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Posted: 12 years ago
LOL 😆
Rishika Mihani as Unnati (UV 's sister)
superb idea
wow
u rock
awesome thinking
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushruthi

LOL 😆

Rishika Mihani as Unnati (UV 's sister)
superb idea
wow
u rock
awesome thinking


thanku thanku hum to paidashi zaheen hain 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
I read ur SS in one go and its awesome dear
well one of d best thing abt d cs is rishika as udays sis i am lovin dat fact
coming to the ss its superb and really cute
piya is so innocent yet so wild
And uday here has a heart as compared to other ff's or ss uday ka flirt wala avatar as always roxx
loved the dialogue full on tapori ek baar uday bhi bole full on aise dialogue toh maza ajaye fr example chl khopche mai chL 😆
uday introduced piya as his gf guts hai bande mai would luv to read piya's reaction after tina & karan leaves
i am missing dek and manveer fights
luved ur SS dear do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanarasheedroxx

I read ur SS in one go and its awesome dear
well one of d best thing abt d cs is rishika as udays sis i am lovin dat fact
coming to the ss its superb and really cute
piya is so innocent yet so wild
And uday here has a heart as compared to other ff's or ss uday ka flirt wala avatar as always roxx
loved the dialogue full on tapori ek baar uday bhi bole full on aise dialogue toh maza ajaye fr example chl khopche mai chL 😆
uday introduced piya as his gf guts hai bande mai would luv to read piya's reaction after tina & karan leaves
i am missing dek and manveer fights
luved ur SS dear do pm me



thanks a lot dear! i am glad u like it that much! that"s even my fav thing rishika his sister 🤣 haha uday will also start talking tapori! then mr and ms tapori together will rock! i would surely pm u next time😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
fabulous ss!
just one question
where is manyata's suicide note which she had wrote for uday?
no one seems to have read it!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: wendy25

fabulous ss!
just one question
where is manyata's suicide note which she had wrote for uday?
no one seems to have read it!


that she left in her cupboard!
as she died no one touched her things just to pacifiy their hearts wd her things! the letter is still there where she kept it! and soon uday will get it! thanks for reading and liking my ss! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks to all these people for liking the last chapter! and a big thanku to all wo gave there precious comments!


RECAP=

tina= ok ok stop fighting both of u! piya tum kal iske sath hi ana and thats my order!!
piya=buu...tt
karan=no if, no but, sirf JUTT
uday-piya-tina-karan= 🤣
piya=ok will come with him!
uday=😃
they all have a long chat and all become very good friends! but uday keeps on looking at piya with great affection!
this is noticed by both karan and tina and they pas smiles to each other! 😊




