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Sorry guys i can't post it . I don't know but there is an access denied frm my lappy.. Let me check the problem.. I will later post it..
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Hey guys,

i know i m late , not only late but too much late than my given time, but seriously my board examz are nearer so i m now studying hard..and secondly i was about to update yesterday but stupid my IF account was not permitting me to post, it was denied..But now thankful its fine..Bushra and Roopali, dear i made u wait alot..SORRY..so guys here u r going to start reading Chapter 11... ENJOY...


____Chapter: 11____


The next morning, uday done his first and foremost work; the ticket of back to India ,to his PRINCESS!!

There Manyata was over-joyed after knowing that Uday was returning back to her. It was as if her whole life and future would have depends on this day. In the morning, Neelaxi came to Jaigarh palace which was non other than a great surprise to Manyata. But this time she came to visit Manyata to take her at hospital for her monthly check up..

Manyata: but check up for what??

Neelaxi:com'on Manyata , don't tell too much lie, uncle Giriraj told me yesterday night that you were not feeling well.. So it will be better that u would go along with me..

Manyata: aahhh!! Neelaxi i'm absolutely alright!! Seriously here all my family really cares for me..

Neelaxi: and thats the reason uncle giriraj told me to take u.. He know manyata, that in the absence of him , uday and unnati ; u will not take care of yourself so he send me here.. Now let's go or else u wanna spend hours in explanations.

Manyata was getting ready but then a thought stuck in her mind, what if Neelaxi would know about her pregnancy? No she would not gonna this happen before giving this splendid surprise to Uday.


Neelaxi: so ready??
Manyata: yupp!! Neelaxi when Baba and unnati will be back from London??
Neelaxi: ohhh!! I forgot to tell u , well uncle Giriraj will return this evening and unnati will be there in a week.. She has little bit work there..
Manyata: ahhh!! I can understand..
Neelaxi: so shall we go now??
Manyata: yeah!! Sure..


Both left for the hospital. Manyata very cleverly took the reports from the hospital giving Neelaxi a quite fit reason..

Manyata: Neelaxi , where we are going?
Neelaxi: just chill Manyata!! We are going to sidd's home..
Manyata: but why??
Neelaxi: actually naina's parents are invited by sidd at his home, and as you know his parents are in nigeria now days so he wanted us to help in making dinner for the guests..
Manyata: oh its good that he atleast calls us to help him but who is naina??
Neelaxi: naina!!
Manyata:oh yeah!! Naina.. That our old class mate??
Neelaxi: yeah exactly.. Sidd likes Naina so he invited her parents for a small get together before sending marriage proposal at her home..
Manyata: ahhh!! Thats awesome..
Now mine and uday relation would gain better bonds, thank gosh now this sidd's
chapter wouldn't make more misunderstandings between us.. Manyata wondered.

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Both the ladies reached at siddhart mansion.
Hello ladies.. Greeted sidd!!
Sidd: hey manyata, glad that you came to help me..thanks
Manyata: pleasure dear..


Meanwhile, Giriraj, and Neelaxi 's mother also join them..
Manyata: baba ap yahan??
Giriraj: well bete , siddhart invite me for this small get together.. After all we are family friends..!!
Manyata: yeah!! But u were coming late night than how u reached now?
Sidd: oh hoo!! Manyata i elaborated uncle to reach early..
Manyata: ehhh!!

They all were sitting, talking and having gossips when neelaxi told manyata that she has to go for some urgent work but she will be back soon..
Manyata: sure don't worry i will manage all this..
Neelaxi left the mansion..


Manyata went to the kitchen to look after the maids , are they doing their work well..??

She told one of the maids, to go and buy some fresh citrus fruits and chocolate varieties , so that she can make a sweet dish for guests..
Only one maid left who was also wash out from there as she was directed by sidd..
Manyata was busy in making dish, when sidd came there in the kitchen..

