manveer ss mistake realise part 3 end

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UVRAJ UDAYVEER SINGH : he is the yuvraj of jaygarh . And as we all know he is a stunning prince . he is the fiance of yuvrani manyata , he loves manyata , but manyata does not . she accepts him just fo
r the sake for her family

YUVRANI MANYATA : she is the yuvrani of devgarh . she is sweet, cute and naughty . she loves her family alot , n can do anything for her family .

RAJKUMARI JAYNANDINI : sister of manyata. in short she is called Jay . Jay wants manyata to marry uday so that the palace gets saved by bidding (neelaami ) . she does not like manyata as Jay wanted to be yuvrani of devgarh

RAJKUMAR VIJAY : he is elder bro of manyata and jay . he supports manyata in every kind of situation

RAJKUMARI UNNATI : unnati is younger sister of uday , she loves uday alot. she supports him and wants him to win

MRINALINI DEVI ( DS ) : she is the grandmother of manyata , jay and vijay.

MAHARAJ BRIJRAJ : he is the father of manyata and jay . he loves both his daughters and always wants them to win.

MAHARANI KOMAL : she is the mother of manyata and jay . she always wanted manyata to become yuvrani of devgarh and her wish came true

MAHARAJ GIRIRAJ : he is father of uday n unnati

JAGAT :jagat is an commoner. manyata wanted to marry jagat . jagat shows that he loves her but he loves her property.
uday knows all this
NOTE: guys har imaginary epiz mein 3 parts honge . phir next imaginary epi hoga jisme dusre leads aur story hogi...
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Manyata in her room wakes up . she sees the room filled with flowers . theres a letter in one of them , she reads it '' gud morning princess. Kesi ho ?hum tumhe ese flowers roz bhejhenge , akhir tum hamari h
one wali patni jo ho '' then a voice comes '' tumhara uday ''
Manyata gets up and goes to him.
MANYATA : halkat vede ,tum yahan kya kar rahe ho , tumhari himmat kese hui mere kamre mein aane ki
UDAY : halkat veda nahi , pati parmeshwar ji
MANYATA: acha , jyada bolne ki jarurat nahi . tumhe kya lagta hai ki main tumse shaadi kar rahi hunt oh tum mujhpe apna haq jamaoge . to phir bilkul nahi , kyunki main sirf or sirf apne pariwaar ki izzat ke liye yeh shhadi kar rahi hun, warna toh main jagat se pyaa…
UDAY : kya hua ruk kyun gayi
MANYATA: kuch nahi
UDAY :tum yahi kehna chahti ho na ki tum jagat se pyar karti ho, par yeh baat jaanlo ki who tumse nahi tumhari daulat se pyaar karta hai.
MANYATA: bas karo uday ! ek aur shabd uske baare mein mat bolna . who mujhse pyaar karta hai yeh main jaanti hoon , tumhari tarha nahi ki who mujhe sirf hasil karna chahe .
Uday tightly hold her shoulders
UDAY: tum kya jaano manyata ke hum tumse kitna pyaar karte hai . hum tumhe hasil nahi karna chahte tum se pyaar karte hai.
MANYATA: mera haath chodo uday … dard ho raha hai.
Uday uska haath chodta hai aur waha se chala jaata hai .
Manyata takes a breath of relief n has a flashback of everything what uday said.

NEXT SCENE , all r having breakfast

KOMAL : yeh manyata kaha reh gayi
JAY : acha hi hai , atleast hum sukoon se to breakfast kar sakenge
KOMAL : jay ! who aapki badi behen hai
JAY : maa…
Sudden manyata aati hai
MANYATA : chalo ab main aagayi , sab sukoon se breakfast kar sakte hai .
All having der breakfast , then
UDAY : vese DS manyata aur hamari shaadi ka mhurat nikla kya .
Manyata stares at him.
DS: are haan hum aap sab ko itni jaroori baat bolna kese bhul gaye.
Pandit ji ne kaha hai ki aap dono ki shaadi ka mhurat 5 din baad nikla hai .
MANYATA : kya
DS: kyun beta koi pareshaani hai kya?
MANYATA : nahi toh, wo toh hum bohot khush ho gaye the .
Uday then keeps his hand on her's . manyata luks at him
UDAY : hoingi bhi kyun nahi , akhir humse itna pyar karti hai , toh shaadi ki baat sunkar toh khush hoingi hi .
KOMAL: itni jaldi sab taiyariya kese ho paingi
DS: aap pareshaan mat hoe komal , sab ho jaega.
Den all hav der breakfast n all go to der room , as manyata was about to go , smbody pulls her hand towards himself its uday .
MANYATA :yeh kya kar raha hai ? kya baat hai ?
UDAY : tumhe yeh kehna tha ki tumhare kamre mein main ek dress rakhi hai . wo pehen lena aur ready ho jana , hume kahi bahar jaana hai
MANYATA: kaha ?
UDAY : jitna kaha hai utna karo .
MANYATA : hmmm

