n rest karo so ab or nai likh sakti sorry dear baki sab tumhe bata diya han maine ok but u r awsome writter lolzzππππ
alll chapterss are amazing ab jaldi se happines lao is story main okk please safia...den my comment is end safia...love u update soon i m eagerly waiting n jaldi dena ok n thankss tumne apna promise mujhse jo kiya tha wo complete kiya n aj update diya thanks dear
Edited by shreya.kapoor - 12 years ago