~A Cinderella Story~ |SS| - Page 8

Originally posted by: killerashish

awesum awesum awesum update 👏 👏 👏 great work chotu⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ jai kitni sweet ha na

or cute bi😳manya karan say pyaar krti ha 😆acha jaiveer kay beech may nhn ayay ge😉

ab yeh kis ki shaadi hoi ha 😕manya ya jai ki😉plzzz jai ki shaadi karwana warna maron ge

pakar kay😈 😆 ab jaldi say uday or jai may pyaar krwa dohailaaa jaiveer aik saath ☺️

jai ko aik achi wify banana 😉jo apnay pati ka khyal rakhay😳or komal evil mother😡jai say

kun nafrat krti ha us ka kya kasoor ha😡unnati ko manya ki sachi pata ha isiliay us nay nafrat

krti ha ab jai unnati ki bhabhi ban jaye😳yeh karan wahi a gaya story may😲mujay laga jagat

ho ga chalo koi nai karma ki jodi bi achi ha 😆cont soon chotu🤗muuah love u😉

Originally posted by: Khawaunju

nice concept and nice start 😊 go on n do pm me plz

Originally posted by: CharmingAngel7

Res...
It is awesome, superb... I love it!!!

abi aa k ek mast lambi comment maaroongi... coding kr k lolz *Wink* *ROFL*

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Wow bindaas behna u rocked!!!⭐️ it is so so awesomely written brilliant👏 I really loved reading it... honestly speaking not a fan of JaiVeer😆 love ManVeer😳 but u hve written it so fab that I liked it... and thn its written by u😳 that too for Rozi Rozi nikammi partner😳 so read na krain ho sakta hai kya😉🤗 ...
acha back to SS😆... the start u took was really awesome loved how u told abt J and her feeling the pain and loneliness shes going thru were really well described... the diary was beautifully written😳... Oh Komal isnt good poor J but Manya has a soft corner for her aww she wants to do something for her sis n she knows that J loves Uday n also she loves someone else so I think she has run away herself and left J dressed up as bride.. Lolz the kid and his totli language🤣 good good hehe... i started laughing when the kid came in n said all in his totli language especially when he said chundal se uncle🤣 also I liked the bride lehnga red with touch of purple purple my fav color hehe... Brainwashed haha😆 now that is rightly said I also did the same the show has nothing to do with the SS & took it as a story...
Character sketch is also nicely written.. Karan Wahi😳 casted with Manyata cool... me likey likey😉😆 oh and he and Uday enemies sounds like gonna get some fiesty encounters in future cool 😎😈🤣
oh the cliffhangers hmm interesting to see the reactions of everyone when they see J instead Manya... ofcourse wont b a good one for her as they wont like it especially Uday as he likes Manya only Unnati will b happy one well she'll get someone to support her... gr8 job🤗 I m sure Rozi Roze would hve loved it!!

PS: Ohh it took me so long setting up the comment this coding sucks🤢... so time consuming n annoying.. grr😡.. :( I wanna get a purple font color code... 😭😆

Originally posted by: Manyata5

Good start..

komal as an evil stepmother😈whoa

jayveer y 👎🏼

manveer was much better👍🏼

otherwise it was fabolous👏