Manyata: kuch chahiye apko??
Sidd: yeah , jxt felt thristy a bit so coming to drink water..
Manyata: ohh!! Why didn't u call me..??
Sidd: naah!! I m ok with it..!!
Manyata: hmmm..


He came forward near manyata and started to shake up the situation..
Sidd:
u know manyata, a person in his life time , have to do some weird and worse work which he shouldn't do..
Manyata's concentration was full on the dish which she was making but yet she was also listening him too..
He continued:
But ab insaan kar bhi kya sakta hai wo kabhi kabhi majboor ho jata hai ese kaam karne k liye...
Saying this he pour off water and split it on her, resulting her dupatta and shirt wet..
Sidd: ahh!! Sorry manyata, i m really sorry .. Ohh gosh!! What i have done..
He start removing her dupatta from her neck.,, in such a condition that even not giving her a clue that what he was up to..
Sidd: manyata give me ur dupatta i will dry, oh gosh u were coming to help me and instead of it , what i done to u.. Am really sorry manyata..
Manyata: naah!! Its ok sidd, it was ur mistake, all that done by mistake.. U don't need to do this , i will dry dupatta myself.. Please sidd i will do it myself..
Sidd: no no, what will uday think, i done to his wife this.. No ways please let me dry this dupatta.. U r all wet..
Manyata: no please sidd, i will do it myself..
Sidd: naah jxt give me...


He was trying to get her dupatta from her neck and that's too with his own hands..
And that poor well innocent manyata, even didn't recognize that he was up to something, and instead of it she came in his well planned game...but yet she was fighting hard to not to give him her dupatta.. ( here fighting doesn't mean tht any physical harm but to fight with spoken words)..

The situation was that sidd finally got victory in getting her dupatta from her neck and manyata was pleading him to give him back so tht she could dry it.. But still she didn't found that he was playing an evil game with her, she thought he was helping her..


Manyata: please sidd, give me back i will dry it myself..u don't need to felt embarrassed...
Sidd: no manyata i m your friend , i should help u..

The whole seen was witnessed by Giriraj, Neelaxi , Neelaxi's mother named " mahrani Sawitri" and not to mention uday too..
A lone tear fell from manyata's eyes and she grab her dupatta from him..
No one know's the real situation.. The scene which they saw, was not the same as it done..
All thought including uday too that something was in between the two, they were doing some couple romancing tactics..

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In the main hall:


Giriraj: shame on you manyata, didn't u thought about ur personal life , not about uday, not about ur family?? Ok if u were done with uday, but still didn't u thought about ur riyasat once; after all u r her highness , u should think twice for ur riyasat before doing anything bitter..why u cross all the limits even being a Yuvrani..??
Manyata: no baba, this is all wrong.. Nothing had happened..
Giriraj: don't call me baba, u r shameless, after doing all this u r saying that u still haven't done anything..
Manyata: uday uday listen to me , listen to me, uday just look at my face, do u think that ur manyata, ur princess can do anything wrong.. And that too , a private romance with another guy than u??.. Uday i m only ur's.. Uday no one can decease u in my life because u r my life,, uday believe me , believe ur princess.. Please uday please..