NEXT SCENE
Uday manyata ka wait kar raha hai . phir manyata niche aati hai woe k beautiful black saari hai .
Uday use dekhta reh jaata hai .
MANYATA : kya hua ? chale?
uday jawab nahi deta.
MANYATA: UDAY!
UDAY:kya hai ?
MANYATA ; chale?
UDAY: haan

Both in car
MANYATA : hum kaha jaa rahe hai
UDAY : dinner pe
MANYATA : hmm

NEXT SCENE .wo wahaan puhuch jate hai .
MANAGER OF HOTEL : welcome sir n mam ,, aaap…
UDAY : ji main MR. UDAY …maine table reserve kiya tha
MANAGER : ji sir kon aapko nahi jaanta ,, aaiye ..
Manyata jab wahaan jati hai toh surprised .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice job !
The dialogues were very good !
Do PM me when you update !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting chapter continue soon😉...
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nice story cont sun ... pm me plez
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its lovelly!!!!!!!! do update soon 😊
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manyata surprised , wo jagah itni khubsurti se saji thi, wo hall sirf unke liye reserve tha .manyata itni khush hoti hai ki woh uday ko ek tight hug deti hai.
MANYATA: thank you uday.
uday ko ek shivering h
oti hai khushi ki , woh bhi phir use hug karta hai
UDAY : isme thank you bolne wali kya baat hai , kya hum aapke liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte .
phir manyata piche hatti hai , aur ek cute smile deti hai .
uday phir uski chair hata ta hai taki wo beithe .
uday phir waiter ko bulata hai
UDAY : manyata ordr dedo.
MANYATA : nahi , tumhi dedo
uday phir order deta hai.
MANYATA : yeh sab toh meri pasand ka hai ?
UDAY: jo tumhari pasand wo meri pasand
MANYATA : hmmm
kuch der tak wo baate karte hai ... phir khana aa jaata hai.
UDAY : lo aagaya aap ka khana .
dey hav der meal .
UDAY : dinner to hogaya , ab dance ki baari hai . Will you dance wid me .
manyata kuch sochti hai phir haan keh deti hai .
UDAY : music on !
they start dancing.
uday hold her waist with one hand and , his other hand in her hand .

Kehte Hain Khuda Ne Iss Jahan Mein Sabhi Ke Liye
Kisi Na Kisi Ko Hai Banaya Har Kisi Ke Liye
Tera Milna Hai Uss Rab Ka Ishaara Maanu
Mujhko Banaya Tere Jaise Hi Kisi Ke Liye

( he makes manyata make round and pulls towards himself)

Kehte Hain Khuda Ne Iss Jahan Mein Sabhi Ke Liye
Kisi Na Kisi Ko Hai Banaya Har Kisi Ke Liye
Tera Milna Hai Uss Rab Ka Ishaara Maanu
Mujhko Banaya Tere Jaise Hi Kisi Ke Liye

( he pulls her more closer , manyata feels a bit uncomforable )

Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
Kaise Hum Jaane Hume Kya Pata
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
Tu Humsafar Hai, Phir Kya Fikar Hai
Jeene Ki Wajah Hi Yahi Marna Issi Ke Liye
Kehte Hain Khuda Ne Iss Jahan Mein Sabhi Ke Liye
Kisi Na Kisi Ko Hai Banaya Har Kisi Ke Liye


Meharbaani Jaate Jaate Mujh Pe Kar Gaya
Guzarta Sa Lamha Ek Daaman Bhar Gaya
Tere Nazara Mila, Roshan Sitaara Mila
Takdeer Ki Kashtiyon Ko, Kinara Mila
Sadiyon Se Tarse Hai Jaisi Zindagi Ke Liye
Teri Sauhbat Mein Duaayein Hain Ussi Ke Liye
Tere Milna Hai Uss Rab Ka Ishaara
Maanu Mujhko Banaya Tere Hi Jaise Kisi Ke Liye
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
Kaise Hum Jaane Hume Kya Pata
Kuch Toh Hai Tujhse Raabta
Tu Humsafar Hai, Phir Kya Fikar Hai
Jeene Ki Wajah Hi Yahi Marna Issi Ke Liye
Kehte Hain Khuda Ne Iss Jahan Mein Sabhi Ke Liye
Kisi Na Kisi Ko Hai Banaya Har Kisi Ke Li

both have lovely eye contact dey r still dancing , even though d music stopped , sudden dey stop dancing , realizing the music hav stopped.
MANYATA N UDAY : woh ...
BOTH : pehle tum
BOTH :suno
MANYATA : wo main kehta chahti thi ke bohot deer ho gayi hai , kya hum chale ?
UDAY : ha chalte hai .

