Forcefully Yours Thread#2 IMPORTANT NOTE pg 143 - Page 91

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Both the updates were smashing

loved them to the core

so beautifully written

loved manveer romance

hmm so sumwhr in his heart UV is feeling

guilty and has developed feelings for Manyata

Wow so finally UV's reason for revenge almost revealed

but i stil hav a bit of confusion

UV thinks Ayaan betrayed his sister

left her ...

But Ayaan's pov him thinking about the two people he loved unconditionally

and irrevocably leaving him

seriously who left whom ?

Did Ayaan leave Unnati or is de other way around

more suspense ...

i will keep thinking

thanks for the amazing updates

Originally posted by: Shahista01

👏

Brilliant, amazing

Fantastic, faboulous

Loved it sarah.

It was written beautifully, love this story of yours

And u gave a double update, thank you so very much

I just did not want it 2 end.

Uday is definitely falling 4 manyata, ufff jealousy when she was talking with rohan

And the party, red roses. she is doing everything 2 annoy him further.

Cherry on top was unnathi's entry and ayaans reaction on seeing her

Priceless, now can not wait 4 story 2 unfold.

Please continue sooon. muuuah. thanks 4 such a fab update.

Originally posted by: sirjee

Waooo wat gr888 piece of work...luvly plzzz continue as i csnt wait to know war ayaan did to unnati n wat will manyata do after finding out bout her bro...

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Yay ... double bonanza. Both updates (collectively) were fabulous👏. Each scene was a delight to read ... all superbly written !!! I loved everything but these scenes were really the high-light for me: 1] the regret manyata felt after being so rude to DaaiMaa. 2] Manyata's choices for the party ... purposely choosing the things Uday wouldn't - JUST TO IRK HIM!!! 3] the hurt Uday felt when Manyata told her age 4] Manveer dance ... & Uday getting carried away with these unknown feelings he's experiencing. 5] THE BEST(est) PART ... Uday's surprise for his saale saheb. That was mind-blowing. I DIDN'T EXPECT UNNATI TO ENTER JUST YET😲!!! I had 1 very huge problem with this update ... DID U HAVE TO END IT THERE😡??? I loved both chapters Dear😳... can't wait for the next part , please continue soon ... ... thanks for the PM😊.

Originally posted by: mimi.maik

sarah these chaps was out of this world... 👏 👏 👏... mindblowing , fantastic , amazing , superb , heart touching , marvelous , fabulous... 🤗 trust me these words are also not enough to describe how intresting the story was... firstly thank you sooo much 4 giving us two thrilling long updates ... when i done reading 15th chap i was sad ... seriously i wanna read more... than when i was liking the chap i find out u update the 16th chap also... and i was in heaven ... by happiness... 😆.. both were super great... manyata is doing really very good job...🤣 of annoying uday...

awww i think uday a bit is falling in love ... hmmm. i love when uday got jealous from rohan ( lovely ). and and and how can i forgot the dance of them... and the way he wipes her tears by his kiss. 4 dance u choosed a very beautiful song..😉 but uday was feeling bad after finding out her age... (ME TOO)..

what i deeply love the most was unnati's entry and the way she hugs manyata and calls her bhabi that was awsum... and over it ayaan's reaction... OH GOD...

overall beautifully , nicely and perfectly written ... keep it up... i m dying by thinking about unnati and ayaan's past... 😭 well i will wait 4 the next update of yours.. plz continue soon.. and thanks 4 the double treat u gave us and 4 the p.m also...love u ❤️

Originally posted by: Priya_SD

Ahhh double update! And they were mind-blowing!

I love the way Manyata is taking charge of her life! And UV seems to be slowly falling for her... Manveer scene was just

And omg... Unnati is finally here! Now this is going to be the real showdown... wonder what will happen when Manyata finds out!

Update soon 😉😃

Originally posted by: saneha85

hi Sarah...

Great work...

i read your both book in one goo...

tough task as i have kaddoos boss & small kid running after me day & night...

but still manage to read your both book in one goo...

i don't have word to decribe your work so this for u

⭐️

👏

and do pm me the next chapter

and yes only one thing i don' like in this FF

why UDay nearly raped MAnayta...

he was my hero and if he want to take revenge that forceful marriage was enough

anyways

Love Smita

Originally posted by: Manveerangel

👏 👏 Awesome 👏 👏
1st of all thx for that special update and
For that sweet surprise 😊 n thats for u 🤗
Now back to the story 😆 😆
The epi was just great
Awww i was wrong about aayan he still
Love her 😭 😭
And the dance part was so nice
Awww poor uday he is acting like a
TEEN 😳😳
i enjoyed the epi so much
So thanks again
And thx for pm
Hey btw will u update on sunday?
And what about ur new ff "illicit love"?

Originally posted by: annesha18

awesomeee

Originally posted by: angelina6

awesome update saira mindblowing
really manyta is upto something
and u brought unati in thats amazing revenge is on mind uday taking reveing from ayan for unatti by hurting manyta
but manyta is not piece of cake she is royal and she is doing all possible things to irritate uday
wonderfull writing saira
update next part soon and thanx for pm