He pushed her back, causing her to fell down on the floor.. A pool of tears fell from her eyes, she never thought in her life that her husband ,her uday wouldn't believe her.but he stood silent there as he was still in a shock..
She request sidd to tell everyone the truth..
Sidd: what truth manyata?? Now everyone knows our relationso its better that we both should start a new life.. Manyata leave this uday, he wouldn't give u even a bit happiness in ur life.. I will make ur life a heaven..
Manyata: oh my gosh , u r also with all them.. U played game with me..
Sidd: c'mon manyata baby, ab drama band karo.. Dekho yahan par tumhara khud ka uday bhi saath nhi de raha, tum soch bhi nhi sakti k jitni personal and private interest share tum mere saath karti ho wo tum is k saath karne ka soch bhi nhi sakti.. Hum dono ne wese bhi socha tha naw k hum ek din in sab ko sach bata kr ek ho jaen ge, than why not today.. Its better to do it early than later..
Manyata: ohh my gosh!! Please sidd please don't tell a lie.. Please for god sake,, please..
She rapidly rush towards Giriraj : baba ap hi bataiye k me ap sab k sath hi thi and me kitchen sab k liye refreshment banane hi gae thi..
Giriraj: what?? Hum sab to yahan aae hi abhi hain.. Manyata u r seriously unbelievable..
Manyata: baba ap bhi... Neelaxi tell everyone that i came with u here..
Neelaxi: yeah ofcoarse u came with me here.. As u request me to leave u at sidd's house so i did.. But also tell everyone that when i told u that i m going to receive uday from the airport, u replied that u r not interested in that and wanna apend some time with sidd so i left u..thats all..

Manyata: neelaxi!! Oh gosh u all are playing a game with me... But why why?? What i have done hawn what i have done wrong..??
Please don't tell lie.. I wouldn't be able to live without Uday, please save my soul..baba please , please for god sake tell everyone that i came with u all..

she rolled towards his leg and held it.. He just pushed his leg, causing manyata to fell on the floor again..
Giriaj: u r shameless soul..

This was the biggest insult of her, of a YUVRANI..but she regret it and continued struggling..

Manyata: uday please believe ur manyata.. U know i m not like this.. I m only ur manyata , only ur princess.. Please uday..
Uday: don't even dare to took my name with ur shameless tongue..from now on i m nothing to u..
A lone of tear fell from his eye..
There wans't any mistake of both of them.. Only just was misunderstanding which wash off all their relation ship.. Both were struggling hard, manyata was unable to prove herself innocent and uday was unable to control himself as his soulmate destroy his life and all that evidence were enough for him to declare that his wife was in a relation with another guy..
All leaved from there following uday and leaving poor manyata there alone..
Sidd: sorry manyata but what should i do, uncle giriraj ki offer thi hi itni achi, wo hamare state ko aur power de rahe the aur agr ek baar mere state ko power mil jae ga to phir me Neelaxi ko apna bana paon ga.. Sorry manyata u were really a nice fellow to me.. In the last i m really sorry..
Manyata: sorry?? Just sorry??
U ruined my life.. Now i m nothing..

He even didn't reply and left her alone..
She lay on the floor like a blind and deaf and continued weeping..
But no she has to struggle more , how can she loss being a rajwada..
She stood up and rush directly to jaigardh palace..
All the main gates and windows were closed by servants as they were ordered by their majesty.. No servant was allowed to talk to manyata..
But she deny to go back and instead wait outside for uday till he come..
Meanwhile, giriraj came outside of the house..

Giriraj: chou chou,, poor soul!! Still u r here.. Go from here and from our life too..here are the divorced papers .. Sign on them as soon as possible..
Manyata: i never thought that a father can do this to his child..
Giriraj: yeah!! U r right , and i m not your father.. Little soul, u wanna know why all this i done..??
So the reason that u, the maddest soul on this earth gave all her property , share to her parents, and what u left for us , for my riyasat..
Manyata:but uday was also in this opinion with me..
Giriraj: but i m not.. I always dreamt to have a daughter in law who can denote all her property to jaigardh riyasat so that uday could become the King of this empire, but u , u make all his senses waste by making a stupid feeling in him and that's LOVE..
Manyata: u r thristy of only power..
Giriraj: ofcoarse dear.. Now get lost from our lives.. Do u even know that who has send these divorce paper to u?? Uday , he has send these to u..
Manyata: huhhnn!! Me yeh tab tak maanne ko tayar nhi hoon k uday ne mujhe chor diya , jab tak wo khud yeh sab mere moonh pr nhi kehta..
She runned away from there; leaving a letter with servant.. And requested him to give it to uday..