both in car . dey luk at each other one after d other .both in flashback of dancing.
they reach raj mahal.

as soon as they reach .
KOMAL : beta aap log aagaye , hum aap ka kab se intezaar kar rahe the .
MANYATA : ha maa woh...
UDAY : aunty komal , actually hum manyata ko kahi ghumane lekar gaye the , ( holding her hand , manyata luks him ) manyata hamare saath kuch waqt bitana
chahti thi isiliye ..
KOMAL: bohot acha kiya beta, akhir shaadi se pehle ka waqt bohot kimti hota hai jo hame zindagi bhar yaad rehta hai . Aap dono ki jodi ese hi bane rhe .

both luk each other .
MANYATA : acha maa hum apna kamre mein jate hai , hame bohot neend aa rahi hai.


NEXT MORNING

manyata ut ti hai aur phir se phul dekhti hai , use ghussa aata hai.

phir wo uday ke paas jane hi wali hoti hai ke komal aati hai .
KOMAL : manyata aap kaha jaa rahi hai ?
MANYATA: maa wo ...
KOMAL : pehle apne yeh flowers toh par likhe letters to padh lijiye aap ke well wishers ke hai , aapki shaadi ki khabar sunkar unhone bhejhi hai .

manyata man mein hi apne aap par hasne lagti hai .

KOMAL : kya hua beta , aap jaldi taiyar ho jaiye , pehle hi bohot der ho chuki hai, aapko apni saariya pasand karni hai . jald niche aajaiye ... aur haan main
aapka breakfast aapke kamre main bhej dungi .
MANYATA: ji maa

manyata phir taiyar hokar nivhe chali jati hai .

KOMAL : aaiye beta.
MANYATA : ji
manyata saari dekhte rehti hai tabhi use kisi ka phone aata hai. wo ut kar kisi kone main jati hai aur phone pick karti hai .

MANYATA: hello , kon hai
CALLER ; main hoon jagat .
MANYATA; jagat , tum . kese ho tum ? sab thik to hai na ?
JAGAT : thik kese manyata , mujhe tumse milna hai , abhi aur agar abhi nahi to kabhi nahi. tum mujhe 'shamshaan ghat' par milna.
MANYATA : par jagat...

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KOMAL : manyata beta kya hua aaiye.
MANYATA : maa mujhe kahi jaana hai main aapse baaad main baat karungi .

she runs in her car , aur wo wahan puhuch jati hai .
woh car mein se utarti hai.

MANYATA : koi hai ? jagat ? kaha ho tum ?
then suddenly someone keeps his hand on her shoulder. she shouts 'aaa...'
JAGAT: manyata ! relax , main hun jagat.
manyata use hug karti hai
MANYATA : jagat tum kaha the? tum to mujhe bhul hi gaye ho .
JAGAT : manyata tum ye kese keh sakti ho ! tumne us uday se shaadi karne ke liye haan ki aur mujhe keh rahi ho!
MANYATA: jagat , main tum se pyaar karti hun , plz mujhe galat mat samjho !main toh bas apne parivaar ke liye uday se shaadi kar rahi hun.
JAGAT : bas karo manyata plz bohot hogaya .
MANYATA : plz jagat ,main uday se shaadi kar rahi hun par pyaar to tumse karti hun na!
JAGAT : nahi mujhe tum se baat nahi karni ( funny mood )
MANYATA: to thik hai mujhe bhi ni karni .

both laugh n hug. for sometime dey talk wid each other.then

JAGAT : manyata main toh bhul hi gaya . yeh kuch papers hai mujhe tumse inme sign chahiye .
MANYATA : yeh kese papers hai , inme sign karna thik hoga kya ?
JAGAT : kyun? kya tumhe mujhpe bharosa ni . kya main tumse koi galat papers par sign lunga.
MANYATA : nahi esi baat nahi hai ...
JAGAT : esi hi baat hai !
MANYATA: acha baba , thik hai ,ruko sign karti hun

jagat gives an evil smile .

jese hi woh sign karne jaati hai , tabhi koi usse woh papers cheen leta hai .
jagat n manyata both are shocked to see him.

