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Suddenly the taxi screeched to a halt and Manyata was back

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to real world .She asked the "kya baat hai apnei ghari kyui rokh di" "meinee kahaa madamji ghari apnei app rukhgayi...sayeed engine mei kuch kachra ghush gaya hai ". She looked at her watch impatiently and said "eskoh theek hone mei kitni deer lagegi" "kuch baata toh nahi sakte paar kamsei kaam 3 sei 4 ghantei" "KYA ... nahi app mujhe ehi choor dijiye...waise bhi mei already bohoot late hoi chuki hui" .She paid him and started walking ,after walking a few kilometers she stopped and started asking for lift .Half an hour passed she stood there under the sun which was burning and boiling her up .Her face was covered with dust and she was lossing her hope.Suddenly a black BMW passed her by the speed of wind .She stared at it and saw it took an u turn and came back .The black glass was lowered and a fair , handsome , muscular guy with a tatoo on his arm. H e took off his shades which revealed his dark chocolaty eyes .He asked her in a very polite tone "need some help" "Yeah.. actually i need lift..woah meri ghari karab hogayi aur agar app mujhe Devgarh taak lift dei saktei toh .." "koi baat nahi hum tumhei chor dete hai" "Thanks" saying this she got inside as he started to drive .The AC cooled her while the soft music relaxed her mind .He was hooked on her and finally he asked "tumnei apna naam nahi bataya" "Manyata..." "bohoot khubsuraat hai bhilkul tumhare tarah" he gave her an anglelic smile and she looked at him and put a fake smile .He asked "toh tum Devgarh pheheli baar arahi hui" "ji haah..actually mei Srinagar sei hui".He opened his mouth to speak but suddenly a bullet hit the looking glass of the car .Before they could realise
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Precap: she saw her hand covered with blood and gave a cry
sorry for my mistakes
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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys see i m a terrific wrtter nd dis 1 thread thing is gng jst above my head guess shld jst leave writting na😭 bt i dnt knw how to make thread
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: annesha18

guys see i m a terrific wrtter nd dis 1 thread thing is gng jst above my head guess shld jst leave writting na😭

hey dear...well I havn't read the previous part but this seems really interesting story

Why do you want to quit ? you have any problem you can ask??

Its very simple just keep all your updates in one thread and make an index on the first page...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow this story is getting interesting with the updates.😛 Great update dear.👏 👏 👏 I think that person was Uday who gives lift to Manyata.😉 Nice n very fresh concept dear.😊 Don't feel disappointed.😊 If u need help u can ask anybody how to make single thread.😊 Don't quit it k.😊 Keep up the good work.👍🏼
Do update soon buddy.🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update dear
u write so well
continue soon
the story is becoming very interesting

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