they all were having a good time in the club...having small chats teasing each other jokes etc etc...
kara= come on guys lets dance!
tina= ya great come on piya uday lets dance
piya=u guys go i am in no mood of dancing
tina= come on yar !
piya= please tina not again i don't wna come u guys go
uday=choro ise come on lets go guys...
after a lot convincing finally all gave up against stubborn piya and headed towards the dance floor!
(the song from student of the year movie kukar kamal da was playing)
Girls present there pulled uday and karan between them
'koi na jane kithoon aya hai tu'
sub day dillan wich ho gai kukadoo koo
ena sona ena cool
munda ena wonderful
enu dekhay jay kuriyan
tey kendi
O MY GOD!
munda sub ma subsay best
munda better then the rest
enu waike jay munday tey kenday
O MY GOD!
o sena chay wiskut da
o munda chay foot da
o dheray dheray karda dhamal hoo
munda kukad kamal da
ho munda kukar kamal da
o kuriyan tey ho jae
effect odi chaal da
kukar kamal da
o munda kukad kamal da
o munda kukad kamal da
piya and tina were burning in jealousy seeing them with girls tina couldn't tolerate more so she pushed the girls and started to dance with karan
but piya had her ego she didn't move instead kept on murmuring
piya= halkat veda yeda mje apni girls friend bolta hai or in larkiyon k sath chipak chipak kr nach raha hai agr natak nai krna ata to bola ku ye meri gf hai! huh!! 😡
o bandon ma banda perfect bay misaal da
kukar kamal da
o munda kukar kamal da
koi na jane kithoon aya hai tu
sub day dillan wich ho gai kukaroo ku!
girls were totally drooling over uday and he was enjoying because he saw piya's annoyed face 😉
tu tey hoya hai subdi misal sonaya
tu tey chamke banke akhan wich star sonya!
hoo tu tey lagay bara hi tip top baliya
to tey ae tey dujay full stop baliya
dill doray idr udr
dharkan ve titar bitar
hoo munda angrai jadoon marda
oo mardaaa!
o munda kukar kamal da
o munda kukar kamal da
o kuriyan tey ho jae
effect odi chaal da
kukar kamal da
o munda kukad kamal da
o munda kukad kamal da
it was more then enough for piya she went to the dance floor pushed the girls beside uday got hold of his neck and started to move with the beat of the song!
uday= had the widest smile 😃 and the most evil smirk 😈 on his handsome face...after all he had succeeded in his evil plan of making piya jealous!😉
o bandoon ma banda perfect bey misal da
o kukar kamal da
uday pulled piya very close to himself he was holding her by her ass and her arms were around his neck and were dance very intimately...both were totally lost in each other's eyes they had totally forgoten their surroundings and karan-tina were enjoying seeing them like that! 😆
oo munda kukar kamal da
i like the way he's lookin
the way he is movin now
i like the way they call him
kukar kamal da
piya now moved to his back she stood in a way her hands were on his chest moving up and down and his hands again made their way to her ass ,the were moving with the beat of the song, their bodies glued together were rubbing against each other!
o ma kiya charya hai sub nu bukhar bay wja hai ku,
ek anar soo bemar bay wja hai ku,
tu kr lay jini binti ,
honi na teri ginti,
ae tabar hai kisi dujay thayke dar da,
o munda kukar kamal da
o munda kukar kamal da
o kuriyan tey ho jae
effect odi chaal da
kukar kamal da
o munda kukad kamal da
o munda kukad kamal da
the song ended but the scene on the dance floor was not coming to an end they were not ready to leave each other uday was continuously moving his hands on her ass and she was also moving her hands on his back up and down and were lost in the deep eyes of each other! uday was going deeper and deeper he felt that he has an unknown bound to her he could see the immense pain in her eyes which unknowingly made him guilty!
uday's pov...
am i the fact that she is in pain? why i can't see u in pain? why do i feel that some where some how i am the reason of the pain i can see in your eyes? why do i feel affectionate to u? it seems we have an old bond to each other a very deep and strong bond!
end of uday's pov!
piya aka manyata's pov 😉
don't look at me like that...u were the one who left me all alone i craved for ur embrace...i craved for your love! i loved u beyond my powers i loved u with all heart and true dignity...i won't fall for u again...but then i can't resist myself i loved u then , i love u now and will always do so! why why why u did that to me?
end of manyata's pov
their chain of thoughts were broken when tina-karan were shaking them
tina= oye kahan kho gye? o hello love birds hum sub bhi hain yahan bhul to nai gaye na!
piya immediately left him excused herself and made her way to the washroom...tina could see the pain in her eyes but then no one had the answer for it! karan changed the topic and tried to make the environment better! piya was feeling suffocated as if she was being chocked she left the club without even informing anyone and sent a message to tina!
piya's message
tina i was't feeling well and i am sorry i have left the club without informing u and all...i hope u understand! see u tomorrow! bye
tina showed the message to uday and karan...uday was unknowingly feeling guilty for her condition though she did't share what was wrong with her still he thought himself to be the reason of her pain!
uday= i guess we must leave now...i too have an important meeting see u all tomorrow...