guys plz comment n tell me ur fav scene.
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Very nice update. Interesting story. But don't update like that. Give a proper subject name and try to update in one thread.
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PART -3 ?
the episode begins wid manyata and jagat in a shock. its uday who snatched the papers from manyata's hand.
manyata : uday...( sudden she gets angry ) tumhari himmat k
ese hui mere haath se in papers ko cheenne ki ?
uday : himmat toh tumhe apni dekhni chahiye , hamari mangetar hokar kisi aur ke saath . woh toh rehne hi do , in papers par sign karne se pehle ek baar padh
leti, pata bhi hi inpar kya likha hai , lo khud hi padhlo .

manyata reads the paper , its as...
''yuvrani manyata kumari apni saari property jagat rathore ke naam kar rahi hai''

manyata in great shock that how can jagat do this to her.
uday : pata chal gaya manyata tumhe iski sachai .
jagat ghabrate hue : na nahi manya...
manyata (crying) : bas jagat ! tum yeh kese kar skte ho ? kya woh saare lamhe jo humne saath bitaye the sab jhoot the ? kya yeh pyaar jhoot tha ?
kya mere pyaar mein koi kami reh gai thi?
jagat (angry): main tumse bilkul bhi pyaar nahi karta ! samjhi main toh bas daulat chahta tha , tumhe kya lagta hai main tum jaisi ladki jo apni zimedariya bhi
nahi samajhti, par isi baat ka main istimaal karna chahta tha , u foolish girl !

uday ghusse main uska collar pakadh leta hai .

uday : bas , aur kuch nahi agar meri manyata ke bare mein aur kuch bhi bola toh main tumhe nahi chodunga samjhe tum .
jagat : agar tu mujhe dhamki de raha hai toh aa lad mujhse !
uday : acha abhi dikhata hun !

dey start fighting , dono equal jeet rahe hai .

manyata : plz tum dono ladna band kardo , uday plz chodo use !

woh nahi maante woh ladte rehte hai aur uday jeet raha hai , manyata rokne ki koshish kar rahi hai.

akhir mein jagat haar jata hai usse bohot khoon beh raha hai, uday ke haath par chot lagi hai .
manyata apne hi khayalo mein dubi hai .

uday : manyata plz mat ro , main tumhe iss tarha nahi dekh sakta plzz. chahe jagat tumse pyaar kare ya na kare , main tumse humesha pyaar karunga
aur har mushkil mein tumhara saath dunga .

manyata crying more harder and hugs uday tightly ,he can feel the pain and he too hugs her.

manyata ( crying ) : woh ese kese kar sakta hai !...

suddenly she moves back and cleaning her tears : nahi uday , main nahi roungi uske liye , usne mujhe dhokha diya hai .
uday : haan manyata main use kabhi maaf nahi karunga , yahi to main tumhe batana chahta tha lekin ...ab tumhe uske bare bhul jana chahiye.
manyata : haan uday... suddenly she sees jagat is half concious and going to attack uday , and manyata pushes uday. jagat goes and he is hit by a tree .
manyata falls over uday , she afraid . and uday sees this and smiles hugs her . manyata helds her head up and a beautiful eye contact between them.

she gets up , manyata : sorry uday woh jagat tumhe marne wala tha .main bohot darr gayi ...
uday : koi baat nahi manyata , woh... thank you .
manyata : thank you mat bolo uday mujhe tumhari fikr thi aur akhir kaar tum mere ...
uday : main tumhara kya ?
manyata : woh,,,,,
uday : tumhara hone wala pati ..
manyata : ha ...hmm

uday smiles. manyata then sees dat his hand is bleeding

manyata : uday ! ye kya ,tumhara haath to .
uday : woh to kuch nahi hai tumhare aage .
manyata : uday ,,,,,,,, manyata apne dupatte se thoda kapda phad deti hai , aur use baand deti hai .
uday : kya baat hai , akhir kaar aapko hamari kimat pata chal hi gayi , abhi abhi toh ek rishte se...( he stops thinking what he is saying )
manyata : uday , tum sahi keh rahe ho ki main abhi abhi ek rishte se mera matlab hai dhoke se . par ab mujhe tumhari kimat pata chal gayi hai uday , mujhe
maaf kardo har cheez ke liye, maine tumhare pyaar ka mazak udaya .
uday : manyata tumhe maafi mangne ki koi jarurat nahi , tumhe kya pata tha , par ab mujhe pata lag gya hai ki tum humse pyaar karne lagi ho!
manyata blushes .
uday kisses on her forehead and then her cheeks .
they both hug .
manyata : i love yu uday
uday : i love too princess .

then uday takes out a ring ,
uday : princess kya ab aap apni marzi se humse shaadi karengi ?
manyata blushes : yes , i will my prince ..

END OF EPI
hope u guys like
it ...comment ur fav part .
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aww! a very nice story the ending was so cute! loved it

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