**The Unknown Truth**ManVeer SS chapter 9 pg 91

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#411

res😊

Awesome update Zainab👏.

The dance was so HOT!!! Could actually feel their passion.

Piya's self talk has raised many questions - BUT I'M SURE YOU'LL GIVE US THE ANSWERS SOON😉.

Our couple locked in the room was too cute, not to mention funny 😆. Very, very , very nicely written 👍🏼. It was most enjoyable .

Last part was a bit spooky , BUT - I highly doubt that Piya is a ghost😲. She probably entered another room which was close by ... that's when it "seemed" like she dissappeared. ( JUST A GUESS!!!!)

Please continue soon😃.

Thanx for the PM😊.

Hope u are feeling much better!

Edited by ...navina... - 12 years ago

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InkAndFable

@InkAndFable

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#412

res. what an update babes so cute romantic too but you ended it at such an intresting point plez update soon.

Edited by san.gar - 12 years ago

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@ITV_Loverr

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#413

Will comment after 3 days.

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: huma12.
zainiii yar kahan hai update day day itna tarpana achiii bat nahiii hotiii sweetyyy

sorry yar i wont be updating tonight! baki ka kal! i am busy have tests! 😭

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huma

@huma12.

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: zinayrules

sorry yar i wont be updating tonight! baki ka kal! i am busy have tests! 😭

koi bat nai zainiii its ok sweetyyy 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃 and best of luck 4 ur testtt 👍🏼

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zainab

@--Zinay--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: huma12.

koi bat nai zainiii its ok sweetyyy 😃 and best of luck 4 ur testtt 👍🏼

thanks! i have prepared i hope it goes well! 😊

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pia

@pia.raha

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#417

plzz plzz jaldi full update de doo,am waitngg!!!!!!!!!😊

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Pranoti aka Sanju

@Damon.Holic

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#418

aaawww... that was sweet... hehehe piya getting jealous... that was gr8... do continue fast... aise hi adha chod ke kaha chali?? bad move zainab bad mov... hehehe

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Pranoti aka Sanju

@Damon.Holic

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#419

uhhh...ohhh...piya manyata ka ghost hain????? aaa...this was 3 much...aisa kaise ho sakta hain?? no piya cant be a ghost..kyunki agr wo ghost hoti toh room ke bahr jaane main use kounsi probs hoti??? wo toh abhi raat ko jaise gayee thi waise hi jaati na...nai nai...fir kya hua...are u sure zainab ke woh uday ke aankho ke saamne gayab hui???

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Sonam

@-RK_Ki_Biwi-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#420

🤣 🤣 🤣 Hi Zinu.🤗 Fantastic, mindblowing, superb, awesome update.👏 👏 👏

Song n that club scene was amazing, Piya was getting jealous.😆

n that room scene , Uday teased her so much.😉 evil ,evil n mobile switched off n showed her low bettery.naughty boy.😆

OMG Bad timing, they were about to kiss each other.😳

OMG 😲 Don't tell me Piya is Manyata's ghost.😕 but reincarnation is also not possible in this FF.😳 after reading the last scene m so excited to read the next update.😛

Thanks for the wonderful update n PM.😊

Do update soon, can't wait to read more.😉

Great job.👍🏼

love ya.🤗 🤗