all said bye and made their ways to their destinations!...
she stood there deep in the dark lonely forest looking straight into the moon she was questioning her fate ...she sat there for God knows how many hours kept on looking at the dark sky without even blinking her eyes! why am i doing this to him why? i can't see him in pain! will he be able to live without me will he be? what will happen when he will get to know the truth? will he still love me? yes he will he has to as i did! huhhh...she gave a sigh! aware for what is gonna happen in future! she sat their and stared at the spotless sky till the sun rose!
the next morning...
piya's dress!
uday's dress...!
uday-piya went to karan's house for the fixing the wedding date! they did not talk to each other the whole journey! the wedding date was fixed after exact one month! everyone was over joyed and were pulling the new couple's leg! karan had noticed both piya and uday avoiding each other so he decided to cheer them!
karan asked his brother's son to take uday to the guest room and other hand tina asked her nephew to do the same...tina-karan had planned that once both come face to face they will lock the room behind ,they wanted both to talk and clear all misunderstandings! the children did as they were told to when both piya and uday reached the room tina locked the room ! and karan and tina gave evil smiles to each other 😈
piya was standing next to the window staring at the moon unaware of what was happening at her back! the room was big had to parts the window was on the other side while uday was in the other part where the bed was...he was reading a mail in his phone...the boy had told uday that someone called him and the small girl told the same to piya! uday looked up from the phone in order to see who had called him...he wandered in the room and found piya standing near the window...
uday= cleared his throat ahemm...
piya turned her back and made a confusing face giving a look what-are-u-doing-here? aa...ammm u called me? both piya and uday spoke at the same time..
no again they spoke together!
after a pause of 10 seconds they again spoke together...what r u doing here?
that was all they burst out laughing 🤣
uday= ok ok u speak first 😊
piya= nope u speak first😊
uday= its ok u can say it first...
piya= no u can say
uday= no i said u say na
piya= why shall i who r u to tell me that! jo man ma ata hai krte ho ma phir b nai bolti kal jo tumne kia wo theek tha tina- karan k samne mje apni gf bna liya! ku kia tumne aisa ku bolo! tu nay smj kia rakha hai ma teri tv tu mera remote(dek most famous dialouge i love it) jo dil ma ae ga kre ga! suddenly piya bit her tongue and said o terii! she had realized that she spoke first and once again he won!
uday was well aware of her expressions and eventually his smirk appear 😉
piya was super duper annoyed she glared at him and made her way to leave the room but uday stopped her by holding her wrist!
uday= now don't u want me to answer u?
piya= no let me go!
uday= ok go but can u tell me why u were so jealous yesterday by those hot girls drooling over me, that u came running on the stage! raised his eye brows hmm?
piya= was embarrassed to hell! woo amm...ii..aa...ok i am sorry! but,,,i,,,was,,,not,,,jealous,,,,okkk!!! she said urging on each and every word!😡
uday= 🤣 stop lying sweety u were!😃
piya= no no no no no and no! 😡
uday= yes yes yes yes and yes! 😉
she stomped her feet on the floor and went to the entrance but was surprised that the door was lock from out!😕 hey listen? she called uday who was facing the other wall!
uday= so u agree that u were jealous😛
piya= 😡 stop its not the time to crack jokes look someone has locked the door from outside!
uday= really? 😕 let me see! he tried to move the handle but found it locked he banged on the door but no response!
no one could hear as they were on the 2nd floor and the others were on the ground floor! karan and tina were so busy with the guests that they forgot about the locking scene!
uda-piya=😕😕
piya= ab kia krien mera phone nechay hai tum karan ko call kr k bolo k darwaza kholay!
uday agreed but then...haha😈 he is so evil...now he wanted to tease piya! so he had a great chance!
he looked here and there in the room without letting piya notice his evil expressions...!
piya= kia hua kro na phone...she had seen his phone in his hand kro b!
uday=han,,,o shit!
piya=kia hua ab?
uday= wo..wo battery nai hai cell ma saying this he switched off the phone and showed it to her...see band ho gya no battery! amm😳 now what!
piya= uurrghh! charge nai kr ske thay kia? zra b zimadar nai ho...pta nai ye company ka tumhare sath kia hoga!
uday= to tum bra apna phone lay ae ho sath bari ae mje zimadari sikhane wali!
piya= ok fine...do something!
uday made himself cozy on the bed...lgta hai aj raat aise hi guzarni hogi...waise bhi mje bohat neeend a rahi hai...agr tumhe sona hai to yahan bed par meray sath lait skti ho nai to waha pointing to the sofa han wahan sofa par so jao!
piya= 😲😡 pagal...she said and started banging the door...koi hai kholo darwaza!
uday= ye kia kr rahi ho tum...socho agr koi a b gya to wo hume sath dekh kr kia sochay ga...bolo aik larka or larki akele aik kamre ma wo b raat k wqat ! haww...aise hi bolti ho na tum 😆 zara si b akal nai hai tum ma!
piya= ziada na natak mat kr samjha!😒