The letter was readed as :

Uday,

u know i m innocent, u know ur manyata, ur princess very well.. Me tumhe kabhi bhi dhoka nhi de sakti.. Not even in my dreams.. Uday yeh sab ek plan hai, hum dono ko alag karne k liye.. I denote my property to my maternal house so that's the reason baba wanted a new women in your life, so that with her all property and power , baba can make u the KING of this empire..please uday, save ur soulmate , i wouldn't be able to live without u.. Uday, now we have another reason to live and to start a new life; i m PREGNANT uday, its ur baby uday, only your's.. U know i never can thought of any other guy, never before u and never after u.. U r my life.. Save ur soulmate uday, save ur PRINCESS.. I m nothing without u..me tumhare bagair mar jaon gi Uday..mujhe khud se alag mat karo uday please ek baar meri baat suno Uday please..

Your and only your PRINCESS...
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Uday came back to home at late night ,many questions were revolving in his mind..he went straight forward to Giriraj's room and asked for manyata..
Giriraj:
Uday go and rest Bete!!..she left u and now even after this all u wanna meet her..

Uday: Dad i asked where is Manyata??...i wanna ask her some questions..

Giriraj: after this all, u wanna ask her questions..the TRUTH is infront of u...

Uday: Dad please..i wanna meet her just once..where is she??

Giriraj: Ok.. so listen.. u r really engrossed in her LOVE deeply , but not to forget ever that u r a RAJWADA...she catch out ur weak point ;that's LOVE and now see she wins, she made u fool in her LOVELY charms and escape with that siddhart..

Uday: what??

Giriraj: yeah!! u have listened it right..sidd came a while before u and took Manyata with her..manyata had asked for an urgent DIVORCE from u...she wanna free from this relation as fast as she can...

Uday, disheartly moved towards his room.. Tears, were not stoping from falling down, he was totally hurt as if this shock would take years to recover and BOOMMM,,,,, he crashed the mirror with his fist...blood starts oozing from his hand, and this time no one was there to aid his wounds ,no one; not even his PRINCESS...

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Now only one place was left to which she headed to; DEVGARDH PALACE...

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Guys that's all..Chapter 11 ends here..so if u like this Chapter then hit like button and if not then also hit like button😆..leave ur precious comments as they meant to me alot and give me spirit to write the next one...
LOVE,

😳😳😳SAFIA😳😳😳..

Edited by safia25 - 12 years ago
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Good Update
the twist is unexpected...
hate Giriraj 😡 he is so greedy
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i just can't believe that that bloody giriraj can do this with our poor soul manayta i hope her family atleast believe her plzzz don't let them reject manayta nd her baby plzzz it's a request
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Originally posted by: anushruthi

<font color="#000066">First to comment</font>

<font color="#000066">Good Update</font>
<font color="#000066">the twist is unexpected...</font>
<font color="#000066">hate Giriraj😡he is so greedy</font>


Thanx anu for ur great time to read it and ur comment.. Thats what i wanted to listen that the twist was unexpected.. Well its te heredity of rajwada to earn more power.. Awww!! He isn't greedy, he jxt wanna make his King..thanx
Edited by safia25 - 12 years ago
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A very nice update! Loved it! Hope everything gets well between manveer. Hate that giriraj and i just hope uday gets to know about him. Eagerly waiting for the next update so do continue soon.
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Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

i just can't believe that that bloody giriraj can do this with our poor soul manayta i hope her family atleast believe her plzzz don't let them reject manayta nd her baby plzzz it's a request


Yeah!! But its also not his fault, he jxt wanted to see his son up in the empire..yeah!! But he didn't done good with manyata..lets see what happen next..
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Originally posted by: sanah12

A very nice update! Loved it! Hope everything gets well between manveer. Hate that giriraj and i just hope uday gets to know about him. Eagerly waiting for the next update so do continue soon.


Thanx for liking my story.. Well i think u r new at my story post.. Will pm u when update..

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