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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

hehehehe lolzz...
promoz awesum...
loved it loads yar...


thx
i will continue asap and pm u
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Posted: 12 years ago

thank you glad you liked it
i will continue asap and pm u
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was gr88!!!!! ahaa,manyata is blushing!!!!!! udya ka to lucky day ho gaya,nicee poemm!!!!!! promo was awesomee!!!!!😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pia.raha

it was gr88!!!!! ahaa,manyata is blushing!!!!!! udya ka to lucky day ho gaya,nicee poemm!!!!!! promo was awesomee!!!!!😊😊😊


thx glad u liked
it yea uska lucky day hai😳😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 11
Manyata was into a bright red netted sarii with golden boarders on it ,the blouse was a deep cut with just a string holding to it ends and with a shiny golden siletons ,and golden jewels dancing in her ears and neck with the magalsundar and sindoor on her forehead while her hair was tied in a bun and yellow colour gaggra with a bright orange duppata and glittering diamond jewels to add to the glory the spoy light hit the two diva making them glitter like a godesses as every single men stood with there eyes popped out and uday stood with his signature smirk as they headed to the party ,they took there blessing from ds and all the other elders and went and seated themselves ,the ladies started to apply mehendi to manyata and jai the decoration was beautiful uday cursed himself for getting into a dull financial converstaion with giriraaj how badly he wanted to be with manyata and romance her ,while the aldy [seemaji ]was applying as she sadi
SEEMAJI:it had been only a week before while i applied mehendi for rajkumari manyata for her marriage and now i am applying for rajkumari jainandini god please do not let any evil power have there eyes on the happiness of this palace
JAI;seemaji since childhood we have spend more time with you and you are like our mom i will really miss you
SEEMAJI;I will miss you too so rajkumari jainandini whose name should we right
seemaji said with a naughty smile while jai blushed furiously and they completed the mehendi by now the party had been over na dit was time for dinner they all were seated but as because in manyata ,jai and unnati hands mehendi was applied it was almost impossible for them to eat' and they did not like servants feeding them since childhood
KOMAL:Jai beta come i will make you eat your dinner just like i used to do in childhood
JAI:yes ma and after all my last dinner in my home after tomorrow i will no more
all the ladies eyes grew moist ,they were indeed royal but both there daughter were grown with so much of love and affection it was hard to part from them so soon
VIJAY:Oh come on jai bhai we all know that your marriage is going to be short lived and after divorce soon you will land up again here
MANYATA;and what makes you think so vijay banna
VIJAY:No i mean just that i was jocking sorry if i hurt any one i am sorry jai bhai
situations were heated up ,manyata was nagry on vijay banna for supporting augustia udya felt the contrast between the brother and sister as to cool up the situation he sadi
UDAY:Unnati i can see that mehendi is applied on your hand so shall i feed you
UNNATI:that would be great dada i can hardly remember a day you were this good to me
UDAY:oh chotti complement aur thapar ek saath come here
he smiled as she came and sat beside him as he began feeding unnati and manyata sat there watching suddenly uday this act got her indication as she looked at vijay
MANYATA:Vijay banna will you feed me
VIJAY:sure sisy
she went and sat beside him while he was feeding her by now all the elders along with jai ,uday and unnati had left .uday thoguth of giving both of them some time to sort out there problem as vijay began seeing the place suitable for converstaion
VIJAY:i am sorry manyata i was wrong you are much happier with uday then you would ever be with augustia
MANYATA:vijay banna lets just wrap up old issues and talk about future as our future and present is much more happier than our past vijay banna what augustia did was just a prank to spoil our marriage there had baan nothing between me and augustia
VIJAY:WHAT THAT BA%#@RD I WILL GET HIM INTO PIECES ONCES HE COME BACK
MANYATA:its ok the good thing is that now we are happy and vijay banna you have to do a lot of thing you do not have time for thinking about puny people like augustia
VIJAY;I dd not get you many thing to do in sence
MANYATA:like porposing to unnati for amrriage unanti oh shit vijay baana i am too late uday is gonna murder me
VIJAY;slow it down manyat bhai what about dinner
MANYATA:i had enough of it and if i have any more tomorrow i won't fit in my dress
passing a smile she rushed to her room jsu to hear two loud shrill scream and saw uday was into his trunks and tee while jainandini wa sinto her designer purple nightie and both were facing each other and sceaming there lungs off as
JAI;
but jiju i want to sleep with jiji
UDAY;but she is my wife even i want to sleep with her
they ahd been fighting like kids for an hour as manyata stood there being victimised between her sister and husband 'fight
JAI:Jiji tell jiju that you will sleep with me
UDAY:manyata tell jai that you will sleep with me
MANYATA:Me what shall i tell jai actually
JAI:I cannot believe you jiji its my last night in the palace and you will reject sleeping with me
MANYATA;uday...jai is going to get married tomorrow so
UDAY:So princess you will reject your husband
just then unnati came at her brother saying
UNANTI:Come on dada don't be kiddish you get to stay your entire life with bhabhisa ok so let jai sleep with her
JAI:WOA TWO VOTES I WIN
saying this she dragged manyata tot he room as unanti winked to uday and went to her own room and uday went to the room tugegd himself and tried hard to sleep he switched off the light trying hard to sleep when suddenly he felt someone tiptoeing to his room and soon placed her lips in his forehead ,he got her hand and smirked
UDAY:I missed you princess
he swished on the lights and found manyata infront of him with a black nightie lokking super hot so without even her knowing he pinned her to the bed ,he took his position above her body as he looked into her eyes she carssed his check saying
MANYATA:jai is fats asleep and i have five hour to sleep here
UDAY:i am so sorry princess tonight you are getting no sleep
she saw the naughty motive in his eyes as she said
MANYATA:Make it softer cause i do not ant people hearing my screams
UDAY;I will try
soon he left wet kisses all over her body ,in no time there clothes were thrown apart as they became one the last thing he mummered before falling asleep was
UDAY:You looked so beautiful today
and the night passed away in a bliss
promo for chappy 11
jai -jaggat marriage
announcement of augustia and natasha relationship
an evil plan



done with this chappy
sorry for the late updates
please do like
next update next wednesday


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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey nice updat sis
and jiju sali fight was nice
And promo is dangerous
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: roopali15

Hey nice updat sis
and jiju sali fight was nice
And promo is dangerous


I AM GLAD YOU LIKED IT
NEXT UPDATE NEXT WEDNESDAY
_Annesha_ thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsssmmm anne thnks fr pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome mindblowing loved it loads...

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