uday=ok hum sonay ja rahe hain zra lite off krdo mje lite ma neend nai ati 😉
piya= 😡 ja mar soja she murmured !
uday= kia kaha tumne?
piya= 😃 yuvraj ji ap so jae agr or kuch chaheye to hume bula lijiye ga apne in pairo ko takleef mat dijiye ga! 😡
uday=😆 kitna drama krti ho tum...kahan say seekha?
piya= aik mashwara du? 😛
uday= han han😃
piya=tu na apna intizam agray k pagal khane ma krwa lay(this dialouge belongs to dek it isn't mine but the rest is)..tera achay say ilaj krien gay theek waise jaise tere naam ma salam khan ka kia tha! unka b faida hoga or tera b!
uday= ek shart par?
piya= kia?
uday= yehi ki tum b meray sath ao gi...waise bht maza ae ga do do pagal ikhtay hena sweety?
piya= jao bistar tumhara intizar kr raha hai...
uday= 😉 tum b ajao!
piya=😡 she made her way to sofa and closed her eyes!
uday was lying on the bed while piya was sitting on the sofa thinking how to get out of the room...when suddenly der gaze fell on uday who wasa peacefully sleeping on the bed! he looks so cute sleeping said piya...
piya= ab kia kru yahan say bahar kaise nikalu ye to so gya hai...dekho kitnae aram say so raha hai zra si b fikar nai isko bahar nikalne ki! she glanced at the watch it was 10:00 pm...waht!! 10 its to late let me wake this sleepy head up!
she went near him he was sleeping peacefully she at first did't wanted to wake him up but she had no other way! she saw a wall hanging made with peacock feathers...she took one out and went to him!
piya= 😈 here i go...she put the feather in his ear moving it up and down which made a tickling feeling and he immediately rubbed his ear and face the other side making his back face piya...she sat next to him made her face closer to his and saw that he was still sleeping she did the same thing again...he again rubbed his ear in irritation and pulled the comforter over his face...she slowly peeped in the comforter did the same thing again...now he was fully irritated he abruptly got up rubbed his ear hardly he did not noticed piya next to him... she was giggling 😆 he found piya giggling next to him...glared at her
uday= kia hai...ku mje sonay nai deti still rubbing his ear! 🥱
piya=🤣
uday= what was so funny in that...
piya= some how controlled her laughter and said ...look at ur face..
uday= whats wrong with my face...? checking his face with his hands..
piya= no nothing is wrong just your expressions are so funny...😆 u look so cute when irritated...😆
uday= 😛 coming closer to her really? i look cute 😳
piya= just realized her blunder...(to herself) ye kia keh dia tunay... aa..mm..noo aa..😕
uday= why no u just said write now...😊
piya= no i didn't mean it!
uday= coming very very close making his breath fall on her face says...really..?
piya= y..eeaa!!
uday= ahan..
piya= nodded her head in a yes hmmm...
uday was now lost...he was once again about to kiss her he tilted his face and was almost touching her lips...when suddenly!
BAAAMMM...
karan opened the door...
piya and uday were shocked to see karan and tina standing at the door...they immediately got up and were hell embarrassed
while karan-tina=🤣
tina= ahemm...karan lets go hum nay galat time par entry mar di 😆
karan= sahi kaha...inki shakalien to dekho 😆
piya= i gotta go...bye guys see u tomorrow...saying this she rushed to the door but was stopped by tina..
tina= na na kahan chali jan bacha kr...saza to dono ko milay gi..
uday-piya= saza?
karan= ji bilkul...jo ap dono kr rahe thay agr hamri jga koi or a jata to...bolo?
uday= lekin aya to nahi na...chalo ab hume jane do...ek to pta nai kon lock kr gya hume uper say tum dono dimagh or kharab kr rahe ho...
karan= acha acha jao...lekin aik bat btao pehlay..
uday= kia?
karan= or kuch to nahi na kia😉
uday= 😡 karannn...
piya=😲
tina= bus kro jane do inko aj k liye itna kafi ha😆
piya= ok tina ma chalti hu bye!
karan tina said bye to uday and piya...piya was going when uday stopped her .
piya= what?
uday= dekho raat bohat ho chuki hai tumhara akele jana theek nai hai ma tumhe chor deta hu...come!
piya= its ok ma chali jao gi...waise b mje adat hai so koi bat nai..😊
uday= but...he was about to speak when he got shocked 😲
piya was no where to be seen...how can this happen just few seconds ago she was here in front of me...then suddenly where did she go...how did she disappear so soon! this is weird...he checked all over the place but didn't find her anywhere O MY GOD! is she a...?😲


ok thats all for now! i cant write more! now guys its ur turn to write and my to read...
come on i have used my small brain in all ways hit the like button and leave ur lovely comments !
love u all
zina😊


Edited by zinayrules - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsssmmm zainiii
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
dont tell me piya is a ghost😲


Edited by huma12. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
RES
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SUPERB update
finally pura update mil gaya
ohh
M UV ek kamre me bandh 😆
last line was ...
i hope Piya isnt a ghost
but she is solid so she cant b a ghost r8 ?😕
mayb she is a witch *i hope so*
do cotn soon dear
thanks 4 de PM

Edited by anushruthi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
zainiii yar kahan hai update day day itna tarpana achiii bat nahiii hotiii sweetyyy

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